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元の翻訳
As you can see in this picture, one of four wheels has been come off.
Could you let me know estimate of repairing cost and a delivery date.
I'd like to have it done on the same day because I live in Cambodia, but is it possible?

Here is a reply from my boss.
・The fee for internet and TV devices is $70/month for a person.
・Please charge extra $70 on a rent per a resident every month.
・It will be $210 for three residents for a month.

修正後
As you can see in this picture, one of four wheels has come off.
Could you let me know the estimate of repairing cost and a delivery date.
I'd like to have it done on the same day because I live in Cambodia, but is it possible?

Here is the reply from my boss.
・The fee for internet and TV devices is $70/month for a person.
・Please charge extra $70 on a rent per a resident every month.
・It will be $210 for three residents each month.

元の翻訳
先日はメールでのお問い合わせありがとうございました。日本語でお返事できず申し訳ありません。
しかしながら、アカウントの請求額をゼロに変更し、一切請求せずに取引を終了することも可能です。その場合はご連絡ください。

お客様のお役に立てれば光栄です。他にも何かございましたら、セキュリティーメッセージセンターから新たにメッセージを送っていただけると幸いです。

ユニオンバンクをご利用いただきありがとうございます。

修正後
先日はメールでのお問い合わせありがとうございました。日本語でお返事できず申し訳ありません。
しかしながら、アカウントの請求額をゼロに変更し、一切請求せずに取引を終了することも可能です。その場合はご連絡ください。

お客様のお役に立てれば光栄です。他にも何かございましたら、セキュリティーメッセージセンターから新しくメッセージを送っていただけると幸いです。

ユニオンバンクをご利用いただきありがとうございます。

元の翻訳
The old couple who had lived in my neighborhood for 60 years moved to a nursing home. Their house and land were sold to a house builder. As soon as the couple moved out, they started demolish work and their house and land were cleared. I'm recording the process of demolition, building and completion of construction.
A demolish work has been started. It's less than a week after the couple moved out.
The place they have lived for more than 60 years was cleared to a vacant site in a 5 days.
When the arm of a heavy machinery touched the roof, the house was crushed like a paper house.
They made a wall in the center of the land. It seems two houses will be built.

修正後
The old couple who had lived in my neighborhood for 60 years moved to a nursing home. Their house and land were sold to a house builder. As soon as the couple moved out, they started demolish work and their house and land were cleared. I'm recording the process of demolition, building and completion of construction.
A demolish work has been started. It's less than a week after the couple moved out.
The place where they have lived for more than 60 years was cleared to a vacant site in a matter of 5 days.
When the arm of a heavy machinery touched the roof, the house was crushed like a paper house.
They made a wall in the center of the land. It seems two houses will be built.

元の翻訳
オーガニックのローズヒップと小麦麦芽オイルはビタミンを多く含むため、お肌の弾力性を高め、特に乾燥やかゆみのあるお肌に適しています。

みかんや乳香などの妊娠中の使用に推進されている純粋なオイルを特別に調合し素敵な香りをつける事で、シワや傷跡をなめらかにしお肌全体の印象を改善し妊娠線を目立たなくします。

ABC製品は膨らんだお腹をやわらかく弾力のあるままにします。また胸や太もも、お尻、その他のより弾力が必要な部分に使う事ができます。

妊娠中に妊娠による影響を最小限に抑えるために作られた数ある製品の中で最初にお客様のお肌にお使いいただきたい商品です。

修正後
オーガニックのローズヒップとウィートジャーム（小麦麦芽）オイルはビタミンを多く含むため、お肌の弾力性を高め、特に乾燥やかゆみのあるお肌に適しています。

マンダリンやタンジェリン、乳香などの妊娠中の使用に推進されている純粋な精油（エッセンシャルオイル）を特別に調合し素敵な香りをつけたこのオイルは、シワや傷跡をなめらかにしお肌全体の印象を改善し妊娠線を目立たなくします。

ABC製品は膨らんだお腹をやわらかく弾力のあるままにします。また胸や太もも、お尻、その他のより引き締めが必要な部分に使う事ができます。

数あるピュア・プレグナンシー商品のなかで、妊娠による体への影響を最小限に抑えるために作られた、最初にお客様のお肌にお使いいただきたい商品です。↵

元の翻訳
Please let me know how to deliver FBA goods.

I've read Q & A below, but

When we deliver goods to your warehouse directly from overseas, is it possible to make our partner here as an importer and your warehouse as a recipient with duties and other taxes prepaid?

I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

修正後
Please let me know how to deliver FBA goods.

I've read Q & A below, but since there is one thing I can't understand, please let me know about following.

When we deliver goods to your warehouse directly from overseas, is it possible to make our partner there as an importer and your warehouse as a recipient with duties and other taxes prepaid?

I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

元の翻訳
Japanese DVDs are expensive because of the business model which they cover their cost to make a movie by animation DVD. ○ DVD will be around 10,000 yen with special feauture, though I hope it will be cheaper. Can you play Blu-ray on your laptop? That's great! I only can play Blu-ray on PS3. It will be good if you can see region-free version of ○ with your laptop.
I'm happy to watch ○ in a big screen, but little bit shame because I probably watch it by myself.

修正後
Japanese DVDs are expensive because of the business model by which they cover their cost to make a movie by animation DVD. ○ DVD will be around 10,000 yen with some special feautures, though I hope it will be cheaper. Can you replay Blu-ray on your laptop? That's great! I only can replay Blu-ray on PS3. It will be good if you can see region-free version of ○ with your laptop.
I'm happy to watch ○ on a big screen, but it's a shame little bit because I probably watch it alone.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your business with us.
I've checked the bill of paypal, and saw the prices of the two items were $10 more than the ones on the list.
The list says that $75 for A and $130 for B.
This is a big difference, so please check it out.

修正後
Thank you for your business with us.
I checked the bill of paypal and saw the prices of the two items were $10 more than those on the list.
The list said $75 for A and $130 for B.
This is a big difference, so please check it out.

元の翻訳
いくらか返金させて頂くのが一番簡単な方法でしょう。この様なことは予想されますので、イラク行きのツアーが２件とアフガニスタン行きを１件担当しましたが、旅行の際は常に準備しておりました。返金額はどのくらいをご希望でしょうか。１５ドルでいかがでしょうか。ご連絡をお待ちしています。

修正後
いろいろと勘案すると、いくらか返金させて頂くのが一番簡単な方法でしょう。この様なことは予想されますので、イラク行きのツアーが２件とアフガニスタン行きを１件担当しましたが、旅行の際は常に携帯しておりました。いくらご返金すればご納得いただけますか？　１５ドルでいかがでしょうか。ご連絡をお待ちしています。