hideyuki — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Oil is primarily used for a lamp in Japan before the war, it wasn’t often used for a heat source.
Oil and seed oil had been used, but the use of seed oil was gradually being limited to the gods with the spread of the oil lamp.
Most of families contract only one light with the flat rate in rural area and oil lamps were used in the other area.
Oil lamps were hold also in urban areas in the point of view of the instability of the power supply.
Until the early 1920s, demand for lamp oil for family use had accounted for a large proportion of the total oil demand.
Major industries which had used oil as a power source were agriculture and tea industry.

修正後
Oil was primarily used for a lamp in Japan before the war, and it wasn’t often used for a heat source.
Oil and seed oil had been used, but the use of the latter was gradually being limited to the gods with the spread of the oil lamp.
Most of families contract only one light with the flat rate in rural area and oil lamps were used in the other area.
Oil lamps were hold also in urban areas in the point of view of the instability of the power supply.
Until early 1920s, demand for lamp oil for family use had accounted for a large proportion of the total oil demand.
Major industries which had used oil as a power source were agriculture and tea making industry.

元の翻訳
<Tour in which we feel sense of urgency>

I have participated in local optional tours in various countries so far, but had never participated with feeling a sense of urgency.
First, expression and tone of the guide in bus to go to Panmunjom.
Rules have been established, and we are told forcefully that they got fired.
We took a break in the SA on the way to Panmunjom.
It took just an hour. to reach there.
There were inpections twice, the first inspection was carried out by South Korea soldiers.
The inspection was surprisingly smooth. I wondered if they needed only the fact that they had checked.

修正後
<Tour feel sense kind of nervous>

So far I have participated in local optional tours in various countries , but I had never felt a sense kind of being nervous.
First, we saw and expression and tone of the tour guide in bus going to Panmunjom.
Rules have been established, and we were told forcefully that they would get fired.
We took a break in the SA on the way to Panmunjom.
It took just an hour to reach there.
There were inspections twice. The first inspection was carried out by South Korea soldiers.
Unexpectedly, the inspection was smooth. I wondered if they needed only the fact that they had checked.

元の翻訳
The second inspection is carried out by American soldiers.
They carefully inspected names passed in advance, passport, and chothes.
Everyone in the bus has passed, but I felt spine-chilling.
Now let’s go inside.
There was a lot of sense of urgency at any facilities and the places where photography is allowed and not allowed have been clearly decided.
We have to keep it firmly.
The most surprising thing is that soldiers keep guard at JSA don’t move at all.
I first thought as if they are dolls.

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The second inspection was carried out by American soldiers.
They carefully inspected names submitted in advance, passport, and outfits.
Everyone in the bus has passed, but I felt shivers down my spine.
Now let’s go inside.
There was a lot of sense of urgency at any facility and the places where photography is allowed and not allowed have been clearly determined.
We have to obey it firmly.
The most surprising thing was that soldiers keeping guard at JSA did not move at all.
I first thought they were dolls.

元の翻訳
They seem to have a three-hour shift with 45 minutes for security and 15 minutes for break.↵
It would be cold in winter and they can’t clear bus even though there are bugs in summer.↵
I thought what a hard work it is.↵
People who had been divided into two while being in the same country.↵
I was keenly aware of how such a tragic thing it was, every time I hear the history.↵
The tour is worth participating.

修正後
They seem to alternate between 3-hour shifts, with 45 minutes standing guard and a 15-minute break. It would be cold in winter and they even can’t get rid off the bug during the summer. I thought to myself, that must be such hard work. People who had been seperated while being in the same country. I was keenly aware of how such a tragic thing it was, every time I hear the history. The tour is worth participating.

元の翻訳
I wonder when the annual average concentration exceeds 400ppm.

If the concentration increases at this rate, the annual average value of CO2 in the observatory is likely to exceed 400ppm around April of next year.
(strictly speaking, it should be the coming fall after six months later that it is fixed. April is the time when the so-called shoo-in is determined.)
Because the concentration in Hawaii is little low and the concentration in the Southern Hemisphere follows in a delay of one to two years in the Northern Hemisphere, it would exceed 400ppm around the end of the year after next.

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Then when would the annual average concentration exceed 400ppm?

If the concentration increases at this rate, the annual average value of CO2 in the observatory is likely to exceed 400ppm around April next year.
(strictly speaking, it will be finalized in the fall of the same year, six months after April. April is the time when only the tentative value is determined.)
It would exceed 400ppm in the fall In Hawaii, where the concentration is lower, and around the year end of two years later in the Southern Hemisphere, because it follows the Northern Hemisphere one or two years behind.

元の翻訳
I've been a combination of traditional wood which adopted a rosewood at the fingerboard, and a 3pc. maple neck shaped for this model SR2500 at the neck.

Compared with the other SR model, it is a specification like JB.
Although the 24 fret specifications are main in the SR series, but only this model has 22 fret specifications.
Playability at slap has been improved by this.
Hemispherical treatment has been applied at the edge of the fret driven as well other Prestige Series.
It is comfortable to wear and stress-free.

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I've [wrong subject] been [tense confusion] a combination of traditional wood which adopted a rosewood at the fingerboard, and a 3pc. maple neck shaped for this model SR2500 at the neck.

Compared with the other SR model, it is a specification like JB.
Although the 24 fret specifications are main in the SR series, but only this model has 22 fret specifications.
Playability at slap has been improved by this.
Hemispherical treatment has been applied at the edge of the fret driven as well other Prestige Series.
It is comfortable to wear and stress-free.

元の翻訳
iBeaconsはセール中の近く商品や顧客が探しているのかもしれない商品の情報を送信することができ、顧客が支払いを行うために彼らの財布やカードを取り外す必要がない店頭(POS)での支払いを可能にします。
それは近距離無線通信（NFC）の有力候補となるでしょう。[要出典]

それは、物理的な位置[9]に変換することができたり、あるいはソーシャルメディア上のチェクインのようなデバイス[10]上でアクションをトリガーにできる互換性のあるアプリケーションやオペレーティングシステムによって撮像された汎用一意識別子を送信するためのBluetooth低エネルギー近接センシングを使用しています。

ビーコンにはさまざまな形式があり、例えば小さなコイン電池駆動デバイス、USBスティックやソフトウェアのバージョンです。

修正後
iBeaconsは販売中の近く商品や顧客が探しているのかもしれない商品の情報を送信することができ、顧客が支払いを行うために財布やカードを取り外す必要がない店頭(POS)での支払いを可能にします。
それは近距離無線通信（NFC）の有力候補となるでしょう。[要出典]

iBeaconsはBluetooth低エネルギー近接センシングを使用して汎用一意識別子[8]を送信します。互換性のあるアプリケーションやオペレーティングシステムは、この汎用一意識別子を受信して、物理的な位置[9]に変換したり、ソーシャルメディアでのチェクインのようなアクションをデバイス[10]上で起動できます。

小型コイン電池駆動デバイス、USBスティック、ソフトウェアバージョンなど、ビーコンにはさまざまな形式があります。

元の翻訳
iBeaconは屋内測位システム[2] [3] [4]のためのアップルの商標です[1]
アップル社は、「近くのiOS 7デバイスにその存在を知らせる低パワー、低コストの送信機」と呼んでいます[5]。
また、Androidオペレーティングシステムでも使用できます（中央のみに限定）[6]。
その技術によってiOSデバイスまたは他のハードウェアが近くのiOSデバイスにプッシュ情報を送信できます。
iBeaconはBluetoothの低エネルギー（BLE）で動作するため、ブルートゥーススマートとして知られています。
BLEは、デュアルモードをサポートするBluetooth対応4.0デバイス上でも用いられています。
1つの潜在的なアプリケーションは、ストア内のユーザーの位置を特定することができる位置認識、文脈認識、普及型の小型の無線センサービーコンです。

修正後
iBeaconは屋内測位システム[2] [3] [4]のためのアップルの商標です[1]
アップル社は、「近くのiOS 7デバイスにその存在を知らせる低パワー、低コストの送信機」と呼んでいます[5]。
また、Androidオペレーティングシステムでも使用できます（中央のみに限定）[6]。
その技術によってiOSデバイスまたは他のハードウェアが近くのiOSデバイスにプッシュ情報を送信できます。
iBeaconはBluetoothの低エネルギー（BLE）で動作するため、ブルートゥーススマートとして知られています。
BLEは、デュアルモードをサポートするBluetooth対応4.0デバイス上でも用いられています。
1つの潜在的な応用は、店内のユーザーの位置を特定することができる位置認識、文脈認識、普及型の小型の無線センサービーコンです。

元の翻訳
オンラインで応答してください。オンラインフォームを使って、払い戻しを発行したり、あなたのケースを記述することができます。

1．ブラウザのアドレスバーにこのアドレスを入力して、出品用アカウントのA-Z-ギャランティーのクレームセクションに行きなさい

2．注文番号の右側の「オーダーを返金」や「あなたのケースを記述」をクリックして、オンラインの指示に従ってください

払い戻しのために、あなたのマーケットプレイス支払いアカウントへの販売手数料（手数料として戻されるわずかな金額）を支払います。

あなたがオンラインフォームを使用しない場合は、下のボックスに、この取引に関連した詳細情報を提供し、このメールに返信しなければならなりません。
このクレームの結果を判断する際に役立つかもしれない他の情報もご連絡ください。

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オンラインでご回答ください。オンラインフォームを使って、払い戻しを発行したり、事情を記載することができます。

1．ブラウザのアドレスバーにこのアドレスを入力し、出品用アカウントのA-Z-ギャランティーのクレームセクションに進みます。

2．注文番号の右側の「注文を払い戻す」または「事情を記載する」をクリックし、オンラインの指示に従います。

払い戻しの場合は、あなたのマーケットプレイス支払い口座に販売代金を振り込みます （その際、少額の管理費が差し引かれます）。

オンラインフォームを使用しない場合は、下のボックスに、この取引に関連した詳細情報を提供し、このメールに返信しなければならなりません。
このクレームの結果を判断する際に役立つかもしれない他の情報もご連絡ください。

元の翻訳
買い手が受け取ったアイテムが注文されたものではなかったので、A-Z-ギャランティーのプログラムにおける注番115-5901618-9990669のクレームを受け取っています。↵
買い手のコメントは「メールでは彼らは1個の瓶だけを出荷している。　ASINはこの金額は明らかに12個の金額であると言っています」

この電子メールに対応するために7日あることに注意してください。↵
以下のすべての要求された情報を用いて応答しないと、あなたのアマゾンの支払いは口座は借方になることがあります。

修正後
注文番号115-5901618-9990669について、購入者が受け取ったアイテムが注文通りではなかったため、A-Z-ギャランティープログラムにおけるクレームが届きました。購入者のコメントは次の通りです。「メールによると瓶は1個しか発送されない。ASINにはこの金額が12個分と明記されている」

なお、この電子メールには、7日以内にご回答ください。以下のすべての必須情報を添えてご回答いただけない場合、あなたのアマゾン支払い口座から購入金額が差し引かれる場合があります。

元の翻訳
There is a lot of trouble on dealing with you. I also spend a long time for correspondence.
Therefore, I trust you will understand.
You will pay for the first return and I will pay for the second return.
I will pay $ 14 for shipping from Japan to Canada and return charge from Canada to Japan, when the product arrived in Japan.
I have the razor that was sent to you sharpened the cutting edge by a craftsman.

Since the cutting edge has been adjusted horizontally, it will cut well if you sharpen it using the grindstone.

However, as my apology, the fee of $ 30 for sharpening will refund this time next week.

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There is a lot of trouble on dealing with you. I also spend a lot of time to deal with you.
Therefore, I trust you will understand.
If You paied the first return charge, then I would pay the second return charge.
I will pay $ 14 for shipping from Japan to Canada and return charge from Canada to Japan after the product arrives in Japan.
The razor I sent to you was sharpened the cutting edge by a craftsman.

Since the cutting edge has been adjusted horizontally, it will be cut well if you sharpen it by the grindstone.

However, as my apology, I will refund you the sharpening fee $ 30 this time next week.

元の翻訳
私も、注文が「未出荷」のままであることを確認したので、注文をキャンセルできます。ただし、それはあなたのパフォーマンスの評価に影響します。
ウェブサイトに記載されているように12個がリストに掲載されているので、12個の注文を受けることができます。このオプションに従えば　マイナスの評価やzクレームを受けることはありません。
さらに、将来的このようなシナリオを避けるために、あなたがリストを変更して、商品ページ上の正確な数量の情報を掲載することをお勧めします。
私たちは、あなたが長期的に最善をつくすように、この問題を解決することがでるように願っています。

修正後
私も、注文が「未出荷」のままであることを確認したので、そちらから注文をキャンセルできます。ただし、それはあなたのパフォーマンスの評価に影響します。
ウェブサイトに記載されているように12個がリストに掲載されているので、12個の注文を受けることができます。このオプションに従えば　マイナスの評価やa-zクレームを受けることはありません。
さらに、今後このような事態を避けるために、リストを変更して、商品ページに正確な数量情報を掲載することをお勧めします。
私たちは、長期的にあなたにとって最善となるように、この問題を解決できることを願っています。

元の翻訳
I am sorry for the inconvenience in the matter of the case.
It seems to be shipping mistake of wholesaler.
I have ordered a black case definitely.
Could you send me a photo of the Brown case you have fi it’s possible?
I will tell the wholesaler the claim and pursue on the reason why such mistake occurred.

SG of Lefty you requested is truly a very rare guitar and it is difficult to find honestly.
Now, the guitar in the photo is only one in the Japanese market.
It has been put in an auction. ↵
I can sell it to you in about $ ** if I win bid.

修正後
I am sorry for the inconvenience you experienced with the case.
It is likely a mistake by wholesaler in shipping.
I'm sure that I have ordered a black case.
If possible, could you send me at least one photo of the Brown case you have now?
I forwarded your claim to the wholesaler and pursuing the reason why such a mistake occurred.

Left-handed SG that you requested is truly a very rare guitar and it is difficult to find one to be honest with you.
Currently, the guitar on the photo is only one in the Japanese market.
It has been auctioned and if I win the bid, I will sell it to you for about $ ** .

元の翻訳
◯ Proposed activities at the BD
the establishment of the BD Association and the establishment of school
Implementation guidance at hospitals and at universities

◯ Requests for P
Recommendation and approval of the government on the organization
Activity support
Management of schools
Recruit of Dr

◯ Things the Japanese side can provide
Technical guidance
Dispatch of Japanese doctors
Bringing in trainees in Japan

◯ Time
June: stakeholder meeting (Doctors, government officials)
August: 2nd stakeholder meeting
(Fix curriculum, teaching content, and the support system)
October: establishment of school, partnership with hospital, and partnership with universities,

If you can be agree with these proposals, please send us a letter of BD stakeholders in their joint names as a gesture confirmation.

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◯ Proposed activities at the BD
The establishment of the BD Association and the establishment of school
Implementation guidance at hospitals and at universities

◯ Requests for P
Recommendation and approval of the government on the organization
Activity support
Management of schools
Recruit of doctors

◯ Things the Japanese side can provide
Technical guidance
Dispatch of Japanese doctors
Bringing in trainees to Japan

◯ Time
June: stakeholder meeting (doctors, government officials)
August: 2nd stakeholder meeting
(Fixed curriculum, teaching content, and the support system)
October: establishment of school, partnership with hospitals, and partnership with universities

If you can agree with these proposals, please send us a letter of BD stakeholders in their joint names as a gesture confirmation.

元の翻訳
Location of our warehouse
・General and consumer goods is in Amazon FBA center in the United States and the United Kingdom
• Antiques are in Japan

Plans we are carrying out in future
•putting the stock in exhibition on Amazon also on eBay
•cooperation of the stock of Shopify and eBay in the field of antique product
•Exhibition in India, Brazil and China Amazon
•Exhibition of a leading MarketPlace around the world
•utilization of Comparison Shopping

Thank you.

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Warehouse locations
・General and consumer goods is [subject-verb agreement] in Amazon FBA center in the United States and the United Kingdom
• Antiques are in Japan

Plans we want to carry out in the future
•Putting the stock in exhibition on Amazon also on eBay
•Cooperation of the stock of Shopify and eBay in the field of antique product
•Exhibition in India, Brazil, and China Amazon
•Exhibition of a leading MarketPlace around the world
•Utilization of Comparison Shopping

Thank you.

元の翻訳
We put the products which are managed by your system on MarketPlace other than Amazon, and we ship stock which stores in the FBA warehouse all over the world automatically.

In particular, we plan to put products which are put on Amazon US also on eBay, and automatically ship orders which received at eBay from the warehouse of the Amazon.

In that case, is the plan that you proposed this time best ?

2. Such as eBay and T-mall other than the United States↵
When you penetrate to a new marketplace, ↵
does the setup cost like this time occur every time?

修正後
We put the products which are managed by your system on MarketPlace other than Amazon, and we ship stock which stores in the FBA warehouse all over the world automatically.

In particular, we plan to put products which are put on Amazon US also on eBay, and automatically ship orders which received at eBay from the warehouse of the Amazon.

In that case, is the plan that you proposed this time best?

2. When you enter a new marketplace such as eBay and T-mall outside the United States, does a setup cost like this occur every time?

元の翻訳
I have checked the contract. Please allow me to confirm points about the contents of the contract.
I would like to sign with a contract as soon as possible the following questions are resolved.

1. The Launch Assistance Service is directed to only the Amazon US. Is there any reason for that?
We are selling products on Amazon around the world including the Amazon.com.
In other words, all products have already been registered in the Amazon.
We are interested in sales in markets other than Amazon.

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I have checked the contract. Please allow me to confirm a few points about the contents of the contract.
I would like to sign the contract as soon as possible the following questions are resolved.

1. The Launch Assistance Service is directed to only Amazon US. Is there any reason for that?
We are selling products on Amazon around the world including Amazon.com.
In other words, all products have already been registered with Amazon.
We are interested in markets other than Amazon.