Aya H. (ayinka73) — 付けたレビュー

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I opened the item I purchased from you.
I can’t use it as the item is chipped.
I can’t find broken pieces inside the box, so it may have been like this from the beginning.
Unlike the photo, the item’s box has scribbles.

I would like to return the item and receive a full refund. Or I would keep the item and receive a partial refund.

I don’t want to give you negative feedback.
I would like to keep doing business with you in the future.

Thank you in advance.

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I opened the item I purchased from you.
It's not usable as the item is chipped.
I can't find broken pieces inside the box, so it may have been like this since before you shipped this.
Unlike the photo, the item’s box has scribbles.

I would like to either return the item and receive a full refund, or keep the item and receive a partial refund.

I don’t want to give you negative feedback.
I would like to keep doing business with you in the future.

Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
I purchased "GOLD Special MM version".
EA that your company sent doesn't deal with GOLD.
It's not EA I asked for.
I will attach the convention between your company and me below.
Please check it and reply me as soo as possible.

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I purchased "GOLD Special MM version".
The EA that your company sent doesn't deal with GOLD.
It's not the EA I asked for.
I will attach the conversation history between your company and me below.
Please check it and reply to me as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
It is said that the WWDC held in 2013 is the first one as published by Apple.

After that, the start-up company, Estimote, published a case of a similar company utilizing iBeacon in YouTube. O2O was favorably popular and iBeacon has also gotten attention as well.
It was listed with the name "iBeacons" in the presentation slides during that time, but it was not talked about more in detail.

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It is said that the WWDC held in 2013 is the first one as published by Apple.

After that, the start-up company, Estimote, published a case of a similar company utilizing iBeacon in YouTube. O2O was favorably popular and iBeacon has also gotten attention.
It was listed with the name "iBeacons" in the presentation slides during that time, but it was not talked about more in detail.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact.
I understand.
I will cancel your previous order now. And thank you for your new purchase.
You ordered other pokemon items of OO too, so could I ship them all at once?
If so, you may be bale to save around 5 dollars of the postage. I will refund after the shipment.
If you would like me to ship separately, please let me know.

I will ship it in a few days. Please look forward to it.
I will put some bonuses too.

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Thank you for your contact.
I understand.
I will cancel your previous order now. And thank you for your new purchase.
You ordered other pokemon items of OO too, so could I ship them all at once?
If so, you may be able to save around 5 dollars of the postage. I will refund after the shipment.
If you would like me to ship separately, please let me know.

I will ship it in a few days. Please look forward to it.
I will put some bonuses too.