John (clockworkblue) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.

I would appreciate if you could send me the receipt of payment of customized fee, because I also need it when I apply for it at a taxation office.
Please attach a photo of the receipt, so that I can confirm the amount of money.

Once I confirm the money amount on the receipt, I will proceed with the payment process.

Yours sincerely,

修正後
Thank you for your reply.

I would appreciate it if you could send me the receipt of the customized fee payment, because I also need it when I file taxes to Japan's tax office.
Please attach a photo of the receipt, so that I can confirm the amount.

Once I confirm the amount on the receipt, I will proceed with the payment process.

Yours sincerely,

元の翻訳
Currently, there are no problems. Due to its structure, switches (especially the rotary switch) might generate a pop noise when you flip it. However, this should not be a problem during normal use.

Concerning the serial number, I am not able to tell you all of the details.
Based on a figure, specs, and the serial number '809xxx', cross-checking of the record shows that it was 'xxx'th production of September, 1998.
I apologize for not being able to provide any further information regarding the number.

修正後
Currently, there are no problems. Due to its structure, switches (especially the rotary switch) might generate a pop noise when you flip it. However, this should not be a problem during normal use.

Concerning the serial number, I am not able to tell you all of the details.
Based on a figure, specs, and the serial number '809xxx', cross-checking of the record shows that it was 'xxx'th production of September 1998.
I apologize for not being able to provide any further information regarding the number.

元の翻訳
This is Takahashi, and I contacted you a few days ago. Thank you for your reply.
I am hoping to be enrolled in the course for ◯◯. I am also planning to attach the document here, but would it suffice?
Lastly, I would like to get more information and details on language courses.
If my language skills were not sufficient, will there be measures taken in that regard?

修正後
This is Takahashi, and I contacted you a few days ago. Thank you for your reply.
I am hoping to be enrolled in the course for ◯◯. I am also planning to attach the document here, but would it suffice?
Lastly, I would like to get more information and details on language courses.
If my language skills are not sufficient, will there be measures taken in that regard?

元の翻訳
しかしながら、その秘伝のタレのレシピは見かけよりもはるかに複雑である。Xiaomi社をよく把握していない人は、この会社はアップル社の模倣品を格安で提供しているに過ぎないと思うかもしれない。だがそのような評価は全く見当違いである。「Xiaomi社を理解する上で重要なのは、彼らが売ろうとしているのはスマートフォンではなくライフスタイルである、という事なのです」と、ライターであるベン・トンプソン氏は自身のブログ「Stratechery」の記事で説明している。

修正後
しかしながら、その秘伝のタレのレシピは見かけよりもはるかに複雑である。Xiaomi社をよく把握していない人は、この会社はアップル社の模倣品を格安で提供しているに過ぎないと思うかもしれない。だがそのような評価は全く見当違いである。「Xiaomi社を理解する上で重要なのは、彼らが売ろうとしているのはスマートフォンではなくライフスタイルである、という事なのです。」と、ライターであるベン・トンプソン氏は自身のブログ「Stratechery」の記事で説明している。