＠Trans (ilad) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
We have noticed a negative feedback from you a short while ago.
We will have to change how we respond to you.
If you delete the negative feedback, we will exceptionally accept your returned goods.
The returned goods shipping cost should usually be covered by the buyer. But we will refund US$110 as shipping cost and the price for the bass to you.
If you, however, don’t delete the negative feedback, we won’t be able to accept your request for returned goods and refund.

修正後
We have confirmed a negative feedback from you a while ago.
We will have to change how we handle this scenario.
If you delete the negative feedback, we will particularly be accepting the returned goods.
The returned goods shipping cost is usually shouldered by the buyer. But we will specially be refunding the US$110 shipping cost and the price of the bass to you.
However, if you will not delete the negative feedback, we won’t be able to accept your request for returning the goods and the refund.

元の翻訳
I have got the product.
Thank you very much.
Just as has been expected, you didn’t have ◎ in stock. It’s disappointing.
Please see the following URL for our HP.
We would like to create our own EC site for sales.
I was surprised that you have visited Japan!
I would like to see you when you come to Japan this year.
I’ll wait for your reply.

修正後
I have got the product.
Thank you very much.
Just as has been expected, you didn’t have ◎ in stock. It’s disappointing.
Please see the following URL for our HP.
We would like to create our own EC site for sales.
You have visited Japan!
I would like to see you when you come to Japan this year.
I’ll wait for your reply.