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Hello.

I am writing you regarding the price.

May I purchase an item by your company at the price $** including shipping cost?

If the discount is available, I will pay you via PayPal within 24 hours.

If you could give me an discount, I would like to purchase your items again.

Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you.

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Hello.

I am writing you regarding the price.

May I purchase an item by your company at the price $** including shipping cost?

If the discount is available, I will pay you via PayPal within 24 hours.

If you could give me a discount, I would like to purchase your items again.

Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
When I purchased the item, I touched it and checkd it throughly.
I am certain about it because both the store specialized the item and I checked it.

When I purchased it, I didn't see any dent.
Is there a large dent?

I believe you so you don't need to upload a video on YouTube.

How would you like to be handled it?
Please let me know if you like to cancel this order or if you like to replace it with a new one?

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When I purchased the item, I touched it and checkd it throughly.
I am certain about it because both the store specialized the item and I checked it.

When I purchased it, I didn't see any dent.
Is there a large dent?

I believe you so you don't need to upload a video on YouTube.

How would you like to be handled it?
Please let me know what you would like.

元の翻訳
If possible, can we set the price higher than MAPprice the same as the sales domestically? We are a small company. However, we would like to maintain great relationship with you and we would like to grow together.

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If possible, can we set the price higher than MAPprice the same as the sales domestically? We are a small company. However, we would like to maintain a great relationship with you and we would like to grow together.

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As for ④, I created the second account in order to maintain second hand items and brand new items.

■ Issues
As for the above issues, ①～③, we have learned and checked 262 issues one by one.
All AtZ negative reviews are because of the cancellations by the seller.
I have sent all customers emails of our apologies with the reasons by explaining the cancellations and our commitments to prevent such an issue in the future from the bottom of my heart.

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As for ④, I created the second account in order to maintain second hand items and brand new items separately.

■ Issues
As for the above issues, ①～③, we have learned and checked 262 issues one by one.
All AtoZ negative reviews are because of the cancellations by the seller.
I have sent all customers emails of our apologies with the reasons by explaining the cancellations and our commitments to prevent such an issue in the future from the bottom of my heart.

元の翻訳
This is regarding the case that an item has been returned from you company from the U.S. to our company because the US custom didn't approve it.

We have requested to send it to our address in Japan the other day, however, we would like to cancel the items which have been returned this time.

A reason is that it has taken for a long time to receive it and the amount is large so it is difficult of us to handle at this time.

As soon as you receive the items and confirmed returned items, please refund us all as soon as possible.

We will take care of the shipping cost to the U.S. So please deduct it from the total refunded amount and refund it. Thank you.

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This is regarding the case that an item has been returned from you company from the U.S. to our company because the US custom didn't approve it.

We have requested to send it to our address in Japan the other day, however, we would like to cancel the items which have been returned this time.

A reason is that it has taken for a long time to receive it and the amount is large so it is difficult of us to handle at this time.

As soon as you receive and confirm returned items, please refund us all as soon as possible.

We will take care of the shipping cost to the U.S. So please deduct it from the total amount and refund it. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Did you pay individually as a guest without using warrantee amount for your accommodation?
Was the only change Koizumi was not staying at the hotel?
If there is any extended stay, please let us know.
We have received an invoice for 44 breakfast tickets. But we confirmed that it was 44 breakfast tickets.
We would like to check the number of breakfast tickets so please send us the detailed statement for the accommodation.
(The name of guests, number of stay, anything else indicates the amounts)

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Did you pay individually as a guest without using warrantee amount for your accommodation?
Was the only change Koizumi who did not stay at the hotel?
If you would like to extend your stay, please let us know.
We have received an invoice for 44 breakfast tickets. But we confirmed that it was 44 breakfast tickets.
We would like to check the number of breakfast tickets so please send us the detailed statement for the accommodation.
(The name of guests, number of stay, anything else indicates the amounts)

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you for your reply.
I am glad to hear that the item arrived safely.
Regarding the payment, I will contact an ebay customer service rep. in the early next week.
Then, I will reply to you as soon as I hear back from them.
Thank you again for contacting us this time.

This time, we will be delivering an item for a left handed person.
We confirmed it.
Sp please don't worry about it.

We understood it.
So we would like to take care of the cancellation.
I will contact an eBay's customer service in the earlier next week.
Then, I will reply to you as soon as we hear back from them.

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Hello.
Thank you for your reply.
I am glad to hear that the item arrived safely.
Regarding the payment, I will contact an ebay customer service rep. in the early next week.
Then, I will reply to you as soon as I hear back from them.
Thank you again for contacting us this time.

This time, we will be delivering an item for a left handed person.
We confirmed it.
So please don't worry about it.

We understood it.
So we would like to take care of the cancellation.
I will contact an eBay's customer service in the earlier next week.
Then, I will reply to you as soon as we hear back from them.

元の翻訳
We transferred from Los Angels International Airport by car and stayed here for one night.
The hosts wee very kind and explained about the use of their space in detail. I used AB for the first time but I was very eased about it. The room was big enough for three people. Also beers and cokes in their fridge were all complementary! The beds and sheets were all clean and we had no issues.
If I ever visit LA again, I would like to stay there again. If you visit LA and need a place to stay, I highly recommend the place.

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We transferred from Los Angels International Airport by car and stayed here for one night.
The hosts wee very kind and explained the use of their space in detail. It was my first time using AB, but I was very eased about it. The room was big enough for three people. Also the beers and cokes in their fridge were all complementary! The beds and sheets were all clean and we had no issues.
If I ever visit LA again, I would like to stay there again. If you visit LA and need a place to stay, I highly recommend this place.

元の翻訳
The status indicates it is still located in your country. I contacted EMS service company in Japan and requested for researching the issue. However, they are closed today so I haven't received a reply from them, yet. We haven't set for special delivery or options. Please note there is not such an option on EMS service. The terms of storing the item are based on the rules and regulations in your country. Again, thank you for your continuos patience in this matter. I am also waiting for their reply. I am also very worried about it. Please let me know how long it has been past since you has shipped it. Please refer the following.

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The status indicates it is still in your country. I contacted EMS in Japan and asked them to research the issue. However, they are closed today so I haven't received a reply from them, yet. We haven't asked for special delivery options. Please note that EMS has no such an option. The terms of holding the item are based on the rules and regulations in your country. Again, thank you for your continuous patience in this matter. I am also waiting for their reply. I am also very worried about it. Please let me know how many days have passed since you shipped it. Please refer to the following.

元の翻訳
We have received messages regarding a refund from the purchaser many times. I have informed the purchaser a few times that I have immediately refunded for this transaction and Amazon is working on it. However, the purchaser claims that he hasn't received a refund, yet.
I have received an email from Amazon regarding the refund and confirmed online that the refund has been completed.
Would you look into it and explain the detail to the purchaser? It is relatively high amount of transaction （720.44USD). So if the purchaser hasn't received a refund, I totally understand his concerns.

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We have received messages regarding a refund from the purchaser many times. I have informed the purchaser a few times that I correctly carried out the refund procedure for this product[item] and that Amazon should already have completed the refund. However, the purchaser insists that he hasn't received a refund yet.
I received an email from Amazon informing me of the *start* of the refund procedure, and one can check the [account] management screen and see that the refund has been completed.
Would you look into it and explain the detail to the purchaser? It is relatively high amount of transaction （720.44 USD). So if the purchaser hasn't received a refund, I totally understand his concerns.

元の翻訳
私のPaypalアカウントの方に送付していただけけましたら幸いです。

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私のPaypalアカウントの方に送付していただけましたら幸いです。

元の翻訳
I am interested in the product A.
Is your product truly the product A?
Is it possible you may be confused with the product B?
If it is the product A, I am thinking to purchase it.
I look forward to your reply.

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I am interested in item A.
Is your item truly product A?
Could it be possible that you might have mixed it up with item B?
If it is item A, I am thinking about purchasing it.
I look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
There was a delivery issue at Amazon Europe.
We apologize for any trouble at Amazon Europe.
We haven't received eviews from our customers. So we are writing to you. We have 9 good reviews now, which is about twice than the last time I sent you an mai.
We are expecting to receive reviews from our customers as soon as their items are delivered to them.

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There was a delivery issue at Amazon Europe.
We apologize for any inconvenience caused to Amazon Europe.
We are writing to you because we have saved up a certain amount of customer feedback. We have 9 good reviews now, which is about twice the the amount we had during the last email.
We are expecting to continuously receive reviews from our customers as soon as their items are delivered to them.

元の翻訳
I ordered 30 ◯◯. However, I've received only two ◯◯ from amazon.com.

Why did I receive only two from amazon.com and not from you?

It's been already for three weeks past since I've ordered ◯◯.

I can no longer wait for it.

Please advise the exact date of the shipment of ◯◯.

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I ordered 30 ◯◯. However, I've received only two ◯◯ from Amazon.com.

Why did I receive only two from Amazon.com and not from you?

It's been already three weeks since I ordered ◯◯.

I can no longer wait for them.

Please advise the exact date of the shipment.

元の翻訳
As I explained to you many times, the product is exactly as described.
If you are not happy with it, please return it. It's not necessary for you to consider my convenience.
Although you say you have no time, you have kept emailing us long messages every day. So we assume you should have time to ship it back to us. It's not fair to us to request for refund by saying us you would leave us a bad feedback if we don't agree with you. We are asking you to return the item first. But you are insisting to leave a bad feedback if we don't agree with you. It is a very childish behavior. I think you would only like to get $75 from me.

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As I have explained to you many times, the product is exactly as described.
If you are not happy with it, please return it. It's not necessary for you to consider my convenience.
Although you say you have no time, you have kept emailing us long messages every day. So we assume you should have time to ship it back to us. It's not fair to us for you to request a refund by saying that you would leave us a bad feedback if we don't agree with you. We are telling you that you can return the product if you wish. But you are insisting to leave a bad feedback if we don't agree with you. It is a very childish behavior. I think you would only like to get the $75 from me.

元の翻訳
As I explained to you many times, the product is exactly as described.
If you are not happy with it, please return it. It's not necessary for you to consider my convenience.
Although you say you have no time, you have kept emailing us long messages every day. So we assume you should have time to ship it back to us. It's not fair to us to request for refund by saying us you would leave us a bad feedback if we don't agree with you. We are asking you to return the item first. But you are insisting to leave a bad feedback if we don't agree with you. It is a very childish behavior. I think you would only like to get $75 from me.

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As I explained to you many times, the product is exactly as described.
If you are not happy with it, please return it. It's not necessary for you to consider my convenience.
Although you said you have no time, you have kept emailing me long messages every day. So I assume you should have had time to ship the item back to me. It's against the rule to request a refund by saying that you would leave me a bad feedback. I am asking you to return the item first. But you are insisting to leave a bad feedback if I don't agree with you. It is a very childish behavior. I think you just only want to get $75 from me.

元の翻訳
As I explained to you many times, the product is exactly as described.
If you are not happy with it, please return it. It's not necessary for you to consider my convenience.
Although you say you have no time, you have kept emailing us long messages every day. So we assume you should have time to ship it back to us. It's not fair to us to request for refund by saying us you would leave us a bad feedback if we don't agree with you. We are asking you to return the item first. But you are insisting to leave a bad feedback if we don't agree with you. It is a very childish behavior. I think you would only like to get $75 from me.

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As I explained to you many times, the product is exactly as described.
If you are not happy with it, please return it. It's not necessary for you to consider my convenience.
Although you say you have no time, you have kept emailing us long messages every day. So we assume you should have time to ship it back to us. It's not fair to us to request for refund by saying to us that you would leave us a bad feedback if we don't agree with you. We are asking you to return the item first. But you are insisting on leaving a bad feedback if we don't agree each other. It is a very childish behavior. I think you would only like to get $75 from me.

元の翻訳
We look forward to hearing from you regarding the technique points during your editing.

3. Sound: After filming, sound should be edited.
If you're unable to edit it by yourself, we will help you on 9/22 (Sun) when we check your progress.
Here are some methods how to create sound:
- When you take pictures at the site, please record sound as well, it will a good material to use. If you cannot record it, it's no problem.
- Hand crapping, narration, musical performance or music can be created for each image.

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We look forward to hearing from you regarding the technique points during your editing.

3. Sound: After filming, sound should be edited.
If you're unable to edit it by yourself, we will help you on 9/22 (Sun) when we check your progress.
Here are some methods how to create sound:
- When you take pictures at the site, please record sound as well for they will be good materials. However, If you cannot record it, it's no problem.
- Hand clapping, narration, musical performance or music can be created for each image.

元の翻訳
I understand what you mean. I think the weight should be approximately 3kg for this order. If we ship an item weighs 3kg, e-packet is a little cheaper than EMS. However, insurance is limited to apply up to $60 if we use e-packet. But if you use EMS, you can insure your item more than $60 if you pay additional fee for insurance. I can take care of the additional fee for insurance. Also please note that it takes 3-4 days to receive it if you use EMS, while it takes 10-14 days if you use e-packet. I will be more than happy to help you with any choice you make.

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I understand what you mean. I think the weight should be approximately 3kg for this order. If we ship an item weighs 3kg, e-packet is a little cheaper than EMS. However, the insurance is limited to only $60 if we use e-packet. But if you use EMS, you can insure your item more than $60 if you pay additional fee for insurance. I can take care of the additional fee for insurance. Also it only takes 3-4 days to deliver it if you use EMS, while it takes 10-14 days if you use e-packet. I will be happy to help you with any choice you make.

元の翻訳
Hello, it has been for a while since I wrote you last time.
In fact, I was hospitalized for a surgery by very recently...it's getting better, so I have been discharged a few days ago.
I want to go back to work soon (smile) ○○, your work must be so hard so please take it easy and take care of yourself!

I would like to start the work of Raptor body within this month.
My wife showed me a picture of racing on Facebook when I was in the hospital so it was so encouraging for me~
Wish you the best with your race!!!

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Hello, it has been for a while since I wrote to you last time.
In fact, I was hospitalized for a surgery until very recently...it's getting better, so I have been discharged a few days ago.
I want to go back to work soon (smile) ○○, your work must be so hard so please take it easy and take care of yourself!

I would like to start my work on the Raptor body during this month.
My wife showed me a picture of you racing on Facebook when I was in the hospital so it was so encouraging for me~
Wish you the best with your race!!!