翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: 丁寧な英語でお願いします。

日本語

この商品はまだ日本で発売されていないと思います。


この商品は妊婦にも胎児にも最上級の安全を与えてくれる素晴らしい商品です。


つい先日のことです。私の友人が交通事故に会いました。
彼女は妊娠していました。
事故の衝撃、シートベルトをしていなかったこともあり胎児は亡くなってしまいました。
もしこの商品があったならきっと救われたのではないかと考えられます。
彼女は落ち込んでいてまだ立ち直ることはできていません。


私は彼女と同じ想いをしてしまう人を少しでも減らしたいと考えています。

英語

This item has not been sold in Japan yet.

This is a remarkable item that gives the highest safety for both pregnant woman and a baby
in her body.

A couple of days ago my friend wa involved in a traffic accident.
She was pregnant.
Shocked by the accident, the baby in her body was killed since she was not
wearing a seat belt.

If she had used this item, the baby must have not been killed.
She is so disappointed that she still cannot recover herself.

I would like to decrease the number of people who have the same experience as her.

レビュー ( 1 )

im_yukiはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/06/26 13:48:24

元の翻訳
This item has not been sold in Japan yet.

This is a remarkable item that gives the highest safety for both pregnant woman and a baby
in her body.

A couple of days ago my friend wa involved in a traffic accident.
She was pregnant.
Shocked by the accident, the baby in her body was killed since she was not
wearing a seat belt.

If she had used this item, the baby must have not been killed.
She is so disappointed that she still cannot recover herself.

I would like to decrease the number of people who have the same experience as her.

修正後
This item has not been sold in Japan yet.

This is a remarkable item that gives the highest safety for both pregnant woman and baby
in her body.

A couple of days ago my friend was involved in a traffic accident while
she was pregnant.
Shocked by the accident, the baby in her body did not survive since she was not
wearing a seat belt.

If she had used this item, the baby may have survived.
She is so disappointed that she still cannot recover.

I would like to decrease the number of people who have the same experience as her.

watch for common spelling mistakes. In advertisements like this, you should avoid words like died and death and use words like survived and live. No one wants to buy a product while depressed.