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Please enable me price negotiation from the make offer of products page.

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Please negotiate the price from the "make offer" on the products page.

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Please negotiate an offer on the [make offer] section of the product page.

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Please negotiate the price from the [make offer] section on the product page.

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According to the key person of D company, The information of C is following.
You don't have to be afraid.
・Investment purpose
Aiming for capital gain( That's all)
・Relationship with X company
X side haven't thoght that we would do business together.
Y side may expect but wouldn't address the business concretely.
・If they do business together, it doesn't mean the investment from B company.
・As X company, they must be neautral for any vender in sense of information offering.

In such case nonexecutive director, You can work in this company while you are working in C company.

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According to the key person from D company, The information on C is as follows.
There seems to be nothing that you should be concerned about.
・Investment purpose
Aiming for capital gain( That's all)
・Relationship with X company
X side hasn't thought about doing business with us.
Y side may expect but wouldn't address the business concretely.
・If they do business together, it doesn't mean the investment from B company.
・As X company, they must be neutral for any vender in sense of information offering.

Should you choose to assume the non-resident executive director responsibility, you can work in this company while concurrently working for C company.

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I like this Tarmac SL34. This frame was displayed on eBay. My next road bicycle will have similar parts assembly with this road bicycle. I love SRAM and ENVE.

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I like this Tarmac SL34. This frame was listed on eBay. My next road bicycle will have the parts assembly similar to this road bicycle. I love SRAM and ENVE.

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I like this Tarmac SL4. This frame was displayed on eBay. I wonder if my next road bike will have similar assembly parts? I love SRAM and ENVE.

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I like this Tarmac SL4. This frame was listed on eBay. I am thinking that my next road bike will have similar assembly parts with this one, I love SRAM and ENVE.

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こんにちは。ナミビアまで御社が輸送できるか教えてください。また、ナミビアのウィンドホックにあるDhlの事務所まで輸送するのがよいでしょう。もし可能ならば、時計の写真も送ってください。アフリカでこの時計が動くでしょうか？ここでは遠すぎて信号が使えないでしょうか？

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こんにちは。ナミビアまで御社が輸送できるかまた、ナミビアのウィンドホックにあるDhlの事務所まで輸送するのがよいのかどうかをお知らせください。もし可能ならば、時計の写真も送ってください。アフリカでこの時計が動く（使える）でしょうか？ここでは遠すぎて信号が使えないでしょうか？

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Thank you for your message.
Sorry for the inconvenience caused.
Certainly.
I will refund the shipping fee and the import duty charged.
My sincere apologies.

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Thank you for your message.
Sorry for the inconvenience caused.
Your message is duly acknowledged.
I will refund the shipping fee and the import duty charged.
My sincere apologies.

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Thank you for your message.
Right away sir.
Please send it here.
In the case of malfunction , we will replace with a new one here.
Thanks in advance.
We apologize for any inconvenience to our customer.

Thank you for your message.
We will resend about the item because it is the possibility of the loss.
We apologize for any inconvenience to our customers.
We are sorry.

Thank you for your message.
Right away sir.
We will begin refund correspondence.
Thanks in advance.

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Thank you for your message.
Your message is duly noted.
Please send it back to me.
In the case of defects, we will replace it with a new one.
Thanks in advance.
We apologize for any inconvenience to our customer.

Thank you for your message.
We will resend about the item because it is the possibility of the loss.
We apologize for any inconvenience this may have caused you.
We are sorry.

Thank you for your message.
Your message is duly acknowledged.
We will start processing your refund.
Thanks in advance.

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Application is need for this service.
Ekipdeia Web Site is self operated by NPO. Continuing operation need the support from the users. The donation over 500 yen is appreciated.

Apply from here. About member service and terminal map.
Trial period with trial ID is extended, but will end soon.
Log in now and feel the convenience. Apply member service from here.
The period will end on July 15.

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Application is need for the use of the service for members.
Ekipdeia Web Site is self operated by an NPO. In order for it to continue its operation, the website needs the support from its users. The donation over 500 yen is appreciated.

Apply from here. About member service and terminal map.
Trial period with trial ID is extended, but will end soon.
Log in now and feel the convenience. Apply member service from here.
The period will end on July 15.

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We will give 16 percent discount for ○○ in the limited period.

How are you?
A large scale typhoon passed Japan, and we are↵
starting the summer.
It is good to have a cold tea in this season.
Please take care of yourself.

By the way, I am going to move at the end of this month.
For this reason, I would like to sell the items I have as much as possible.
It is a heavy work if I have a lot of items.

If you trade the items that I listed at eBay by Paypal directl, I will give you 16 peercent discount.
The due day is July 20th.
If you are interested in some of the items, please let me know.

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We will give a 16 percent discount for ○○ for the limited time period.

How are you?
A large-scale typhoon passed Japan, and it is the beginning of the summer.
It is good to have a cold tea in this season.
Please take care of yourself.

By the way, I am going to move at the end of this month.
For this reason, I would like to sell as much items in stock as possible.
It is a heavy work if I have a lot of items.

If you directly order the items that I listed on eBay with Paypal, I will give you a 16 percent discount.
This limited time offer ends on July 20th.
If you are interested in some of the items, please let me know.

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Thank you for your message.
If the customer procedure goes smoothly, I suppose the item will be arriving to Russia in 10 days.

Thank you for your message.
I have cancelled your order accordingly.
If you use the credit card for payment, I suppose it will be reimbursed to you in the next month.
I apologize for inconvenience caused.

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Thank you for your message.
The shipment to Russia should arrive in 10 days at the latest, given that there is no issue with customs there.

Thank you for your message.
I have cancelled your order accordingly.
If you used the credit card for payment, I suppose it will be reimbursed to you in the next month.
I apologize for the inconvenience this may have caused.

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We are truly sorry for taking up your time.
Missing your home address number was the mistake of our staff in charge of shipping.
We will strengthen the checking system to prevent the same mistake from recurring.

We really appreciate your information about it and taking your precious time for picking up the item.
Thank you very much.

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We are truly sorry for taking up your time.
Missing your home address number was the mistake of our shipping staff.
We will strengthen the checking system to prevent the same mistake from recurring.

We really appreciate your information about it and taking your precious time for picking up the item.
Thank you very much.

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We are very sorry for the trouble.
It was a mistake of our worker who was in charge of shipping that the street address was missing.
In order to prevent a recurrence, we will enhance our double-checking system.

Thank you so much for letting us know that and receiving the package.
We really appreciate you.

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We are very sorry for the trouble.
It was a mistake of our worker who was in charge of shipping that the street address was missing.
In order to prevent a recurrence, we will enhance our double-checking system.

Thank you so much for contacting us, and receiving the package.
We really appreciate you.(「ご連絡」と「荷物の受け取り」なので修正。）↵

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We are very sorry to give you inconvenience.
it was a mistke of the shipping section that number of your address was missing.
We will reinforce the checking to prevent that it happens again.

Thank you for reporting to us and receiving the item.
We appreciate you.

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We are very sorry for the inconvenience we may have caused you.
it was due to a mistake caused by the shipping section that the number of your address was missing.(→... that a part of your address was missing)
We will reinforce our checking system to prevent the recurrence of the same mistake.

Thank you for contacting us and receiving the item.
We appreciate your cooperation.

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Could you ship them in two parts?? I want to minimize the risk of damage.
Please, ship them with strict packing.

If OO is available again, please, let me know before you display in the e-bay.

Is it possible for you to find any other Dutch antique?

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Could you ship my order in two separate shipments?? I want to minimize the risk of damage.
Please make sure to pack them securely before shipping them.

If OO is available again, please let me know before you list it with eBay.

Is it possible for you to find any other Dutch antique?

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Thank you for your message.
Because of our side, I'm sorry for inconvenience from the bottom of the heart.
Could you send the picture of the product?

Thank you for your message.
You can shift the language to english in this product.
About explanation booklet, You can't change the language.
Please accept this.
Thank you for your message.
This products are in the stock.
Thank you.

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Thank you for your message.
We sincerely apologize for any inconvenience we may have caused you.
May we ask you to kindly send the picture of the product?

Thank you for your message.
You can switch the language to english in this product.
Instruction manual, however, is available only in Japanese.
We hope you will understand this.
Thank you for your message.
These products are in stock.
Thank you.

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Thank you for your message.
We sincerely apologize for the inconvenience we has caused you, and we would appreciate it if you kindly sent us the picture of the product.

Thank you for your message.
The language on this product can be shifted to English, but the manual is available only in Japanese.
We appreciate your understanding.
We have stocks for this product.
Thanks.

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Thank you for your message.
We sincerely apologize for the inconvenience we have caused you, and we would appreciate it if you kindly sent us the picture of the product.

Thank you for your message.
The language on this product can be switched to English, but the manual is available only in Japanese.
We appreciate your understanding.
We have stocks for this product.
Thanks.

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Thank you for your message.
We are very sorry.
We have shipped a new product due to a possibility that the product itself may have lost.

We are very sorry for the inconvenient we have caused you.

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Thank you for your message.
We are very sorry.
We have shipped a new product due to a possibility that the product itself may have been lost.

We sincerely apologize for the inconvenience we have caused you.

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Thank you for your message.
We regret to say, but this item might be lost, and thereby we sent it to you again.

We sincerely apologize that we had given to you a trouble.

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Thank you for your message.
We regret to say, but this item might be lost, and thereby we sent it to you again.

We sincerely apologize for the inconvenience we may have caused you.

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Hello,

I have had no communication with you before, but I am writing to you because we are very much interested in your items.

We are thinking of purchasing these items in a large volume.
Would you please have a business with us on a bulk order basis?

We will make the payment either through the PayPal or a credit card.
The shipping destination will be Florida.

I really look forward to your response.

I am grateful if you could reply to my Skype address.

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Hello,

I have had no communication with you before, but I am writing to you because we are very much interested in your items.

We are thinking of purchasing these items in a large volume.
Would you please consider giving us a bulk discount?

We will make the payment either through the PayPal or a credit card.
The shipping destination will be Florida.

I really look forward to your response.

I am grateful if you could reply to my Skype address.

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Hello,
We are contacting you because the item that you handle is very interesting to us.

We would like to purchase this item in quantity.
So can you give us big discount?

We will pay via paypal or credit card.
The shipping address will be in Florida.

I will looking forward for your reply.
Please reply back to my SKYPE. Thank you and best regards.

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Hello,
We are contacting you as we are very much interested in the products you handle.

We would like to purchase this product in quantity.
So would it be possible for you to consider giving us a quantity discount?

We will pay via PayPal or credit card.
The shipping address will be in Florida.

We will look forward to hearing from you.
Please reply back to my SKYPE. Thank you and best regards.

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I am very glad that you like a model of the airplane.

However, as your son is in the hospital, I am worried about it very much.
I heard that he was burned. How is he?
I hope from the bottom of my heart that he recovers soon.

I am sorry that it took you a lot of troubles at customs inspection.
I will check it here to reduce your troubles there in the future.

It is getting hotter in Japan, and summer is starting.

Please take care of yourself.
I I keep my fingers crossed that your son gets well soon.

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I am very glad that you like the model airplane.

However, as your son is in the hospital, I am worried about it very much.
I heard that he was burned. How is he?
I hope, from the bottom of my heart, that he recovers soon.

I am sorry that it took you a lot of troubles with regard to customs inspection.
I will check it here to reduce your troubles there in the future.

It is getting hotter in Japan, and summer is starting.

Please take care of yourself.
I keep my fingers crossed for your son's quick recovery.

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Hereafter we are due to employ exclusive staff for total data management and make it more effective.
With regard to the notification of delivery, the person in charge processed cancellation in wrong order.
Hereafter we shall thoroughly refrain form notifying delivery prior to shippment of goods.
If you think this improvement is not sufice, please give us any tip.
Corresponding to this measure would you please re-issue accounts of Amazon in each European countries?

Best regards.

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Hereafter, we are due to employ exclusive staff for total data management and make it more effective.
With regard to the notification of delivery, the person in charge processed cancellation in wrong order.
Hereafter we shall thoroughly refrain from notifying delivery prior to shipment of goods.
If you think this improvement does not suffice, please give us any tip.
Corresponding to this measure would you please re-issue accounts on Amazon in each European country?

Best regards.