菱沼重義 (elephantrans) — もらったレビュー

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I am fairly fond of this. Moving images also can be shot with high-vision by this one, and it's super connecting to DIGA as well!

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I am fairly fond of this. I can shoot high-vision movies combined with other functions all in one, and it's super connecting to DIGA as well!

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
Since there is no nearby shop to repair the dress, I'd like to return it and refund including the shipping fee.
Would you please consider it for me?

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Thank you for your reply.
Since there is no nearby shop to repair the dress, if it is possible, I'd like to return it for a full refund, including the shipping fee.
Would you please consider it for me?

元の翻訳
Thank you for message.

We'll send this goods by air, so it'll make it in time of july 13.

It's expected it'll arrive by July 10 at the latest.

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Thank you for your message.

We'll ship this product to you via air, so it'll arrive by July 13.

We expect it will be delivered to you on July 10 at the latest.

元の翻訳
Schedule: June 2(Wed), 2014
Time: Opening door 19:30 / Opening curtain 20:00
Admission Charge: Reserved 1,500 JPY / Current 1,800 JPY(One drink excluded)

-Reservation of ticket
http://2-5-d.jp/schedule/20140702/

USTREAM
http://www.ustream.tv/channel/2-5d1

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Schedule: July 2(Wed), 2014
Time: Opening door 19:30 / Opening curtain 20:00
Admission Charge: Reserved 1,500 JPY / Current 1,800 JPY(One drink excluded)

-Reservation of ticket
http://2-5-d.jp/schedule/20140702/

USTREAM
http://www.ustream.tv/channel/2-5d1

元の翻訳
My ears have fallen in love.

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Ears In Love

元の翻訳
In case the goods have already left France, I will contact you as soon as the goods arrive at me and please wait for a while.
I'm sorry for the inconvenience.

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In case the goods have already left France, I will contact you as soon as the goods arrive at me and please wait for a while.　（as soon as I receive the goodsのほうがよいかもしれません）
I'm sorry for the inconvenience.

元の翻訳
Are you meaning this item?

Microsoft Headset: LifeChat LX-6000 for Business
http://www.microsoft.com/hardware/en-us/b/lifechat-lx-6000-for-business/7XF-00001

I am going to offer at XX USD this time only.

The shipping charge is free because I will send this item as a same package of your previous goods. Of course I will send it via EMS.

Is it acceptable for you to charge from PayPal directly?

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Do you mean this item?

Microsoft Headset: LifeChat LX-6000 for Business
http://www.microsoft.com/hardware/en-us/b/lifechat-lx-6000-for-business/7XF-00001

I am offer you this at XX USD this time only.

The shipping fee is free because I will send this item in the same package with your previous goods. Of course I will send it via EMS.

Is it acceptable for me to charge from PayPal directly?

元の翻訳
Hello,
I want to make another account newly.
Is it possible?
Are there anything I need to prepare for it?
And, is it possible for you to transfer sales amount to a European bank account?
Thank you for your cooperation in advance.
Good luck and bless you!

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Hello,
I want to create a new account that is separate from my other account.
Is it possible?
Is there anything I need to prepare for it?
Also, is it possible for you to transfer the sales amount to a European bank account?
Thank you for your cooperation in advance.
Good luck to you!

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
Now, it seems that that the invoice can't be sent at the present circumstances.
We hate to trouble you, but is it possible for you to bid at $120 and pay for it?
In that case, we will finish the auction when you bid and we will proceed to arrange the refund of $44 plus extra charge for shipment.
Please consider the above. Thank you for your understanding in advance.

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Thank you for your reply.
It seems that the invoice can't be sent under the current circumstances.
We are sorry for causing you any inconvenience but is it possible for you to bid at $120 and make a payment first?
In that case, we will finish the auction when you bid and we will proceed to arrange the refund of $44 plus extra charge for shipment.
Please consider it. Thank you for your understanding in advance.

元の翻訳
We are considering to buy following goods.
URL:
Product name:
-We would like to consult with you about delic\very.
Is it possible to ship by using our FEDEX account?
The shipping address is in Japan.

-We would like to consult with you about price.
Is it possible for you to offer quantity discount?
We would buy about 20 pieces and buy it on a continuous basis.

Since we would like to buy immediately, could you give us your reply by return?

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We are considering to buy the following goods.
URL:
Product name:
-We would like to consult with you about the delivery.
Is it possible to ship by using our FEDEX account?
The shipping address is in Japan.

-We would like to consult with you about the price.
Is it possible for you to offer a quantity discount?
We would buy about 20 pieces and make another purchase on a continuous basis.

Since we would like to make the purchase as soon as possible, your prompt reply will be appreciated.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I am sorry I opened the case previous time.
From now on I am going to solve problems by discussing with you.

Regarding the goods this time, please let me know the number in stock.
Also, can I buy the goods at the same price continuously in years to come?

If possible, I would like to continue business with you for a long time.

I look forward to hear from you.

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Thank you for your reply.
I am sorry I opened the case previously.
From now on I am going to solve problems by discussing with you.

Regarding the goods I purchased this time, please let me know the number in stock.
Also, can I buy the goods at the same price continuously in years to come?

If possible, I would like to continue business with you for a long time.

I look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
Is this model in perfect condition?
Are there any bulges of glass parts or like that?
Are there any grimes of the adhesion bond or like that?
I am looking for a perfect model.

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Is this model in perfect condition?
Are there any bulges in the glass parts?
Is there any grime from the glue?
I am looking for a perfect model.

元の翻訳
Is additional fee required for adding logo to the goods?
I am thinking olive color for the sheet. Is any sample picture available?

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Is an additional fee required for adding logos to the goods?
I am thinking of using olive color for the sheet. Are there any sample pictures available?

元の翻訳
One of them generates no sound.
The second one is absolutely no response.
The third one has a crack at the edge of the earphone and is absolutely no response.

I think you should inspect goods before shipment.

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One of them generates no sound.
The second one has absolutely no response.
The third one has a crack at the edge of the earphone and has absolutely no response.

I think you should inspect goods before shipment.