Tulugaq (c4bravo) — もらったレビュー

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Until you are satisfied with the solution of this problem, we will do whatever we can. So, would you mind revising your review or deleting it.

There are 2 types of feedback we get from reviews. Sometimes reviews can be negative having a big impact on our activities.

I humbly hope that you understand.

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We will do whatever we can until you are satisfied with the solution of this problem. So, would you kindly revise or delete the review?

A rating will become a negative rating with a feedback of 2 and will have a big impact in our activities.

I humbly hope that you understand.

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I have a few requests.

1. Confirm the method of payment on the admin screen.
Ask administration whether the payment method is correct.

2. Enter payment information before the expiration of the trial period ends.
I want to know if the date of payment is applicable for the paid service period or the trail period.

3. Share the above information as soon as you can.

Deadline: End of the month

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I have a few requests.

1. Using the admin screen as a reference, I would like you to confirm the method of payment.
As necessary, inquire with administration on whether the payment method is correct.

2. It is now the trial period, but before the trial period is over confirm if it is alright to enter payment information.
I want to know if the period from the date of entry until the paid period is being counted, or if it's counted from starting the trial period is over.

3. Let me know as soon as the above information is sorted out.

Deadline: End of the month

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Due to the fact that this product is really expensive in Japan,
my customers and friends would be really happy if they bought it from you store.
I am happy with how things worked out this time.
Just so that you know I plan on making additional purchases in the future. When that time comes I hope we can make things work. Thank you very much for your time.

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Because this product is really expensive in Japan,
my customers and friends will be delighted when I show them what I bought from your store.
I am happy with how things worked out this time.
Just so you know, I plan on making additional purchases in the future. When that time comes I hope we can make things work. Thank you very much for your time.

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Beyond the wall of language, there is smooth communication
Our missing using crowd-sourcing for translation making the world smaller is accelerate the way people communicate.

We provide Conyac by anydooR Inc., human translation services utilizing crowdsourcing. By building a network of translators around the world, Conyac is matching "those who can translate" with "those who want to request translation" at a unprecedented rapid pace and low-cost.

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Surmounting the wall of language for smooth communication
Our mission in using crowdsourcing for translation is to make the world smaller and accelerate how people communicate.

We provide Conyac by anydooR Inc., human translation services utilizing crowdsourcing. By building a network of translators around the world, Conyac matches those who can translate with those in need of translation, at unprecedented speed and low cost.

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Love traveling but are tired of Korea and Hawaii.
Navigator of ABC resident introduced for each category
Easy to edit.
Original Google Maps and smartphone apps
Digital content and production at the same time.

◎ Initial circulation: 5,000 units (10k copies in 5 years, 2k copies in 10 years)
◎ Size of book: 14 pages (4C)
◎ Publish date: April 2014
◎ Price: 1000 yen (inc. tax)
◎ Plan:
◎ Issues:

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Love traveling but are tired of South Korea and Hawaii
Navigator of ABC residents introduced for each category
Easy editing process
Original Google Maps, smartphone apps, etc.
Digital content simultaneously produced

◎ Initial circulation: 5,000 units (100,000 copies in 5 years, 200,000 copies in 10 years)
◎ Size of book: duodecimo 14 pages (4C)
◎ Publishing date: April 2014
◎ Price: 1,000 yen (incl. tax)
◎ Plan:
◎ Issues:

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Yes, It's midnight in Japan right now.
I rest assure because you are a person willing to contact me on such short notice.
If I knew things were going to be like this, I would have contacted you directly much sooner.

Are you selling the watch with playing cards dials?
A seller I found is willing to sell it to me for $120.
I will send you an image.

I think that if you could lower the price a little I would consider buying from you.
Thank, let me know what you think.

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Yes, it's midnight in Japan right now.
I rest assured because you are a person willing to contact me on such short notice.
If I knew things were going to be like this, I would have contacted you directly much sooner.

Are you selling the watch with playing card dials?
A seller I found is willing to sell it to me for $120.
I will send you an image.

I think that if you could lower the price a little I would buy from you.
Thanks, let me know what you think.

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The car you ordered is located at Nagoya yard.
After the bank transfer, send me a copy of the request form.
Ship reservations and arrangements to check condition of the car,
will proceed smoothly to the next step in the process.

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The car you ordered is located at Nagoya yard.
After the bank transfer, send me a copy of the request form.
Ship reservations and arrangements to check condition of the car,
will proceed smoothly to the next step in the process.↵

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Japanese kyaraben ("lunch boxes featuring characters") introduction and information on where to by character bento boxes.

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Japanese kyaraben contains introduction on Japanese character valve boxes and selling of character valve products.