SO (ekyab) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Her team succeeded in her first concert due to her untiring efforts and strength of mind never give up .

She is supported with various ways among fans, and a nickname "kakka (閣下)" and character "nowano (のヮの)" were created.

At first, I misunderstood that "Is she a wicked?", but that was needless anxiety!

If she were in the real world, she would be a true popular idol!

Her charm is filled in the latter half of the cartoon.

Of course,the game is good, but I recommend you the cartoon !

修正後
Her team succeeded in her first concert due to her untiring efforts and strength of mind to never give up .

She is supported in various ways among fans, and the nickname "Her Excellency (閣下)" and character "nowano (のヮの)" were created.

At first, I mistakenly thought "Is she wicked?", but that was needless anxiety!

If she were in the real world, she would be a true popular idol!

Her charm is filled in the latter half of the cartoon.

Of course, the game is good, but I recommend the cartoon!

元の翻訳
Haruka Amami is "a typical idol ".

She is so popular character in this work that plays the leading part in this cartoon.

Her trademark is "red ribbon" and appeal is "cheerfulness and effort".]

Her cheerfulness changes the dark atmosphere around her, her words encourage many characters in this cartoon.

She is very frank and cheerfulness, and spares no effort to be the idol.

I was touched by her attitude "make maximum effort as possible as she can".

修正後
Haruka Amami is "a typical idol ".

She is such a popular character in this work that she plays the leading part in this cartoon.

Her trademark is her "red ribbon" and her appeal is her "cheerfulness and spirit".

Her cheerfulness changes the dark atmosphere around her, her words encourage many characters in this cartoon.

She is very frank and cheerful and spares no effort to be an idol.

I was touched by her attitude to "work as hard as she possibly can."