Ginger (amethyst) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
こんにちは。このフィギュアが作成されて売られている場所が、子供がそれらと遊んでも大丈夫な場所かどうか気になっています。
この質問をするのは、台風の影響で放射線の可能性があるということを聞いたからです。
この件については統制が行われているのでしょうか？

修正後
こんにちは。このフィギュアが作成されて売られている場所が、子供がそれらと遊んでも大丈夫な場所かどうか気になっています。
なぜこのような質問をするかというと、台風の影響で放射線の可能性があるということを聞いたからです。
この件については統制が行われているのでしょうか？

元の翻訳
I like this Tarmac SL34. This frame was displayed on eBay. My next road bicycle will have similar parts assembly with this road bicycle. I love SRAM and ENVE.

修正後
I like this Tarmac SL34. This frame was listed on eBay. My next road bicycle will have the parts assembly similar to this road bicycle. I love SRAM and ENVE.

元の翻訳
*It will be held after the concert.
* About the time of last trains to go home after participating the event, the event organisers will take no responsibility whatsoever. Please make sure you check them in advance and take a part in the event.

[Benefit 2]
When you buy the album "Mirrorball Flare + Royal Mirrorball Discotheque” , which is to be on sale on 12th March, at the event hall, you can win (one) original post card. It is first comes first served.

修正後
*It will be held after the concert.
* For going home and catching the last time, the event organizers will take no responsibility whatsoever. Please make sure you check them in advance when taking part in the event.

[Benefit 2]
When you buy the album "Mirrorball Flare + Royal Mirrorball Discotheque” , which is to be on sale on 12th March, at the event hall, you can win (one) original post card. It is first comes first served.

元の翻訳
I understood. Then please proceed on to refund.
If I receive a product that I had purchased from you, I will make its payment once again.

修正後
I understood. Then please proceed with refund process.
If I receive a product that I had purchased from you, I will make payment for it once again.