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PDN誌の印刷用に適した画像を提出してください。
推奨サイズは、Adobe 1998 、 sRGBあるいはタグなしカラープロファイルのいずれかで300dpiの 11×17 です。
詳細：推奨画像サイズはより長い寸法で5500ピクセルに近いものであるべきです。
私たちは、画像が長い寸法で3,300-8,000ピクセルの間であれば、この解像度で撮影されたものでなくても受け入れることができます。

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PDN誌の印刷用に適した画像を提出してください。
推奨サイズは、Adobe 1998 、 sRGBあるいはタグなしカラープロファイルのいずれかで300dpiの 11×17” です。
詳細：推奨画像サイズは長辺が5500ピクセルに近いものであるべきです。
私たちは、画像が長辺が3,300-8,000ピクセルの間であれば、この解像度で撮影されたものでなくても受け入れることができます。

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Please let me ask again.
Sometime the following error message appears and I can't look at a home page.
Has similar error message appeared to any users before? An error message appears only once in a while so I don't think my database setting is wrong. (I'm afraid that ABC setting could be wrong.)
I can't drag & drop images in the following page. Is it due to the CSS setting? (I'm concerned about customizing it myself.)
I belong to a very popular group but I haven't been selected yet.

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Please let me ask again.
Sometime the following error message appears and I can't look at a home page.
Has similar error message appeared to any users before? The error message appears only once in a while so I don't think the database setting is wrong. (I'm afraid that ABC setting could be wrong.)
I can't drag & drop images on the following page. Is it due to the CSS setting? (I'm concerned about customizing it by myself.)
I belong to a very popular group but I haven't been selected yet.

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New message from: andby36 (90Blue Star)
こんにちは。私のPayPalアカウントを確認したのですが、あなたからのEmail見つかりません。
しかし私は、請求書を指示通りお支払したことが確認できます。
この先どうしたらいいかわかりません。2週間で腕時計が届くことを期待しています。
よろしくお願いします。

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andy36 (90Blue Star)からの新規メッセージ
こんにちは。私のPayPalアカウントを確認したのですが、あなたからのEmail見つかりません。
しかし貴方が仰ったとおり、請求書の指示通りそちらにお支払したことが確認できます。
私のほうでこれ以上やることはないかと思うので、あとは2週間で腕時計が届くことを期待しています。
よろしくお願いします。

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Four-dimensioned infinite exchange

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Four-dimensional infinite exchange

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こんにちは。おめでとうございます。eBayからインボイスが届きましたか？国際市場に商品を販売する際、eBayが国際発送プログラムを取り扱います。支払いがなされることをご確認ください。ボーナス・ギフトを送らせていただきます。

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こんにちは。おめでとうございます。eBayからインボイスが届きましたか？弊社は国際市場で商品を販売する際、国際発送プログラムはeBayが対応しています。支払いがされていることをご確認ください。ボーナス・ギフトを送らせていただきます！

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First of all, I, as representative of A company, express my sincere apologies for having not been able to deliver you the product which could not satisfy you. On Japan’s pledge of honor, we will do our best in rectifying the problem. Had the item already sent back to the US? If not yet, would you be able to send it back to Japan. We will do a proper maintenance to in at our craft center and extend the interior diameter to 220mm. As for the cost, we will confirm and contact you in the morning tomorrow.

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First of all, I, as representative of Company A, express my sincere apologies for having not been able to deliver you the product that could satisfy you. On Japan’s pledge of honor, we will do our best to rectify the problem. Has the item already been sent back to the US? If not yet, would you be able to send it back to Japan? We will do a proper maintenance to at our workshop and extend the interior diameter to 220mm. As for the cost, we will confirm and contact you tomorrow morning.

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私たちが荷物を送る際、、関税をかける目的で商品ンお値段が記入されたコマーシャル・インボイスを同封しなければなりません。この値段は、お客様の支払う額であり、お客様の顧客が支払う最終金額ではありません。この書類を作成するのお客様のためであり、お客様の顧客のためのものではありません。お客様が商品を輸入して販売する責任を持っておられるからです。常にディーラーが商品の輸入と税金の支払いに責任を持ちます。こうした理由で当社は、外国の最終的な取引先に商品を届けることはできないのです。

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私たちが荷物を送る際、、関税をかける目的で商品の値段が記入されたコマーシャル・インボイスを同封しなければなりません。この値段は、お客様の支払う額であり、お客様の顧客が支払う最終金額ではありません。この書類を作成するのお客様のためであり、お客様の顧客のためのものではありません。お客様が商品を輸入して販売する責任を持っておられるからです。常にディーラーが商品の輸入と税金の支払いに責任を持ちます。こうした理由で当社は、外国の最終的な取引先に商品を届けることはできないのです。

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I was so happy about his kind consideration. He was very good at guiding. A rickshaw man’s simile comforted me. His strongly built body attracted me all the time. Feast for the eyes☆ Now I’m a middle-aged woman, and yet my heart was full of joy about Kyoto which I had never experienced when I was young.

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I was so happy about his kind consideration. He was very good at guiding. A rickshaw man’s simile comforted me. I could not take my eyes off his well-built body the whole time. Feast for the eyes☆ Now I’m a middle-aged woman, and yet my heart was full of joy about Kyoto which I had never experienced in my youth.

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Next, we would like to inform you of defective products
Before, we uploaded the defective products on YOUTUBE to report them.
Since then, our volumes of sales have increased and found many defective products.
Until August this year, we had sold them as they were to our customers.
We, however, have been inspecting all the products since August.
Also we have been coping with and fixing the defective products we found so that we can sell them in good condition as much as possible.

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Next, we would like to inform you of the defective products
Before, we uploaded the defective products on YOUTUBE to report them.
Since then, our volumes of sales have increased and found many defective products.
Until August this year, we had sold them as they were to our customers.
We, however, have been inspecting all the products since August.
Also we have been coping with and fixing the defective products we found so that we can sell them in good condition as much as possible.

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とつぜん失礼いたします。ご注文の靴（VIP2014100307534）ですが、私たちが入手した実際の色はワインレッドでした。添付しますので、よろしいかどうかご確認ください。ご注文の品はこちらで保管しています。

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とつぜん失礼いたします。ご注文の靴（VIP2014100307534）ですが、私たちが入手した実際の色はワインレッドでした。添付しますので、よろしいかどうかご確認ください。ご注文頂いた商品はこちらです。

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We would like to inform you that we have received wonderful vintage guitar Z.
All three are the products of UK in 1980’s.
Most likely, these are the only vintage guitars sold in Japan.
In addition, we have many wonderful vintage guitars of Gibson and Fender!
The payment over $10,000 cannot be done by PayPal, so we need to ask you to pay by a bank transfer.
Using bank transfer takes more time than PayPal, but the transaction fees are much cheaper so we will give a discount for that.
If you have any favorite guitar, please let us know.

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We would like to inform you that we have received wonderful vintage guitar Z.
All three are the products of UK in 1980’s.
Most likely, these are the only three vintage guitars ever sold in Japan.
In addition, we have many wonderful vintage guitars of Gibson and Fender!
The payment over $10,000 cannot be done by PayPal, so we need to ask you to pay by a bank transfer.
Using bank transfer takes more time than PayPal, but the transaction fees are much cheaper so we will give a discount for that.
If you have any favorite guitar, please let us know.

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Hello.
My name is ○○ living in Japan. I happened to find your HP and want to purchase something.
It seems that I can’t shop on your HP. What can I do for shopping?
Also is it possible for me to do shopping in Japan?

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Hello.
My name is ○○ living in Japan. I happened to find your company page and want to purchase your products.
It seems that I can’t shop on your page. How can I make purchases?
Also is it possible for me to do shopping in Japan?

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あなたの言われる通りです。ですがもう少し早くそれ（ファイル）が必要でした。残念ながら、ドキュメントファイルを開くことができません。joachim.landesvatter@native-instruments.de.宛てに、テキストを送っていただけますか。その中に、抜けている "patent pending"の分も含めてください。

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あなたの言われる通りです。ですがもう少し早くそれ（ファイル）が必要です。残念ながら、ドキュメントファイルを開くことができません。joachim.landesvatter@native-instruments.de.宛てに、テキストを送っていただけますか。その中に、抜けている "patent pending"の分も含めてください。

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We are very sorry to have troubled you this time.
I asked eBay to change your feedback on October 2. ↵
An email from eBay must have already reached you, but when we asked eBay to check your account, they said that the mail had been put into the Trash holder. ↵
Please open the mail from eBay which is in the Trash holder and change your feedback from Negative to Positive.
The deadline to change the feedback is October 12.↵
Please consider our request. Thank you very much.

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We are very sorry to have troubled you this time.
I asked eBay to change your feedback on October 2. You should have already received the email, but when we asked eBay to check your account, they said that the email is in your Trash folder. Please open the email from eBay which is in the Trash folder and change your feedback from Negative to Positive.
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The deadline to change the feedback is October 12. Please consider our request. Thank you very much.

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<< in the case of the purchase through Rakuten>>
1. Put your selected items into a cart and go to the payment screen, your ID and password will be required, Enter your user ID: acountusan@gmail.com. Then enter your password:↵

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<< in the case of the purchase through Rakuten>>
1. Put your selected items into your shopping cart and go to the payment screen. Enter a user ID:countusan@gmail.com, and the password: when you are prompted to enter them.

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Hello. I’ve got a Delonghi EC702 coffee maker. Thank you for sending it to me. But as for the attached cleaner (descaling solution), there was a leakage of liquid in the plastic back.
And the amount of leakage is getting increased. I’m afraid that there is a leakage at the bottom of the container. I’ll find it difficult to use it, I would appreciate it if you could send me a new one.
You could send it to the same address of Florida. I’ll wait for your reply.

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Hello. I’ve got a Delonghi EC702 coffee maker which I bought the other day. Thank you for sending it to me. But as for the attached cleaner (descaling solution), there was a leakage of liquid in the plastic back.
And the amount of leakage is getting increased little by little. I’m afraid that there is a leakage at the bottom of the container. I’ll find it difficult to use it, I would appreciate it if you could send me a new one.
You could send it to the same address of Florida as before. I’ll wait for your reply.

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Substitute coal was mainly consumed in large cities. Due to the benefits that it was smokeless, burning long time, cheap, and small purchasing unit, it sprung into wide use for heating home and bath. On the contrary, the consumption of charcoal was decreased. The use of coke began, together with coal, in Kyushu in the 18th century. During the Meiji Era, as the gas industry developed, as a by-product, the coke and coal were produced in a large amount. Nevertheless, they didn’t spread until their sales network was developed in the 1900’s. The coke for home use was carbonized coal or residue (gas coke). It was superior to coal because it was smokeless and burning long time with stronger heat.

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Substitute coal was mainly consumed in large cities. Due to the benefits that it was smokeless, burning long time, cheap, and small purchasing unit, it sprung into wide use for heating home and bath. On the contrary, the consumption of charcoal decreased. The use of coke began, together with coal, in Kyushu in the 18th century. During the Meiji Era, as the gas industry developed, coke and coal were produced as a by-product in a large quantity. Nevertheless, they didn’t spread until their sales network was developed in the 1900’s. The coke for home use was carbonized coal or residue (gas coke). It was superior to coal because it was smokeless and burning longer time with stronger heat.