Aki (akihiro_12) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I shipped the good the other day, and I remembered there was one thing I had to tell you.

If you open the box, you will see a big envelope with a cushion inside. I put it inside so that you will not damage the snack when you try to open the box with blades like knives.
So you can just throw away the envelope after you open the box.

I shipped it with EMS, so you should receive the item soon.

修正後
I shipped the good the other day, but I forgot to tell you something.

When you open the box, you will see a big envelope with cushioning inside. I put it there so that you will not damage the snack with a blade when you try to cut the box open with a knife or something.
So you can just throw the envelope away after opening the box.

I shipped it with EMS, so you should receive the item soon.

元の翻訳
ですが、ドルでは使い道がありません・・・。私はイギリスに住んでいて、通貨がGBPなので。

でも、代替の商品を送ってくれたら大丈夫です。ドルでしか返金できないというなら使い道がないので・・・。

ですので代替の商品を送ってください。ちなみに同じ商品は取り扱われてないことは承知しています。
4つの商品の代金を支払ったので、商品A,B,C,Dをエクスプレス（速達）で送ってもらえますか。早く送るのはお金がかかってしまいますので、商品を３品、A,B,Dだけを送ってくださるよう希望します。

修正後
ですが、ドルでは使い道がありません・・・。私はイギリスに住んでいて、通貨がGBPなので。

でも、代替の商品を送ってくれたら大丈夫です。ドルでしか返金できないというなら使い道がないので・・・。

ですので代替の商品を送ってください。ちなみに同じ商品は取り扱われてないことは承知しています。
4つの商品の代金を支払ったので、商品A、B、C、Dをエクスプレス（速達）で送ってもらえますか。速達には余分にお金がかかってしまいますので、商品のうちの３品、A、B、Dだけを送って頂ければ結構です。

元の翻訳
I emailed xxx@yyy for inquiry about my order, but I haven't heard anything from you.
Also I can no longer access to the website where I placed the order.
For these reasons, I will cancel my payment for the order.

修正後
I emailed xxx@yyy to inquire about my order, but I haven't heard anything back.
Also I can no longer access the website where I placed the order.
For these reasons, I will cancel my payment for the order.

元の翻訳
I apologize for causing you inconvenience.

For the problem happened due to the system trouble, we contacted the system managing company earlier and asked them to fix it.

Now the system is working properly so the products may be purchased without problems.

Of course, products may be delivered to any place covered with EMS.

Also, for any problems or concerns, please feel free to let us know.

We appreciate your continued interest to our kitchen knives in future.

修正後
I apologize for the inconvenience.

For the problem happened due to a system failure, we contacted the system management company earlier and asked them to solve it.

Now the system is working properly so the products may be purchased without problems.

Of course, products may be delivered to any place covered by EMS.

Also, for any problems or concerns, please feel free to let us know.

We appreciate your continued interest in our kitchen knives.

元の翻訳
My two sisters are staying at my house since last month so I've been busy with chores and taking care of four kids. On top of that, my second oldest sister has health complication during pregnancy. This week my oldest sister gave a birth to a baby and he (or she - not specified in the original text) is so cute!

I wasn't sure because of my poor English skill, but are you OK with ○ and ○ being shipped together? If not, please let me know the product names of the ones you want to ship together.

The shop I go to is ◇ and they didn't have ○, so do you mind if I order them online? It will cost for shipping. As for ○, I have already ordered it. I will let you know the shipping cost for SAL to Canada as soon as I get both items.

修正後
My two sisters are staying at my house since last month so I've been busy with chores and taking care of four kids. On top of that, my second oldest sister has health complication during pregnancy. This week my oldest sister gave birth to a baby and he (or she - not specified in the original text) is so cute!

I wasn't sure because of my poor English skill, but are you OK with ○ and ○ being shipped together? If not, please let me know the product names of the ones you want to be shipped together.

The shop that I go to is ◇ and they didn't have ○, so do you mind if I order them online? That will cost us a shipping fee. As for ○, I have already ordered it. I will let you know the shipping cost for SAL to Canada as soon as I get both items.

元の翻訳
When I sent it with EMS, I accidentally put your previous address on the document.
I noticed right after I made the mistake and immediately changed it to the new address.
I was worried that the change will not be made instantly, but the post office clerk told me that it will be fine.
However, they called me the next day and said that the address change was not processed in time.
I looked at the tracking number and it said that the item was shipped yesterday to your address. If you still haven't received the item, it is highly likely that it's sitting at your previous place. Is it possible for you to go there to pick up the item? I am very sorry to cause you inconvenience and hope to get back from you soon.

修正後
When I sent it with EMS, I accidentally put your previous address on the parcel voucher.
I noticed right after I made the mistake and immediately changed it to the new address.
I was worried that the change will not be made instantly, but the post officer told me that it will be fine.
However, they called me the next day and said that the address change was not processed in time.
I checked the tracking number and it said that the item was shipped yesterday to your address. If you still haven't received the item, it is highly likely that it's delivered to your previous place. Is it possible for you to go there to pick up the item? I am very sorry to cause you inconvenience.