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元の翻訳
It appears that the product you ordered was defective.
There is a problem with the pickup and the neck, so we are not able to sell it.

If you would like the same WAL color, we will be able get that out to you by mid May.
We have asked the maker FJ to build the guitar.
Or, if you would like the natural-colored one instead, we can get that sent to you right away.
It will be $** including the delivery fee, so we can refund the amount of $** from your payment.
If you would like to cancel your order, we will refund the full amount.

We apologize for the inconvenience.
Please let us know what you would like to do.

修正後
It appears that the product you ordered was defective.
There is a problem with the pickup and the neck, so we are not able to sell it.

If you would like the same WAL color, we will be able to get that out to you by mid May.
We have ordered with the maker FJ to build the guitar.
Or, if you would like the natural-colored one instead, we can ship one to you right away.
It will be $** including the delivery fee, so we can refund the amount of $** from your payment.
If you would like to cancel your order, we will refund the full amount.

We apologize for the inconvenience.
Please let us know what you would like us to do.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your suggestion.

I would like to purchase ten Garmin 110 (Black).

Please send me separate invoices for both the Logitech R800 ($2,250) and the Garmin 110 (Black) ($960).
Also, could you please deliver the two products separately?

*I am making the above requests because I am using MYUS and purchases with a total of over $2,500 require the seller's EIN. If you are able to provide me with your EIN, it is fine if the invoices and products are sent together.

修正後
Thank you for your suggestion.

I would like to purchase ten units of Garmin 110 (Black).

Please send me separate invoices for both the Logitech R800 ($2,250) and the Garmin 110 (Black) ($960).
Also, could you please deliver the two products separately?

*I am making the above requests because I am using MYUS and purchases with a total of over $2,500 require the seller's EIN. If you are able to provide me with your EIN, it is fine if the invoices and products are sent together.

元の翻訳
Now, my Chinese business partner suggested that because it is easier to communicate between two Chinese---is it possible for him to contact Mr. Phillip Law or Mr. Albert Lee directly by phone?
We hope to then provide you with my business partner's company address as well as shipping information within China.

修正後
Now, my Chinese business partner suggested that because it is easier to communicate between two Chinese---is it possible for him to contact Mr. Phillip Law or Mr. Albee Lee directly by phone?
We hope to then provide you with my business partner's company address as well as shipping information within China.