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元の翻訳
Today, i already receive the recorder you sent to me,it is not the same title written on eBay, Jacket was not Wide Spine. I wanted to get Wide Spine,i had my bid accepted because of its price is higher than the market.About other conditions, there was no bid different from the explanation on eBay. you can get 25 pounds at this record.Please refund to me the difference. I think that it is better to ask you about the valuation of eBay so i already contacted to you. So i'm looking forward to hearing from you soon

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Today, i already receive the record you sent to me, it is not the same title written on eBay, Jacket was not Wide Spine. Because I wanted to get Wide Spine, i accepted higher price than the market. About other conditions, there was no big different from the explanation on eBay. But you can get this record at 25 pounds. Please refund to me the difference. I think that it is better to ask you before the valuation of eBay so i contacted to you. I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.

I would like to inform you about the shipped item.
I have received an email from amazon.jp that there will be delay of arrival of steel book.

The arrival of steel book will be around 20th Oct, so that you can't received the item by the
time we informed you before.
I am so sorry for the delay.

We can send a DVD box anytime, so please let me know if you need it,

Thank you.

修正後
Thank you for contacting me.

I would like to inform you about the shipped item.
I have received an email from amazon.jp that there would be delay of arrival of steel book.

The arrival of steel book will be around 20th Oct, so that you can't received the item by the
time we informed you before.
I am so sorry for the delay.

We can send a DVD box anytime, so please let me know if you need it immediately.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Will you possible to go on the stage with playing the music A? On the atmospherics, will you possible to do a short setting of the music with him other than the music B? Can you kindly let me know what he is acting recently? We really woud like you to visit Japan in ○, however we are now seeking how will media behave due to the golden week holidays. If I can visit to Japan, I will prefer to be on a radio channel as well as an event with fans. Will this no problem with you? How many staffs in total will be, if I visit Japan? In a case, ○ does not work for my visiting Japan, will ○ be possible to be shceudled ? Will you directly come to Japan from Paris?

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Will you possible to go on the stage with playing the music A? On the atmospherics, will you possible to do a short setting of the music with him other than the music B? Can you kindly let me know what he is acting recently? We really woud like you to visit Japan in ○, however we are now seeking how will media behave due to the golden week holidays. If you can visit to Japan, I want you to be on a radio channel as well as an event with fans. Will this be no problem with you? How many staffs in total will be, if you visit Japan? If it's difficult to come to Japan in ○, will ○ be possible to be shceudled ? Will you directly come to Japan from Paris?