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May pay $180 directly into your paypal account because I do not want to make a payment through ebay?

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May I pay $180 directly into your paypal account, since I want to purchase directly from you, without having to deal with eBay?

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Todays, I followed the advice from eBay and raised an object to PayPal's Resolution Centre. I made a phone call to PayPal right after this, and told them it was an accident during delivery. I was relieved to hear that PayPal will deal with everything as it was delivery for eBay's Global Shipping Program. We will be able to solve this issue with no problem.

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Today, I followed the advice from eBay and raised an objection to PayPal's Resolution Centre. I made a phone call to PayPal right after this, and told them it was an accident during delivery. I was relieved to hear that PayPal will deal with everything as it was the delivery for eBay's Global Shipping Program. We will be able to solve this issue with no problem.

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フロントエンド - サブ100ドルの年間サブスクリプションのニュースレター。通常は約8から12ページで毎月PDF形式で提供されるコンテンツである。通常、長い株式の推奨する。ポイントは以下のとおりです。できるだけ多くの加入者を得る。

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フロントエンド - サブ100ドルの年間サブスクリプション（→Subscriptionはまだカタカナでは根付いていないと思いますので、年間定期購読のほうがいいかもしれません）のニュースレター。通常は毎月約8から12ページにわたるコンテンツがPDF形式で提供される。通常、推奨株式の詳細レポートが含まれる。ここでのポイントは、できるだけ多くの購読者を得るということである。

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この投資はタイのベンチャー企業にとって今までにない大規模シリーズAです、と地域CEOでありaCommerce創始者のPaul Srivorakul氏は述べています。最近の他の大規模シリーズAラウンドはGrabTaxiの1000万米ドルを超える資金提供でした。

Srivorakul氏は新しい資金を使って注文管理、倉庫、配送管理システムに投資し、ｅコマース物流基盤を強化することを計画しています。

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この投資はタイ発のベンチャー企業にとって最大規模のシリーズAであり、また、東南アジアでも最大規模の投資のひとつです、と地域CEOでありaCommerce創始者のPaul Srivorakul氏は述べている。最近の他の大規模シリーズAラウンドはGrabTaxiの1000万米ドルを超える資金提供でした。

Srivorakul氏は新しい資金を使って注文管理、倉庫、配送管理システムに投資し、ｅコマース物流基盤を強化することを計画しています。

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There are articles with green vertical line and without it, but what does it mean by this green vertical line?

In addition, I think it is better to have the function by which the administrator can ban specific users and website itself. (because it may be used for the SPAM.)

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There are articles with green vertical lines and without them, but what does it mean by this green vertical line?

In addition, I think it is better to have the function to enable the administrator to ban the specific users and website itself. (It is in order to prevent the SPAM abuse.)

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Thank you for your message.
We sent the item.
Haven't you received it yet?

We will check it.
If you have not received it, we will refund it.

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Thank you for your message.
We sent the item.
Haven't you received it yet?

We will also check the status at this end.
If you have not received it, we will process the refund for you.

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こんにちは

台湾の運送業者の連絡情報を教えて下さいますか。前回教えていただきたサイト（http://www.ifsjpn.co.jp/com/)は、日本の業者だったので、連絡を取ることが出来ませんでした。

そちらの発送先住所と、必要な発送関係書類を教えて下さい。それと、ご自分の購入注文番号はお持ちですか。

宜しくお願い致します。

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こんにちは

台湾の運送業者の連絡情報を教えて下さいますか。前回教えていただいたサイト（http://www.ifsjpn.co.jp/com/)は、日本の業者だったので、連絡を取ることが出来ませんでした。

そちらの発送先住所と、必要な発送関係書類を教えて下さい。それと、ご自分の購入注文番号はお持ちですか。

宜しくお願い致します。

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こんにちわ。

台湾の転送会社へ連絡する際の情報をご提供ください。↵
前回貴方からいただいたウェブサイトは日本の転送会社の↵
ウェブサイトであったため、連絡できませんでした。

貴方の出荷先を知りたいのです。
どの書類が出荷に必要ですか。
注文書番号をお持ちですか。

よろしくお願いします。

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こんにちわ。

台湾の転送会社の連絡先の情報をご提供ください。前回貴方からいただいたウェブサイトは日本の転送会社のウェブサイトであったため、連絡できませんでした。

貴方の出荷先を知りたいのです。
どの書類が出荷に必要ですか。
注文書番号をお持ちですか。

よろしくお願いします。

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Thank you for contacting us.
It is not the first time for me, please give my regards to all.
I get most of my goods from Japan and sell them.
In order to satisfy all customers, items are packaged carefully and shipped expediently.
If you have anything you are looking for, please don't hesitate to ask me.

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Thank you for visiting our store.
It has not been long since the launch of our store, but we look forward to serving you.
I am selling goods that are mostly purchased from Japan.
In order to satisfy all customers, items are packaged carefully and shipped expediently.
If you have anything you are looking for, please don't hesitate to ask me.

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残念ながら、弊社ストアではＰａｙＰａｌの注文処理を行うことができません。一つ在庫があるとおもうので、ウェブサイとで弊社配送センターから情報を得て頂けると思います。もしそれが出来ない場合、当方よりお薦めできることがあるとすれば下記電話番号にご連絡いただくということになります。しかしながら、電話口で決済方法をデビット（口座引き落とし）かクレジットカードのいずれかで御選択いただきます。御迷惑をおかけして申し訳ございません。

このたびはGuitarCenter.comを御利用いただきありがとうございます。もし質問や不明点な点、御満足いただけなかった点等ございましたら、お客様のギターセンター営業担当または御希望のギターセンター店舗までご連絡をお願い致します。

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残念ながら、弊社ストアではＰａｙＰａｌの注文処理を行うことができません。一つ在庫があるとおもうので、ウェブサイトで弊社配送センターから入手して頂けると思います。もしそれが出来ない場合、当方よりお薦めできることがあるとすれば下記電話番号にご連絡いただくということになります。しかしながら、電話（でのご注文）の場合には、デビット（口座引き落とし）もしくはクレジットカードのいずれかでお支払いいただくことになります。御迷惑をおかけして申し訳ございません。

このたびはGuitarCenter.comを御利用いただきありがとうございます。もし質問や不明点な点、御満足いただけなかった点等ございましたら、お客様のギターセンター営業担当または御希望のギターセンター店舗までご連絡をお願い致します。

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When you send a present from Japan to Italy, you do not need an invoice.
Please inquire to the customs over there.
I will send a file of the invoice for reference.

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When you send a present from Japan to Italy, you do not need an invoice.
Please inquire it to the customs over there.
I will send a file of the invoice for your reference.

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SNS that people who love film camera meeting

It is a SNS & developing timer app people who love film camera gather.
With Share a timer that you created, and let's make a network of camera film lovers!

It is a convenient timer app when the tank development of the film.
You can set the time freely to each process, such as stop and development.
It's when the stirring, notice function in alarm.
Chemicals and information film used also collective management.

The film developing is streamlined, let's press the shutter more!

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SNS for people who love film camera to gather

It is an SNS for people who love film camera gather & developing timer app.
Let's share a timer that you created, and let's make a network of camera film lovers!

It is a convenient timer app for the tank development of the film.
You can set the time freely for each process, such as stop and development.
Notice function with alarm is available that comes in handy when you are stirring.
You can also centralize the management of information for chemicals and films used.

Let's get your film development process streamlined, and The film developing is streamlined, let's press the shutter more!

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We are very sorry for the late reply.
The dimension of the product is 36 (US4) × 42 (US10).
If you want bigger sizes, expand it before you print or print in the original size and cut it open.

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We are very sorry for the late reply.
The sizes of the product are available between size 36 (US4) size 42 (US10).
If you want bigger sizes, enlarge it before you print or print in the original size and cut it open.

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Please let me know when you arrive at the ○ ○ station.
My company is located just 1 minute away from the station, but the place is a little difficult to find, so I'm going to pick you up.

If you come by plane, you can come to the ○ ○ station by bus or train from New Chitose Airport.
Since there is no transfer if you use bus, I think it's easier option.

Let's go to lunch after the meeting in the company!

If you run into any troubles or anything you don't know while staying in Sapporo, feel free to ask me any time.

Do you have a cell phone number that you can call in Japan?
If so, please let me know the number.

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Please let me know when you arrive at ○ ○ station.
My company is located just 1 minute away from the station, but the place is a little difficult to find, so I'm going to pick you up.

If you come by plane, you can come to ○ ○ station by bus or train from New Chitose Airport.
Since there is no transfer required that I think taking the bus is an easier option for you.

Let's go to lunch after the meeting at the office! （このようなコンテキストでの会社はOfficeと訳すほうがいいのではないかと思います。）

If you run into any troubles or anything you don't know while staying in Sapporo, feel free to ask me any time.

Do you have a cell phone number that you can call in Japan? →（これでも間違いはないかと思いますが、通常は、Do you have a cell phone number that I can reach you while you are in Japan?のほうが自然ではないかと思います)
If so, please let me know the number.

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"YOSHIDA KABAN PORTER" bag has a beautiful mat grayish black color calls SUMIKURO.
Using the cotton warps and the nylon wefts, it has a extraordinary texture as the high-density plain fabric; Cordura Duck.
This Cordura Duck unites the natural touch of cotton with the sharpness of nylon at the same time.
As much as you use, you will favor this as your only one bag for its unique texture of cotton.
With sharply face and durable tailoring of luxury double-lining of the same cloth as the surface (except small products like wallet), YOSHIDA KABAN PORTER bag must be your favorite in the long part of your life.

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"YOSHIDA KABAN PORTER" bag has a beautiful mat grayish black color called SUMIKURO (ink black).
Using the cotton warps and the nylon wefts, it has an extraordinary texture as the high-density plain fabric; Cordura Duck.
This Cordura Duck unites the natural touch of cotton with the sharpness of nylon at the same time.
As much as you use, you will favor this as your only one bag for its unique texture of cotton.
With a sharp face and durable tailoring of luxury double-lining of the same cloth as the surface (except small products like wallet), YOSHIDA KABAN PORTER bag must be your favorite in the long part of your life.

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I'll be available anytime on Thursday!
I can adjust to your convenience.

Are you going stay in Sapporo overnight?
Do you want to go back to Tokyo?
Are you going to Sapporo by yourself?
Are you going with somebody else?

Are you coming to my company directly from the airport?
I can go to pick you up at New Chitose Airport.

If you're craving for certain foods or places, I'll do my best to show you around!
Please feel free to let me know.

Do you have a cell phone in Japan?
Call me on my cell phone after arriving at the airport.
Please let me know when you confirmed you flight's arrival time.

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I'll be available anytime on Thursday!
I can adjust my schedule to yours for your convenience.

Are you going stay in Sapporo overnight?
Do you want to go back to Tokyo?
Are you going to Sapporo by yourself?
Are you accompanying somebody else?

Are you coming to my office directly from the airport?
I can go to pick you up at New Chitose Airport.

If you're craving for certain foods or places, I'll do my best to show you around!
Please feel free to let me know.

Do you have a cell phone in Japan?
Call me on my cell phone after arriving at the airport.
Please let me know when your flight's arrival time is confirmed.

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[] Reason for the problem
- Late shipping

[] Prevention of Recurrence of problem
- Establish a daily schedule in order to meet the requirements of all purchasers
- Reduce the lead time to shipping
- Management of Stock
- Increased communication with buyers
- Policy Infringements
- Prohibited Content / OR limit Items

[] Appeal
We will endeavor to do our best to make our buyers happy by applying the sales plan and establishing better business practice. I hope this will see an increase in sales.
Japan will be providing strong support from now on for A's prosperity.
I wish you all good luck.

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[] Reason for the problem
- Late shipping

[] Preventive measures for the recurrence of the problem:
- Establish a daily schedule in order to meet the requirements of all purchasers
- Reduce the lead time for shipping
- Inventory control
- Increased communication with buyers
- Policy Infringements
- Prohibited Content and/or restricted Items

[] Appeal
We will endeavor to do our best to make our buyers happy by applying the sales plan and establishing a better business practice. I am hoping for the reinstatement of my sales privilege from the bottom of my heart.
At last but not least, I am sincerely wishing for A's prosperity.
I wish you all good luck.

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Reasons why the problem occcured
・Delay in the shipment

Measures for preventing the recurrence
・Make a daily schedule for responce to all the buyers.
・Shorten a lead-time of shipment
・Inventory management
・Communication with the buyers
・Policy's prohibition
・Prohibited contents and/or items with limits

Appeal
I shall be committed to my work based on the sales plan to satisfy all the buyers.
I sincerely hope a restoration of your sale rights.
Finally I sincerely wish for A's prosperity from Japan .

Good luck

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Reasons why the problem occurred
・Delay in the shipment

Measures for preventing the recurrence
・Make a daily schedule for response to all the buyers.
・Shorten a lead-time of shipment
・Inventory management
・Communication with the buyers
・Policy violation （原文がちょっと？？ですね。再発防止策なのに、ポリシーの違反とありますね。）
・Prohibited contents and/or restricted items.

Appeal
I shall be committed to my work based on the sales plan to satisfy all the buyers.
I sincerely hope a restoration of your sale rights.
Finally I sincerely wish for A's prosperity from Japan .

Good luck

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I fail upgrade, even processed upgrade many times (the character of a menu is not displayed)
Is upgrade impossible for 1.5 from 1.3 possibly ?
Or isn't the update file of the database of MySql wrong (neighborhood which can choose language)?
Moreover, although I tried to log in from the following URL, it was not able to log in.
Since I could not processed, even I processed upgrade many times, when it is going to install newly, is only a pure white page displayed, and I can't new installation be performed, either.
Could you support me advise?

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I fail to upgrade, no matter how many times I try. (The characters on the menu are not displayed)
Does it possibly mean that upgrading from 1.3 to 1.5 is not available?
Or, perhaps, you might have provided the wrong update file for MySQL database by mistake (The part where I can choose the language)?
Moreover, although I tried to log in from the following URL, I was not able to log in.
Since I could not upgrade after so many failures, I even tried a fresh installation but I wasn't able to do it either as only the blank page was displayed on the screen.
Could you offer an advise?

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It starts, and a light noise comes out periodically and continues immediately about 2.3 minutes.
The level of a noise is the not a level but minimum quantity which affect music appreciation.
Probably I think that the portion is the noise which has occurred since a thing like mold adheres and it has not removed completely.
The other state is very beautiful like other records.

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As soon as the operation starts, a light noise comes out periodically and continues for about 2 to 3 minutes.
The level of the noise is not at the level to affect music appreciation, as it is very small.
Probably I think that the noise is originated from the portion where something like mold is stuck and not removed completely.
The rest of the conditions are excellent just as other records.

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Thank you for the message.
Concerning the item, I was able to confirm that it was sent.
It's possible that it's late because of our mistake with the delivery or a problem with the customs.
In case it doesn't reach you within 10 days, I will consider giving you a refund.

Sending is planned to be through air mail.
I will plan it so it arrives as soon as possible, so please be patient.

Sending to Singapore is possible.
Warranty only works in case of an early failure.

It's a Japanese product.
Delivery time is 10 days at best, 20 days at worst.
Best wishes.

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Thank you for the message.
We were able to confirm that the item was shipped.
It's possible that it's delayed because of our mistake with the delivery or a problem with the customs.
In case it doesn't reach you within 10 days, I will consider giving you a refund.

We are planning to ship the item through airmail.
I will work out something so that it arrives as soon as possible, so please be patient.

Shipment to Singapore is available.
The warranty is only available for the cases of initial failures.

It's a Japanese product.
Delivery time is 10 days at best, 20 days at worst.
Best wishes.

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I'm really thankful for your attractive offer.
I'm grateful for those few years of us doing business.

Well then I made a list of some items I need urgently.
I put the item URLs in it, so please take a look.
If they're possible to buy, I would like to tell you the quantities later. I would buy at least 4 units of each of the entries.

I'm also interested in items that are not Tour Issue goods, so I might contact you again about that.

Concerning ARP, I understood. Where does the ARP stamp have to be pressed?

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I'm really thankful for your attractive offer.
I'm grateful for those few years of us doing business.

Well then I made a list of some items I need urgently.
I put the item URLs in it, so please take a look.
If they're available for purchasing, I would like to tell you the quantities later. I would buy at least 4 units each of these items.

I'm also interested in items other than Tour Issue goods, so I might contact you again about that.

Concerning ARP, I understood. Where is the ARP stamp affixed?