Karen Cornish (karekora) — 付けたレビュー

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Thank you for your kind reply.
We are one of Japanese corporations and do not have the EORI.
Is the EORI always necessary for going through the customs?
We shipped 2 freights to France the other day, but we do not have any problem at customs.
We are to register EORI the next week if the EORI is always necessary.
We have some questions for the other thing.
We would like to have SAD documents in terms of the freights to France.
Can we ask you to give us SAD?

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Thank you for your kind reply.
We are a Japanese corporation and do not have the EORI.
Is EORI always necessary for customs?
We shipped 2 freights to France the other day; we didn’t have any problems with customs.
We will register for EORI next week if required.
We have another query regarding something separate from this.
We would like to have SAD documents for freights to France.
Can we ask you to give us SAD?

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1 I am writing to you for the first time!
Thank you for listing the items that I am interested in.
As I will purchase 2 sets of 〇, so would you make it 1 pcs at 140＄, which is 280＄ altogether?
Would it be possible to ship altogether at 50＄ to Japan, please?
I appreciate your further consideration.
2 Thank you for your consideration.
If you change your mind, please let me know.
With regards.

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1 Nice to meet you!
Thank you for listing the items that I am interested in.
As I will purchase 2 sets of 〇, could you make 1 pcs at $140; $280 altogether?
Would it be possible to ship everything to Japan together for $50?
I appreciate your further consideration.↵

2 Thank you for your consideration.
If you change your mind, please let me know.
With regards.

元の翻訳
I set the shipping address to Japan and clicked the 'request total' button
After that, I paid the invoice sent from eBay.
The delivery address in that invoice is Japan.
I changed my primary address after that.
It's strange that you asked me to pay an extra GBP60 to ship to Japan.
But if it's that expensive to ship to Japan, then just ship it to Germany.

I've paid ￡14.84, so if I pay the remaining ￡27.11 will you ship it to Japan?

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I set the shipping address to Japan and clicked the 'request total' button.
After that, I paid the invoice sent from eBay.
The delivery address in that invoice is Japan.
I changed my primary address after that.
It's strange that you ask for an extra GBP60 to ship to Japan.
But if it's that expensive to ship to Japan, then just ship it to Germany.

I've paid £14.84, so if I pay the remaining £27.11 will you ship it to Japan?

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Hello everyone!
My online lecture will be held on November 28 at 18 o'clock in Japan time hosted by OO.
There are simultaneous English interpreters, and sometimes Korean and Chinese interpreters. It seems that people from any country can participate, so please take this opportunity.
I look forward to seeing you all.
You can apply from the following URL.
Also, this is the URL of the host OO.
Thank you and best regards.

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Hello everyone!
My online lecture; hosted by OO, will be held on November 28 at 6 o'clock Japan time.
There are simultaneous English interpreters, and sometimes also Korean and Chinese. Anyone from around the world can participate – don’t miss this opportunity!
I look forward to seeing you all.
You can apply via the following URL.
Also, this is the URL of the host.
Thank you and best regards.

元の翻訳
I have a question about the FBA shipment written above.
I sent 39 items of FBA15CSJN01T, but I received 74 at the warehouse.
Furthermore, I sent 37 items of FBA15CSDMYR9, but I received 62 at the warehouse.
I received a lot more goods than I sent. I guess the extra items are from other sellers.
Amazon pointed out that there were mistakes in the number of sent items, and I already got penalized.
If these extra items sell, will the sales money be mine?
Will Amazon re-correct the number of the items later?

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I have a question about the FBA shipment written above.
I sent 39 items of FBA15CSJN01T, but I received 74 at the warehouse.
Furthermore, I sent 37 items of FBA15CSDMYR9, but I received 62 at the warehouse.
I received a lot more goods than I sent. I guess the extra items are from other sellers.
Amazon pointed out that there were mistakes in the number of sent items, and I have already received a penalty.
If these extra items sell, will the sales money be mine?
Will Amazon re-correct the number of the items later?

元の翻訳
I have a question about the above FBA delivery.
For FBA15CSJN01T, I sent 39 pieces, but I received 74 pieces at the warehouse.
For FBA15CSDMYR9, I sent 37 pieces and I received 62 pieces at the warehouse.
The number of items received is much larger than the number of items I sent, and I think it is probably another seller's items.
Amazon pointed out that there was an error in the number of shipments and I have already received a penalty.
If these extra items are sold, will the proceeds from sale be mine?
Is there any possibility that Amazon will correct the number of items later?

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I have a question about the above FBA delivery.
For FBA15CSJN01T, I sent 39 pieces, but I received 74 pieces at the warehouse.
For FBA15CSDMYR9, I sent 37 pieces and I received 62 pieces at the warehouse.
The number of items received is much larger than the number of items I sent, so I think they are probably for another seller.
Amazon pointed out that there was an error in the number of shipments and I have already received a penalty.
If these extra items are sold, will the proceeds from sale be mine?
Is there any possibility that Amazon will correct the number of items later?

元の翻訳
Next, prioritize those with "large budgets" but "distant order dates.
→Nurture the inquiries in collaboration with the inside sales team. When the time to place an order is near, we will ask you to set up a meeting.

At the end of the process, we will start working on the ones that do not have a large budget and are far away from the time of order.
→We consult with the team to see if we should work on it as a sales team in the first place. If you decide that you should not work on it, ask the marketing team to nurse it to a larger budget and closer to the time of order through the influx of email newsletters and events.

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Next, prioritize those with "large budgets" but "distant order dates”.
→Nurture inquiries in collaboration with the inside sales team. When the time to place an order is approaching, we will ask you to set up a meeting.

At the end of the process, we will start working on the ones that do not have a large budget and are far away from the time of order.
→We consult with the team to see if we should initially work as a sales team. If you decide that you should not work on it, please ask the marketing team to nurse it to a larger budget and closer to the time of order through the influx of email newsletters and events.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
Although I would like to proceed with ordering, what do I have to do after this?
Once confirmed the order status, it says “Pending Fulfillment”, would it be a proper status for completing the order and waiting ready for shipping, right?
I am waiting for your reply again soon.

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Thank you for your reply.
I would like to proceed with ordering, what do I have to do now?
I looked up the order status, it says “Pending Fulfillment”. Should I assume this status usually refers to completing the order and awaiting shipment?
I’ll await your reply.

元の翻訳
(1) Please tell us if the music box plays without any problem.

(2) Are you able to ship the products I bought a few days ago together with this product if I win the bid?
Please advise me if the shipping cost I already paid is enough to cover the both products?
Do I have to pay for the additional shipping cost?

(3) Please pack it well.
Please let me know the additional shipping cost.

4) I bought this at a concert hall.
I noticed that a small damage was on the product when I bought.
I noticed that there is a letter missing on the new T-shirts I bought .

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(1) Please tell us if the music box plays without problem.

(2) Are you able to ship the products I bought a few days ago together with this product if I win the bid?
Please advise me if the shipping cost already paid is enough to cover both products?
Do I have to pay any additional shipping costs?

(3) Please pack it well.
Please let me know any additional shipping costs.

4) I bought this at the concert hall.
I noticed some small damage to the product after buying it.
I noticed that there is a letter missing on the new t-shirts I bought.

元の翻訳
Let's take a look at example sentences.
When you express that the temperature is cold,
you can use the word ”cold” as "The rain is cold" or "I’d like to drink something cold."
In this case, the antonym is "hot" or "warm".
And when you express personality or attitude is cold, ↵
you can use it as "I am cold-hearted" or "He gave me the cold shoulder."
In this case, the antonym is "warm" or "gentle".
Please review at ease while having something cold to drink.
That's all for today. See you next time.

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Let's take a look at an example sentence.
When you want to express that the temperature is cold,
you can use the word ”cold”; for example, “The rain is cold" or "I’d like to drink something cold."
In this case, antonyms are “hot" or "warm".
When you want to express the idea that someone’s personality or attitude is cold, you can also use “cold”; for example, “I am cold-hearted" or "He gave me the cold shoulder."
In this case, antonyms are “warm" or "gentle".
Please review this at ease while having something cold to drink.
That's all for today. See you next time.

元の翻訳
It's been a long time. How are you?
I have something to consult with you.
I have been looking for "Aster kit", but I cannot find it. So I looked for a similar kit.
Is "Amelie by Sandy Faber" available?
The kit on the left in the attached photo.
The "Aster" you made before is very cute, so I want you to make it in the similar way.
If possible, how much would it be including shipping fee to Japan?

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It's been a long time! How are you?
I have something I’d like to discuss with you.
I have been looking for an "Aster kit", but I haven’t been able to find it. I am looking for a similar kit instead.
Is "Amelie by Sandy Faber" available?
I refer to the kit on the left in the attached photo.
The "Aster" you made before is very cute, so I want you to make it in a similar way.
If possible, how much would this be including the shipping fee to Japan?

元の翻訳
The mail that was delivered this time doesn't include the submission form.
They won't accept it for the grading if this situation goes on.
I am very sorry.
I just made the submission form for three cases, and attach them in the service.
If the submission is completed, please disregard the documents.
If you have any confirmation, please kindly let me know by e-mail.
Thank you for your continuous support.

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The mail that was delivered this time doesn't include the submission form.
They won't accept it for grading if this situation continues.
I am very sorry.
I have just made the submission form for three cases and attached them to the service.
If submission is complete, please disregard the documents.
If you have any queries, please kindly let me know by e-mail.
Thank you for your continued support.

元の翻訳
Replace the printer with a new one.
Change the ink to a product with low water content and less likely to leaking or oozing.
After printing, labels are not used for delivery until at least one hour has passed.
A three-person team checks the labels for quality issue.

1st person Visual check of printed labels
2nd person Visual check by label attaching staff
3rd person Visual check by the person in charge of placing the product in the delivery box

7. All the problems have been corrected for the deliveries made after today.

We apologize for the inconvenience caused by this issue.
We will be very careful not to cause this kind of situation in the future.

Excuse me.

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Replace the printer with a new one.
Change the ink to a product with low water content less likely to leak or ooze out.
Labels are not used for delivery until at least one hour has passed since printing.
A three-person team checks the labels for quality.

1st person: Visual check of printed labels
2nd person: Visual check by label attaching staff
3rd person: Visual check by the person in charge of placing the product in the delivery box

7. All the problems have been corrected for the deliveries made after today.

We apologize for the inconvenience caused by this issue.
We will be very careful not to cause this kind of situation again.

Kind regards

元の翻訳
Dear who may in concern.
Would you Please reissue C79.
I had requested a reissue of C79 last month, ↵
but it has not done yet,
I'm sorry to bother you at such a busy time, ↵
I really appreciate that for your cooperation.

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To whom it may concern
Could you please reissue C79?
I had requested a reissue of C79 last month, however it has not been done yet.
Apologies for the inconvenience during such a busy time. I really appreciate that for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
thank you for telling me about the audit.
to resolve the audlt, I want to accept your company‘'s service.
instead of me please proceed the response to HM RC.
please accept it, thank you.

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Thank you for telling me about the audit.
To resolve the audlt, I want to accept your company‘s service.
Please proceed by liaising with HMRC on my behalf.
Thank you.

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I will buy one. By the way, I have bought some posters from you about 10 years ago. Do you remember me?
If you have any posters of the 70s that you can sell to me besides 〇〇, please let me know. If there are any that I like, I will buy them together with 〇〇.

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I will buy one. By the way, I bought some posters from you about 10 years ago. Do you remember me?
If you have any other posters of the 70s to sell besides 〇〇, please let me know. I will buy the ones I like alongside 〇〇.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I would like to change into 〇〇 account directly, not to STEAM account.
Would you please change it?
The current account is 〇〇, and plays ▽▽.

The name of the current account is □□, and I would like to change into ☆☆.
Would you please change it, too?

Thank you.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I would like to change to a 〇〇 account directly, rather than a STEAM account.
Could you please do this?
The current account is 〇〇, and plays ▽▽.

The name of the current account is □□, and I would like to change this to ☆☆.
Could you please change this, too?

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for purchasing a book from my store this time.
I'm very sorry, but the book you purchased gets out of stock.
Please let me check below things.
If it is a used book, I can send it to you right away.
In that case, we can give you a discount.
Or we can order the book for you and you will have to wait for it.
In some cases, we can't order the book from anywhere, in that case we will give you a full refund.
Of course, you can cancel your order.
We apologize for the inconvenience. and we look forward to your reply!

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Thank you for purchasing a book from my store on this occasion.
I'm very sorry, but the book you purchased is currently out of stock.
Please allow me to check a couple of things -
if it is a used book, I can send it right away.
In this case, we can provide a discount.
Alternatively, we can order the book for you, however this will take some time.
If we are unable to order the book, we will give you a full refund.
Of course, you can also cancel your order should you wish.
We apologize for the inconvenience and we look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
This invoice is created by WEB shopping tool of fedex and it will be out put as PDF.
I tried to convert it to MSdata using this PDF tool, but deformation is too severe to use.

You can shipping it using [invoice.pdf] at this time.

It would be help if you prepare original invoice for the next time.
There are no formatting rules, but please take a look template as follows and INVOICE of my client about items mention

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This invoice is created by FedEx’s web shopping tool and will be output as a PDF.
I tried to convert it to MSdata using the PDF tools, but it gets too different to use.

On this occasion, you can ship it using [invoice.pdf].

It would be helpful if you could prepare the original invoice next time.
There are no formatting rules, but please take a look at the following template and client invoice regarding mentioned items.

元の翻訳
①I am interested in purchasing 〇〇〇 at your page on Amazon.com. It would be appreciated if you could offer about 12 USD for this item. In order to purchase it at 12 USD, kindly advise me how many items we should order.
Hopefully our purchasing amount and your preferred price can match, so that we will be able to order officially.

③As it is our first time business with you, if our sales goes well, we would like to order more items to you.
We are interested in purchasing hundreds of items if your items are sold successfully.
Prior to this, would you please advise me your special rates for 10 / 30/ 50 orders each.

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①I am interested in purchasing 〇〇〇 on your Amazon.com page. It would be appreciated if you could sell this for about 12 USD. In order to purchase it at 12 USD, kindly advise me how many items we should order.
Hopefully our purchasing amount and your preferred price can match, so that we will be able to order officially.

③It is our first time doing business with you, so if our sales go well, we would like to order more items from you in the future.
We are interested in purchasing hundreds of your items if your items are sold successfully.
Prior to this, would you please advise me of your special rates for 10 / 30 / 50 orders each.

元の翻訳
We cannot wait for your because there are other parties for the morning tour.
We are afraid that tour for the afternoon will also be fully booked.
Did you get the bus on board already?
For your note, we will have a availability for our afternoon tour for tomorrow.
What do you think ?

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We cannot wait for you because there are other parties for the morning tour.
We are afraid that the afternoon tour is also fully booked.
Did you get on the bus already?
For your information – we will have availability in tomorrow’s afternoon tour.
What do you think ?