chee_madam — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
There is a request and question from Japan's Resona Bank.
Could you please send 2 original copies of either your insurance policy or insurance certificate?

修正後
There is a request and question from Resona Bank in Japan.
Could you please send 2 original copies of either your insurance policy or insurance certificate?

元の翻訳
You have given us a negative feedback and AtoZ Claims.
We know how you feel about this problem, and we feel as you do. But, we want you to know that we have sent package on schedule and couldn't do anything for lost and pilferage. It's USPS's fault.
Your review　cause our business to have trouble We sincerely hope you will withdraw the review.

修正後
You have given us a negative feedback and AtoZ Claims.
We know how you feel about this problem, and we feel as you do. But, we would like you to know that we have sent the package on schedule and the loss and pilferage is beyond our control while it was at the hands of USPS.
Your review is giving a significant impact on our business. We sincerely hope that you will withdraw the negative feedback and AtoZ claims.

元の翻訳
You gave us negative feedback in the AtoZ Claims.
We understand your anger and frustration with the issue and subsequent trouble, we feel the same. We shipped the item on schedule, we would like you to understand that the loss or theft of the item was beyond our control as it was in the hands of USPS.
Your feedback has a great impact on our reputation as sellers. We kindly ask that you remove the negative evaluation please.

修正後
You gave us a negative feedback and the AtoZ Claims.
We understand your anger and frustration with the issue and subsequent trouble, and we feel the same. We, however, shipped the item on schedule, and we would like you to understand that the loss or theft of the item was beyond our control as it was in the hands of USPS.
Your feedback has a great impact on our reputation as a seller, so, we kindly ask that you remove the negative feedback and the AtoZ claims please.

元の翻訳
It is 2 months over since this product was ordered, and it has not returned yet.
So, we have not been able to refund.

修正後
It has been over 2 months since the order for this product was placed, and the product has not been returned yet.
So, we have not been able to refund.

元の翻訳
Please be advised that the items shown in the picture may be a bit different from the actual items. The reason is that the items shown in the picture show similar type of items. We cannot post each picture of all items due to many varieties of items.
For more details, please visit and confirm at the website of ○△. Every items will be shipped from Japan. We obtain each and every item from their authentic dealers and they are all brand new without any copied items. So, please don't worry about the authenticity.

修正後
Please be advised that the items shown in the picture may be a bit different from the actual items. The reason is that the items shown in the picture show similar type of items. We cannot post each picture of all items due to many varieties of items.
For more details, please visit and confirm at the website of ○△. Every items will be shipped from Japan. We obtain each and every item from their authorized dealers and they are all brand new without any copied items. So, please don't worry about the authenticity.

元の翻訳
Some photographs may be different from the goods. The reason: we place the photographs of the same type of goods, which however cannot cover all of them because there are so many of the kinds.

Please check on the web site of 〇△ for the details, . All the products will be shipped from Japan. We purchase all from the regular dealer and they are in the unused (new) states. No imitations, please be assured about that.

修正後
Some photographs may be different from the actual goods. The reason: we posted the photographs of the same type of goods, which however cannot cover all of them because there are so many of the kinds.

Please check on the website of 〇△ for the details, . All the products will be shipped from Japan. We purchase all goods from authorized dealers and they are unused and brand new. Please be assured that we do not handle fake items.

元の翻訳
The item may differ slightly from the actual photo. Reason: I have posted an image of the same type of item, but as there are so many types I can not find the exact one.
Please check the web site of ○ △ for details. Item will be shipped from Japan. All goods are new and purchased from an authorized dealer. Please be assured they are not fake.

修正後
The actual item may differ slightly from the photo. Reason: I have posted an image of the item of the same type, but as there are so many types I can not post all of them.
Please check the website of ○ △ for details. All items will be shipped from Japan. All goods are new and purchased from authorized dealers. Please be assured they are not fake.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the message.
We are terribly sorry for keeping you waiting for a very long time.
The following is the tracking number.
Please confirm it.


Thank you for the message.
About a month has passed since we made a shipment to Brazil. Has the item not been arrived yet?
We also confirm the delivery statement.
We apologize for this inconvenience.

修正後
Thank you for the message.
We are terribly sorry for keeping you waiting for a very long time.
Provided below is the tracking number.
Please confirm it.


Thank you for the message.
About a month has passed since we made a shipment to Brazil. Has the item not been arrived yet?
We will also check the shipment status from one end.
We apologize for the inconvenience.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

We are very sorry for keeping you wait for a long time. Below is the tracking number. Thank you.

Thank you for your message.
It's been around a month since we shipped the item to Brazil, but haven't you received it yet? Let us check the status on our side as well.
Sorry for your inconvenience.

修正後
Thank you for your message.

We are very sorry for keeping you wait for a long time. Below is the tracking number. Thank you.

Thank you for your message.
It's been around a month since we shipped the item to Brazil, but haven't you received it yet? Let us check the status from our end as well.
Sorry for the inconvenience.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.

I am sorry to be late very much.
The tracking number is as follows.
I sent by EMS, and you will receive the item in 3 to 5 days.

Thank you for your message.
I have sent it to you for more than a month ago,↵
but haven't you receive it yet?
I will check it here. I apologize to you.

修正後
Thank you for your message.

We sincerely apologize for the delay.
The tracking number is as follows.
Since we have shipped it by EMS, you should expect it to arrive in 3 to 5 days.

Thank you for your message.
We have shipped it to you over a month ago, but haven't you receive it yet?
We will check the status from our end.↵
Please accept our sincerest apologies for the inconvenience.

元の翻訳
I would like to return the item because it was damaged when I received. Let me know how should I return it to you.

I ordered three items, but I received only two of them. Please send the remaining one as soon as possible. Thank you for your support.

修正後
I would like to return the item because it was damaged when I received it. Let me know how should I return it to you.

I ordered three items, but I received only two of them. Please send the remaining one as soon as possible. Thank you for your support.

元の翻訳
Inquiry

If you have any questions, opinions and requests, please ask us from below form.

Our staff will contact you.

We may not be able to reply you according to the content.

修正後
Inquiry

If you have any questions, opinions and requests, please contact us from the form provided below.

Our staff will contact you.

Please note that there may be a case where we may not be able to provide the response depending on the details of your inquiry.

元の翻訳
Questions

For questions, opinions and demands, please inquire with the following form.

From our company's management will contact you.

Please understand that depending on the contents, there cases when we can not contact you.

修正後
Inquiries

For questions, opinions and demands, please inquire with the following form.

Our staff in charge will contact you.

Please understand that depending on the contents, there may be cases where we can not contact you.

元の翻訳
Inquiry

If you have a question, opinion and request, please inquire by using the following form.

A person in charge will reply you.

We cannot reply due to contents. We request that you understand it.

修正後
Inquiry

If you have a question, concern, and request, please contact us by using the following form.

A person in charge will respond you.

Please note that there may be some cases where we may not be able to respond depending on the details of your question, concern, or request.

元の翻訳
Thank you for answering.

We are possible to ship your item within a week no matter the distance.↵
In case of setting the handling time on 4days which is little long, you think this works for the customer's satisfaction?

修正後
Thank you for your response.

We can ship a good within a week regardless of the distance between the origin and the destination. With that in mind, you still claim that setting the handling time to be slightly longer, say, four days, will be effective for maintaining the level of customer satisfaction?↵

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.

We can send goods within a week regardless of the distance between a forwarder and a destination.
You mean that even in this case it is effective to set the handling time a little longer ( for example 4 days) to keep customers' satisfaction degree?

修正後
Thank you for your reply.

We can send goods within a week regardless of the distance between a shipper and a addressee.
You mean that even in this case it is still effective to set the handling time a little longer ( for example 4 days) to maintain the level of customer satisfaction?

元の翻訳
御社のカメラに興味があります。ペルーのリマまで配送可能でしょうか？商品とアクセサリー込みの最終価格で合意して頂けますか？大至急回答宜しくお願いします（仕事でカメラを使いたいのでお願いします）。

修正後
御社のカメラに興味があります。ペルーのリマまで配送可能でしょうか？商品の最終価格およびカメラに付属のアクセサリーについて合意して頂けますか？（この箇所は原文からはパンクチュエーションがなかったりということでよくわからないのですが、最終価格＆カメラ付属アクセサリーについて了解しました、という意味だと捉えました。）大至急回答宜しくお願いします（仕事でカメラを使いたいのでお願いします）。

元の翻訳
こんにちは
あなたのカメラにとても気に入りです。
一つだけ知りたいですが、ペルーのリマに送ってもらうことはできるのでしょうか？
アクセサリーを含める最終金額についても納得します！
お返事をお待ちしております。(そのカメラは働くに本当に必要です。)

修正後
こんにちは
あなたのカメラがとても気に入っています。
ペルーのリマに発送していただくことは可能でしょうか？
また、このカメラの最終金額と、カメラに付属されるアクセサリーについても納得しています！
早急にお返事くださいますよう宜しくお願いいたします。(このカメラを仕事に使いたいと思っています。)

元の翻訳
Hello Jack,
Thank you for taking care of that for me. I will wait for you reply.

If the goods you recommended are $200, I would like to purchase them all please.
If you will sell them at $200 each, please send me a PayPal Payment Request.
If you send a PayPal payment request, itemizing the quantity price and model numbers I think we can have a safe transaction.

If you have any new product available from now on please feel free to contact me.
We need more and more new products.

修正後
Hello Jack,
Thank you for taking care of that for me. I will wait for you reply.

If the goods you recommended are $200, I would like to purchase them all please.
If you will sell them at $200 each, please send me a PayPal Payment Request.
If you send a PayPal payment request, itemizing the quantity price and model numbers I think we can have a safe transaction.

If you have any new product available from now on please feel free to contact us.
We need more and more new products.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
I'm sorry.
I will check it soon.↵
If I know the tracking number, I will tell you.
Sorry to bother you.

Thank you for your message.
The item may be lost, I will re-ship it in case of it.
Please wait for a while until arriving.
Sorry to bother you.

Thank you for your message.
As for the way to ship, I will ship it by EMS.
As to the tracking number, it will be reflected tomorrow or later.

修正後
Thank you for your message.
I'm sorry.
I will check it soon.（→soon よりimmediatelyや、as soon as I canのほうが誠意が伝わると思います）↵
I will provide you the tracking number as soon as I find it out.
Sorry for the inconvenience this might have caused you.

Thank you for your message.
The item may have been lost (during the shipping), so I will re-ship it to you if it is lost .
Please wait for a while until its arrival.
Sorry for the inconvenience this might have caused you.

Thank you for your message.
In regards to the shipping, I will ship it by EMS.
As to the tracking number, it will be available either tomorrow or a day after.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
I am sorry.
I will check it right away.
As soon as I know the tracking number, I will let you know.
I apologize for inconvenience caused.

Thank you for your message.
As it might be missing item, if is completely lost, I will ship it again.
Please kindly wait till its arrival.
I apologize for inconvenience caused.

Thank you for your message.
I will ship it out by EMS.
The tracking number will be enhanced in the system on either tomorrow or the day after.

修正後
Thank you for your message.
I am sorry.
I will check it right away.
As soon as I know the tracking number, I will let you know.
I apologize for the inconvenience caused.

Thank you for your message.
As it might be the case of missing item, if is completely lost, I will ship it again.
Please kindly wait till its arrival.
I apologize for the inconvenience caused.

Thank you for your message.
I will ship it out by EMS.
The tracking number will be available in the system on either tomorrow or the day after.

元の翻訳
I will pay after the return of the $4.30.
How many days will it take for the refund?
Please provide more details.

I love your company's products.
I would like to continue to do business with your company in the future.
Thank you.

修正後
I will make sure to pay after the refund of the $4.30.
How many days will it take you to refund?
Please provide more details.

I love your company's products.
I would like to continue to do business with your company in the future.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
いえ、普段はオフィスで働いています。涼しいです。だけど、いくつかのメールは夏の暑さで痛んでしまいます。大丈夫だろうと確信している。

修正後
いえ、普段はオフィスで働いています。涼しいです。しかし、メールの中には夏の暑さで傷んでしまうものもあります。大丈夫だろうと確信しています。