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Thank you for your message.
Your products will be send out to you today.
By the Standard Shipping that you chose, it takes 6-20 days to be received.
If you want to change the shipping way, please contact us again as soon as possible.
If we won't receive any messages, we will send this as according plan.

Please wait till we will send message with shipping number after we send out.

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Thank you for your message.
Your products will be sent out to you today.
By the Standard Shipping that you chose, it takes 6-20 days to be received.
If you want to change the shipping way, please contact us again as soon as possible.
If we won't receive any messages, we will send this as according plan.

Please wait till we will send message with tracking number after we send out.

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Thank you for contacting us.
Your item will be shipped today.
If it is sent by standard shipping that you selected, it will take about 6 to 20 days until you receive it.
If you would like to change how to send, please let us know immediately.
If you do not let us know, we will send it today as scheduled.

After we send it, we will inform you the tracking number, so we appreciate your little patience.

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Thank you for contacting us.
Your item will be shipped today.
If it is sent by standard shipping that you selected, it will take about 6 to 20 days until you receive it.
If you would like to change how to send, please let us know immediately.
If you do not let us know, we will send it today as scheduled.

After we send it, we will inform you of the tracking number, so we appreciate your little patience.

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Please push Sell yours button here, you can send your product.
Next page is a send screen.

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Please push Sell yours button here, you can list your product.
Next page is a listing screen.

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As there are appropriate items, we delete the listing by "Delete product and listing" of "Action".

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The appropriate items appear, then you delete the listing by "Delete product and listing" in "Action".

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(Item whose profit was minus or less than 300 Yen after sending)

Compare our sale price and other's sales price.
In case where they are quite different and we are likely to gain the profit if we correct it (in other words, our pricing was not appropriate), we list it as if we set the price a little lower than other's price.

It is as follows. If other people list at 122.55 dollars(including shipping charge), we list at 122.45 dollars(including shipping charge). The standard of whether it produces a profit or not

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(Item of which profit was minus or less than 300 Yen after sending)

Compare our sale price with other's sales price.
In case where it is quite different and we are likely to gain the profit if we correct it (in other words, our pricing was not appropriate), we list it by setting the price a little lower than other's price.

It is as follows. If other people list at 122.55 dollars(including shipping charge), we list at 122.45 dollars(including shipping charge). The standard of whether it produces a profit or not is

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2. As for credit card, use Mitsui Sumitomo VISA listed above(registered).
12:00 to 14:00 is designated for the hour.
Select Osaka for the address to which it is delivered.
Remove the checking at registration of "like" at the shop, and at setting of distributing email magazine, click "Removing all the selections".↵
Click "Confirm order".

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2. As for the credit card, use Mitsui Sumitomo VISA listed above(registered).
Designate the time from 12:00 to 14:00.
Select Osaka for the address to which it is delivered.
Remove the "like" check to the shop registered and click "remove all the selections" at setting of email magazine distribution and then click "Place an order".

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My friends often told me you are really active.
When I was elementary school ,middle school and high school students, I played the baseball and I also studied very hard.
When I started my university, I took part in many volunteering like working as NGO in India or Myanmar. Then I wanted to tell everyone about our activities so I made a poster or movie about that moreover, I held a charity event about introducing our NGO activities in India or Cambodia. And I wanted to be as an exchange students so I studied really hard .
Now, I am working as an intern on one of the bossiness company.
I always challenge up a different thing .

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My friends often told me you were really active.
When I was elementary school ,middle school and high school students, I played the baseball and I also studied very hard.
When I started my university, I took part in many volunteering like working as NGO in India or Myanmar. Then I wanted to tell everyone about our activities so I made a poster or movie about that moreover, I held a charity event about introducing our NGO activities in India or Cambodia. And I wanted to be as an exchange students so I studied really hard .
Now, I am working as an intern on one of the bossiness company.
I always challenge up a different thing .

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Thank you for arranging the schedule.
*Regarding the meeting with A Company, is it possible to let it start at 17:00?
*Regarding the supper on 18th, September, Tanaka and I both are available.
*I understand the date and the place for the meeting with B Company.

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Thank you for arranging the schedule.
*Regarding the meeting with A Company, would it possible to let it start at 17:00?
*Regarding the supper on 18th, September, Mr./Ms. Tanaka and I both are available.
*I understand the date and the place for the meeting with B Company.

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* When you purchase CDs at the venue on the date of the event, we accept cash only as a payment method. Please know inadvance that others such as credit card cannot be accepted.
* Please be informed in advance that once purchased, your purchase cannot be refunded. A defected item will be accepted for a replacement with another in a good condition.
* A "handshake event participation ticket" will be required for a child of age 3 and up.

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* When you purchase CDs at the venue on the date of the event, we accept cash only as a payment method. Please know in　advance that others such as credit card cannot be accepted.
* Please be informed in advance that once purchased, your purchase cannot be refunded. A defected item will be accepted for a replacement with another in a good condition.
* A "handshake event participation ticket" will be required for a child of age 3 and up.