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元の翻訳
Today, the package is arrived without trouble.
Thank you very much for your cooperation at this time.
I greatly appreciate you.

The PENTAX that should be sent to you by right is under forwarding from France.↵
But, it has not arrived yet.
As soon as we receive it, we will ship it to you with all haste.
It may take more time.
Is it possible to wait it for a while?

We wait to hear from you. Please respond for this e-mail.
We are very sorry that you have to wait for it due to our mistake.

修正後
Today, the package arrived without trouble.
Thank you very much for your cooperation this time.
We greatly appreciate it.

The PENTAX that we need to send to you is currently being forwarded from France, so it has not arrived in Japan yet.
As soon as we receive it, we will ship it to you with all haste.
It may take more time.
Is it possible for you to wait for it a bit longer?

We look forward to hearing from you. Please respond to this e-mail.
We are very sorry that we have kept you waiting due to our mistake.

元の翻訳
Thank you for purchasing the UK.
The product that you ordered is out of stock unfortunately. We have no clear idea about the arrival of goods.
However, we have similar products such as [A], [B], [C] in stock and we can deliver them to you by the date you indicated. Please check those product information to search following product numbers from page Z.
* You don't have to pay for your order because it is before shipping at this moment.
We can also accept the cancellation of the order.
Best regards.

修正後
Thank you for purchasing the UK.
The product that you have ordered is out of stock at the moment. Furthermore we do not know when they will come in.
However, we have similar products such as [A], [B], [C] in stock and we can deliver them to you by the date you indicated. Please check the above product informations. The information of the products would be located after page [Z] with the following product numbers.
↵
* You do not have to pay for your order because it is before shipping at this moment.
We can also accept the cancellation of the order.
Best regards.

元の翻訳
13 協調
供給者と販売代理店はその製品またはそのプロセスのいずれかの監督をしている適切な政府の機関に、そのごまと販売プロセスの登録をすることに協力するものとする。
14 完全合意
両者はこの契約がすべての合意であり、口頭または別の方法で、さらなる事項あるいは条件がないことに合意する。
15 譲渡
両当時者の書面による事前の合意なしに、両当時者は本契約のすべてまたは一部を他の個人や企業体に譲渡してはならない。ただし、いずれの当事者も事前の合意なしに、本契約に基づくその権利や義務を彼らによって所有または管理している企業体へ譲渡してもよいものとする。

修正後
13 協調
供給者および販売代理店はその製品またはそのプロセスを監督しているいずれかの適切な政府機関に、そのごまおよび販売プロセスの登録をすることに協力するものとする。
14 完全合意事項
両当事者はこの契約がすべての合意事項であり、口頭または別の方法で、さらなる事項または条件がないことに合意する。
15 譲渡
一方の当事者の書面による事前の承諾なしに、両当時者はこの契約のすべてまたは一部を他の個人または企業体に譲渡してはならない。ただし、いずれの当事者も前記承諾なしに、この契約に基づくその権利および義務をその所有または管理している企業体へ譲渡してもよいものとする。