YUKI (im_yuki) — 付けたレビュー

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The process of the refund of the product will be started in a few days after it gets delivered to us and we confirm it.

The policy of the refund is written about in the following, so please check it.
If the item hasn't been opened yet or damaged, the total refund of it will be done, but if it has been opened or damaged, the refund will be done by 50%.
If the product has been returned to us according to your personal reason, we can not make a refund of the shipping charge you've paid. ↵
Also, you will be in charge of the carriage for the shipment.
We can not make a refund of the item in cases like it having been lost on the way to be shipped back to us.
We recommend you add transportation insurance to the shipping system if you return an expensive product to us.

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The refund of the product will go through in a few days after we receive and confirm it.

The policy regarding refunds is written below, so please check it.
If the item hasn't been opened yet or damaged, a total refund will be given, but if it has been opened or damaged, the refund will be 50%.
If the product has been returned to us because of personal reasons, you will be responsible for the shipping charge.
We can not make a refund of the item in the case that it was lost or damaged during shipping.
We recommend you add insurance if it is an expensive product.

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I think this item is not on the market in Japan yet.

This item is excellent one giving the most safe means to those mother-to-be and pre-born children.

Just recently, my friend had an accident.
She was a mother-to-be.
The impact of accident killed the pre-born child resulting from non-wearing of seat belt.
If that car is equipped with this item, I think the pre-born child should have been saved.
Since then, she has been in depression and cannot recover from the nightmare of that accident yet.

I am thinking of reducing such mother-to-be like my friend who may encounter same situation in future.

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I think this item is not on the market in Japan yet.

This item is an excellent one giving the most safe means to those mother-to-be and pre-born children.

Just recently, my friend had an accident,
She was a mother-to-be.
The impact of accident killed the pre-born child resulting from non-wearing of her seat belt.
If the car is equipped with this item, I think the pre-born child may have been saved.
Since then, she has been in depression and cannot recover from the nightmare of this accident.

I would like to reduce such tragedies like my friend's in the future.

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I don't believe this product is available in Japan yet.

This marvelous product provides both pregnant women and their unborn babies the finest in safety.

Just the other day, my friend was involved in a traffic accident. She was pregnant at the time. She was also not wearing her seat belt, and the shock of the crash lead her to lose her baby. I really believe that if she had that product at the time her baby would have survived. But she is still devastated by the loss and has yet to recover. I wish to prevent others from going through her tragedy.

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I don't believe this product is available in Japan yet.

This marvelous product provides both pregnant women and their unborn babies the finest in safety.

Just the other day, my friend was involved in a traffic accident. She was pregnant at the time. She was also not wearing her seat belt, and the shock of the crash lead her to lose her baby. I really believe that if she had that product at the time her baby would have survived. She is still devastated by the loss and has yet to recover. I wish to prevent others from going through her tragedy.

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This item has not been sold in Japan yet.

This is a remarkable item that gives the highest safety for both pregnant woman and a baby
in her body.

A couple of days ago my friend wa involved in a traffic accident.
She was pregnant.
Shocked by the accident, the baby in her body was killed since she was not
wearing a seat belt.

If she had used this item, the baby must have not been killed.
She is so disappointed that she still cannot recover herself.

I would like to decrease the number of people who have the same experience as her.

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This item has not been sold in Japan yet.

This is a remarkable item that gives the highest safety for both pregnant woman and baby
in her body.

A couple of days ago my friend was involved in a traffic accident while
she was pregnant.
Shocked by the accident, the baby in her body did not survive since she was not
wearing a seat belt.

If she had used this item, the baby may have survived.
She is so disappointed that she still cannot recover.

I would like to decrease the number of people who have the same experience as her.

元の翻訳
Here is the procedure:

1. First of all, please notify the delivery company with the damage of your item (*Sorry for the trouble, but you cannot move forward without this step). Write an incident report. They might ask you for the detailed explanation about what is stated in the report, but please be sure to explain the overview and the consequence of the incident with the item being damaged, though you are not a pro to make a proper judgment (we cannot do anything without it).

2. Your report will be submitted to our delivery company. This is where we will be able to submit a request for verification as our first action. Accordingly the incident will be verified at our end.

3. Upon confirmation, we will arrange a refund for the item price, shipping fee, and return shipment fee.

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Here is the procedure:

1. First of all, please notify the delivery company about the damage to your item (*Sorry for the trouble, but you cannot move forward without this step). Write an incident report. They might ask you for a detailed explanation about what is stated in the report, but please be sure to explain the overview and the consequence of the incident with the item being damaged, though you are not a professional to make a proper judgment (we cannot do anything without it).

2. Your report will be submitted to our delivery company. This is where we will be able to submit a request for verification as our first action. Accordingly the incident will be verified at our end.

3. Upon confirmation, we will arrange a refund for the item price, shipping fee, and return shipment fee.

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<Impressive!>
My second visit to Korea. I travelled by myself this time. I saw NANTA during my first visit, so I booked Sachoom for trying something different. In addition to the high quality dance, sense of humour, and story itself, I was surprised to see the dancers spoke Korean, Japanese, Chinese, and Thai so fluently. I am learning multiple languages as well, so it was stimulating like no other. This experience made me fall in love with the Korean language even more. I sure will come to see the show again.

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<Impressed!>
This was my second visit to Korea. I travelled by myself this time. I saw NANTA during my first visit, so I booked Sachoom to try something different. In addition to the high quality dance, sense of humour and story itself, I was surprised to see the dancers spoke Korean, Japanese, Chinese and Thai so fluently. I am learning multiple languages as well, so it was a stimulating experience like no other. This experience made me fall in love with the Korean language even more. I will definitely come to see the show again.

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<Applicable event items>
Mini album released on Wed 6/18 "Together" Loppi/HMV limited version（AVC1-39164）, CD+DVD（AVCD-39163/B）

*Your participation will be rejected if both tickets "Numbered event ticket" and "Handshaking event participation ticket" as a set. These tickets will be collected at the handshaking event.
*Please assemble on the below scheduled time and line in the queue.
*The handshaking event will be finished once the queue ends.

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<Applicable event items>
Mini album released on Wed 6/18 "Together" Loppi/HMV limited version（AVC1-39164）, CD+DVD（AVCD-39163/B）

*Your participation will be rejected if both tickets "Numbered event ticket" and "Handshaking event participation ticket" are not presented as a set. These tickets will be collected at the handshaking event.
*Please assemble at the scheduled time below and join the queue.
*The handshaking event will be finished once the queue ends.