Hiroya Miura (juemon1) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
All the items are unopened. Ayrton Senna 1/8 original figure, DVD, mouse pad also included.

Almost all the items are unopened, but there are just a few numbers that have been opened. There is a damage on the box especially for number 55. (All the contents have never been used so they are safe)

There is a slight damage on the box.
The box has been opened but the figure(doll) is fixed permanently, and the furnishings are packaged as is and have not been used.

I want to do business with you by all means.
Are you buying all of my products? Therefore, I would be taking off $10 for one product.
I might give you more discounts starting the next transactions. If you would want for me to trust you then I hope that you can buy one first.

修正後
All the items are unopened. Ayrton Senna 1/8 original figure, DVD, mouse pad also included.

Almost all the items are unopened, but there are just a few numbers that have been opened. There is a damage on the box especially for number 55. (All the contents have never been used so they are safe)

There is a slight damage on the box.
The box has been opened but the figure(doll) is fixed permanently, and the furnishings are packaged as is and have not been used.

I want to do business with you by all means.
Are you buying all of my products? If so, I would be taking off $10 for one product.
I might give you more discounts starting the next transactions. If you would want me to trust you then I hope that you can buy one first.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.

We have confirmed the contents. With regards to the sales quota, can you change the 500 units for the initial fiscal year to 300 units?

In fact, we are still in the middle of preparing the Taiwan sales page and the sales in Taiwan will start slightly a bit further. We have confirmed it with the partners that starting sales by Spring would very likely be impossible. We are putting in efforts to target 1000 units by the second year.

Moreover, we would like to confirm the new package and the tweezers so can you kindly send the photos?
We initially wanted to start with the nail cutters so we want to invest after looking at the tweezers.

修正後
Thank you for contacting us.

We have confirmed the contents. With regards to the sales quota, can you change the 500 units for the initial fiscal year to 300 units?

In fact, we are still in the middle of preparing the Taiwan sales page and the sales in Taiwan will start slightly a bit later. We have confirmed it with the partners that starting sales by this spring would very likely be impossible. We are doing our best to reach 1000 units by the second year.

Moreover, we would like to confirm the new package and the tweezers; so can you kindly send the photos?
We want to start with the nail clippers first, then we will see if we can work with the tweezers.

元の翻訳
I have checked the e-mail. I will attach the file to a reply soon. The second subject is that I placed a new order by e-mail (14 cameras). Please issue the code and password. I would be grateful if you can check for it because the e-mail was distinguished as spam the last time.

修正後
I have confirmed the e-mail. I will attach the file to my reply soon. On a different note I placed a new order by e-mail (14 cameras). Please issue the code and password. I would be grateful if you can check for it because the e-mail was classified as spam the last time.

元の翻訳
The set expected delivery date was too early, so it could not be delivered on the specified date. This delay is being caused by an unexpected stop at the customs.

In the future we will modify the expected delivery time, and we will make sure that we will contact our customers about the expected delivery date and the customs.

We will utilize FBA here on to prevent this sort of problems to happen, and will try hard to upgrade the quality of our customer services.

Thank you a lot for your understanding.

修正後
As we have set the expected delivery date too early, the delivery will not be made on the specified date. This delay is being caused by an unexpected stop at the customs.

In the future we will modify the expected delivery time, and we will make sure that we will contact our customers beforehand about the expected delivery date and the customs.

From now on, we will utilize FBA to prevent this sort of problems from happening, and will try hard to upgrade the quality of our customer services.

Thank you very much for your understanding.

元の翻訳
The paying of money to PayPal is pending. It takes 3 days from payment to confirmation after paying money into PayPal. After confirming receiving the money, we will send a product to you.

We confirmed receipt of money to PayPal, and will send the product today.

If you purchased several products, we can send them together.
We change shipping charge, and inform you total amount.↵
After purchasing, please do not pay immediately.↵
We will inform you, and please wait for it.

We can keep the product for you.
You don't pay, and please let us know that you want us to keep the product for you.

修正後
"Your payment through" PayPal is "currently" pending. It takes 3 days "for the fund transfer to be confirmed after your transaction through PayPal." After "we have confirmed the receipt", we will send "the" product to you.

"As" we confirmed "the" receipt of money "through" PayPal, "we" will send the product today.

If you purchased several products, we can send them together, "in which case"
we will change the shipping charge, and inform you "the new" total amount. "If that is the case,↵
please do not "make payment" immediately "after the purchase" and wait for "our confirmation."

We can "also reserve" the product for you.
"Please do not make the payment in that case," and please let us know that you want us to "reserve" the product for you.

元の翻訳
ph51320

▼U.C.0123 (cosmo babylonian wars)

Mobile Suit Gundam F91

Amuro and Char do not appear because the era in this series is far away from the previous series.
F91 has a sequel to the series tittled "Mobile Suit Crossbone Gundam".
In March, U.C.0123, the force led by Dorel Ronah the Iron mask assaults the Space Colony "Frontier IV" in Frontier Side.

修正後
ph51320

▼U.C.0123 (cosmo babylonian wars)

Mobile Suit Gundam F91

Amuro and Char do not appear because these are a generation apart from the previous series.
F91 has a sequel to the series called "Mobile Suit Crossbone Gundam".
In March, U.C.0123, the force led by Dorel Ronah, the Iron Mask, assaults the Space Colony "Frontier IV" on the Frontier Side.

元の翻訳
We show the high-grade natural go stone (yunzi), clam(from Mexco) go stone special made in Hyuga(Miyazaki pre.), and Nachi black go stone No. 25 practical use. The No.25 means the thickness of a clam go stone, it has about 7.0 mm thick. As for the natural clam go stone, you can enjoy beautiful lines and natural color, as for the Nachi black go stone has natural deep black color.

Nachi black go stone is covered with oil simply, because of quality protection. Please wipe it with a dry cloth before using.

clam go stone：180, Nachi black go stone：181(regular number)

The clam and Nachi black go stone which are liked most by long-time Go fan.↵
During the go game people can enjoy more the feeling of nature. It is possible for beginners just enjoy the feel, the sense of quality of the clam go stone and the Nachi black go stone.

修正後
We show the high-grade natural go stones (yunzi): clam (from Mexco) go stones specially made in Hyuga (Miyazaki prefecture), and Nachi black go stones No. 25 for practical use. The No.25 refers to the thickness of a clam go stone at about 7.0 mm. On the natural clam go stone, you can enjoy beautiful lines and natural color, while the Nachi black go stone has natural deep black color.

Nachi black go stone is simply coated with oil for the quality protection. Please wipe it with a dry cloth before using.

clam go stones：180, Nachi black go stones:181 (regular number)

The clam and Nachi black go stones are most favored by long-time Go fans, letting them feel mounting appreciation for nature in the stones during a game. It is possible for uninitiated to experience and enjoy the ease of their use as well as the upscale sense of quality of the clam go stones and the Nachi black go stones.