yosuke-oshida (yosuke-oshida) — Received Reviews

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rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 17 Jun 2014 at 19:15
Comment 頑張って書いておられるなという気持ちが伝わってきます。文章を区切るなどして内容をまとめてから英訳をされるとより明確な表現になると思いました。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 16 Jun 2014 at 13:54
original Theme of investigation In the last investigation, about the distance and speed, we got to know several usage might be available. However, in order to examine the concrete usage, we need to find out one answer. i.e. does iBeacon's radio wave pass through people or buildings? So the last 4th experiment is about the transparency of iBeacon's radio wave. Summary of Investigation We place the barriers of several materials between a Beacon terminal as the transmission and iPhone5S as the reception, find out if the notification is available.	corrected Theme of investigation Up to the last investigation, we had worked on the the distance and speed and got to know several usage might be available. However, in order to examine more concrete usage, we need to find out one answer. That is "Does iBeacon's radio wave pass through human body or buildings?" So the last 4th experiment is about the transparency of iBeacon's radio wave. Summary of Investigation We place the barriers of several materials between a Beacon terminal as the transmission and iPhone5S as the reception to find out if the notification is available.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

16 Jun 2014 at 13:54

original
Theme of investigation
In the last investigation, about the distance and speed, we got to know several usage might be available.
However, in order to examine the concrete usage, we need to find out one answer.
i.e. does iBeacon's radio wave pass through people or buildings?
So the last 4th experiment is about the transparency of iBeacon's radio wave.

Summary of Investigation
We place the barriers of several materials between a Beacon terminal as the transmission and iPhone5S as the reception, find out if the notification is available.

corrected
Theme of investigation
Up to the last investigation, we had worked on the the distance and speed and got to know several usage might be available.
However, in order to examine more concrete usage, we need to find out one answer.
That is "Does iBeacon's radio wave pass through human body or buildings?"
So the last 4th experiment is about the transparency of iBeacon's radio wave.

Summary of Investigation
We place the barriers of several materials between a Beacon terminal as the transmission and iPhone5S as the reception to find out if the notification is available.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 17 Jun 2014 at 05:10
original This time we'll have an experimentation if iBeacon can recognize how many km/h. Summary of Investigation Prepare two cars, one of them Beacon terminal equipped Another car equips the reception terminal with demo-app active Each cars passing by, then measure how many km/h can iPhone recognize An experiment with so-called relative velocity This time we set the parameter of radio wave intensity: strong.	corrected This time we'll have an experiment if iBeacon can recognize how many km/h [awkward]. Summary of Investigation Prepare two cars, one of them equipped with a Beacon terminal. Another car equips the reception terminal with demo-app active Each cars [ungrammatical] passing by, then measure how many km/h can iPhone recognize An experiment with so-called relative velocity This time we set the parameter of radio wave intensity: strong [awkward].

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English

17 Jun 2014 at 05:10

original
This time we'll have an experimentation if iBeacon can recognize how many km/h.

Summary of Investigation

Prepare two cars, one of them Beacon terminal equipped
Another car equips the reception terminal with demo-app active
Each cars passing by, then measure how many km/h can iPhone recognize
An experiment with so-called relative velocity

This time we set the parameter of radio wave intensity: strong.

corrected
This time we'll have an experiment if iBeacon can recognize how many km/h [awkward].

Summary of Investigation

Prepare two cars, one of them equipped with a Beacon terminal.
Another car equips the reception terminal with demo-app active
Each cars [ungrammatical] passing by, then measure how many km/h can iPhone recognize
An experiment with so-called relative velocity

This time we set the parameter of radio wave intensity: strong [awkward].

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 16 Jun 2014 at 23:17
original 40 km/h: reception impossible Or no reception impossible at all when moving? Finally, we tried 30 km/h, which we didn't expect any good news. Wow, one receiver did receive! The first success in 30 km/h! Why the one terminal received, depending on reception terminals? We've got some issues to be clarified, but this success is really surprising and amazing. If we consider the usage below this velocity, a slow-driving cars, for example advertising trucks, motorized bicycle, etc. may send the signal.	corrected 40 km/h: reception impossible. Or no reception is possible at all when moving? Finally, we tried 30 km/h, which we didn't expect any good news. Wow, one terminal did receive! The first success in 30 km/h! Why could just one terminal receive? Is there any dependence on reception terminals? We've got some issues to be clarified, but this success is an important outcome. If we consider usages below this velocity, slow-driving cars like advertising trucks, motorized bicycle, etc. could send the signal.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English

16 Jun 2014 at 23:17

original
40 km/h: reception impossible
Or no reception impossible at all when moving?

Finally, we tried 30 km/h, which we didn't expect any good news.

Wow, one receiver did receive!
The first success in 30 km/h!
Why the one terminal received, depending on reception terminals?
We've got some issues to be clarified, but this success is really surprising and amazing.
If we consider the usage below this velocity, a slow-driving cars, for example advertising trucks, motorized bicycle, etc. may send the signal.

corrected
40 km/h: reception impossible.
Or no reception is possible at all when moving?

Finally, we tried 30 km/h, which we didn't expect any good news.

Wow, one terminal did receive!
The first success in 30 km/h!
Why could just one terminal receive? Is there any dependence on reception terminals?
We've got some issues to be clarified, but this success is an important outcome.
If we consider usages below this velocity, slow-driving cars like advertising trucks, motorized bicycle, etc. could send the signal.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 15 Jun 2014 at 02:21
original Hello, the Item has not arrived yet,↵ could you let us know shipping updates? Best regards	corrected Hello, The corresponding item has not been delivered yet, so please let us know about the shipping status. We appreciate your cooperation.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 17 Jun 2014 at 22:25
original It often fails when you enter the characters shown on Image:, keep on entering! - Enter your credit card Choose the type of your card Enter the number of your card Enter the name of card holder in alphabet Enter expiration date of your card (shown as / in your card, Month/Year) - Enter the detail of card holder You can easily enter them by this site! Copy and paste the date converted in the site above, then it's allright. - Click Confirm on right bottom, then successfully finished!	corrected You may fails several times when you enter the characters shown on as the image. Don't give up and keep trying! - Enter your credit card information. Choose the type of your card Enter the number of your card Enter the name of card holder in alphabet Enter the expiration date of your card (shown as / in your card, Month/Year) - Enter the detail of the card holder Use this site and get them entered quickly! Just copy and paste the script converted in the site above. - Click Confirm on the bottom right corner, and then finish it!

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

17 Jun 2014 at 22:25

original
It often fails when you enter the characters shown on Image:, keep on entering!
- Enter your credit card
Choose the type of your card
Enter the number of your card
Enter the name of card holder in alphabet
Enter expiration date of your card (shown as **/** in your card, Month/Year)
- Enter the detail of card holder
You can easily enter them by this site!
Copy and paste the date converted in the site above, then it's allright.
- Click Confirm on right bottom, then successfully finished!

corrected
You may fails several times when you enter the characters shown on as the image. Don't give up and keep trying!
- Enter your credit card information.
Choose the type of your card
Enter the number of your card
Enter the name of card holder in alphabet
Enter the expiration date of your card (shown as **/** in your card, Month/Year)
- Enter the detail of the card holder
Use this site and get them entered quickly!
Just copy and paste the script converted in the site above.
- Click Confirm on the bottom right corner, and then finish it!

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 12 Jun 2014 at 00:28
original $180 plan for nine wire, wire stripping gauge, wire stripper and wooden breadboard. Choose any plan you want! - Click Continue to Action and make the account of Amazon.com - Enter your mail address and go to registration screen. Choose this. Click this button if the above is complete. - Make the account of Amazon.com Mail address for registration Enter alphanumeric characters shown on Image:	corrected $180 plan for nine wires, a wire stripping gauge, a wire stripper and a wooden breadboard. Choose any plan you want! - Click Continue to Amazon and make an account of Amazon.com - Enter your mail address and go to registration screen. Choose this. Click this button if the above is completed. - Make an account of Amazon.com Mail address for registration Enter alphanumeric characters shown on Image:

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

12 Jun 2014 at 00:28

original
$180 plan for nine wire, wire stripping gauge, wire stripper and wooden breadboard.
Choose any plan you want!

- Click Continue to Action and make the account of Amazon.com
- Enter your mail address and go to registration screen.
Choose this.
Click this button if the above is complete.
- Make the account of Amazon.com
Mail address for registration
Enter alphanumeric characters shown on Image:

corrected
$180 plan for nine wires, a wire stripping gauge, a wire stripper and a wooden breadboard.
Choose any plan you want!

- Click Continue to Amazon and make an account of Amazon.com
- Enter your mail address and go to registration screen.
Choose this.
Click this button if the above is completed.
- Make an account of Amazon.com
Mail address for registration
Enter alphanumeric characters shown on Image:

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 12 Jun 2014 at 00:26
original (GMT +9:00) is at the bottom. Now the registration to Kickstarter completed! * How to Support Next, we'll learn how to support. Amazon.com account is will be required, not Amazon.co.jp. If you don't have the account, see the following procedures. - Open the page of project that you want to support - Click Back This Project on right	corrected (GMT +9:00) is at the bottom. Now the registration to Kickstarter completed! * How to Support Next, we'll learn how to support. The account for Amazon.com will be required, not Amazon.co.jp. If you don't have the account, see the following procedures. - Open the page of the project that you want to support - Click Back This Project on right

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 10 Jun 2014 at 17:31
original Thank you! Contacts about delivery destinations, etc. when the project ends, so please wait a moment. All successfully finished? We'll keep on contributing many tools to Kickstarter, we'll be glad if you pay attention to the activities of BreadBoardManiac!	corrected Thank you! You will hear about delivery destinations, etc. after the project ends, so please wait a moment. Did all successfully finished? We'll keep on contributing many tools to Kickstarter, we'd be glad if you pay attention to the activities of BreadBoardManiac!

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 10 Jun 2014 at 17:28
original * Choose any plan and click Continue to Next Step All Gone! means that the number of supporters has reached to the quota, so you can't choose it. $14 plan only for three wires $23 plan for three wires and wire stripping gauge $39 plan for nine wires and wire stripping gauge $51 plan for wire stripping gauge and wire stripper $59 plan for nine wires, wire stripping gauge and wire stripper	corrected * Choose any plan you like and click Continue to Next Step All Gone! means that the number of supporters and has reached to the quota, so you can't choose it. $14 plan only for three wires $23 plan for three wires and wire stripping gauge $39 plan for nine wires and wire stripping gauge $51 plan for wire stripping gauge and wire stripper $59 plan for nine wires, wire stripping gauge and wire stripper

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

10 Jun 2014 at 17:28

original
* Choose any plan and click Continue to Next Step

All Gone! means that the number of supporters has reached to the quota, so you can't choose it.
$14 plan only for three wires
$23 plan for three wires and wire stripping gauge
$39 plan for nine wires and wire stripping gauge
$51 plan for wire stripping gauge and wire stripper
$59 plan for nine wires, wire stripping gauge and wire stripper

corrected
* Choose any plan you like and click Continue to Next Step

All Gone! means that the number of supporters and has reached to the quota, so you can't choose it.
$14 plan only for three wires
$23 plan for three wires and wire stripping gauge
$39 plan for nine wires and wire stripping gauge
$51 plan for wire stripping gauge and wire stripper
$59 plan for nine wires, wire stripping gauge and wire stripper

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 10 Jun 2014 at 12:49
Comment 表現の簡潔さと正確さを見直すと良い文章になると思います。今のままだと読んでいても和文の意図が英訳にしっくりとこない感じがします。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 10 Jun 2014 at 19:36
Comment よく訳されていると思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 09 Jun 2014 at 13:23
original エドヴァルド・ムンク / MOURLOT: 1 エドヴァルド・ムンクのリトグラフ。赤、青インクによる色鮮やかな色彩。1969年フランス・パリのムルロー工房にて印刷、ロサンゼルス郡立美術館にて発刊。縦横 8x6 インチの大きさを誇る上質紙に片面印刷された。ムルロー工房は20世紀を代表するリトグラフ印刷業者で、ピカソ、シャガール、ミロ、ブラック、レジェ、マティスなどといった芸術家のポスターやリトグラフ印刷で有名である。シャガール: 1 シャガール 35年物の両面印刷によるカラーリトグラフ（発刊時はセンター綴じ）元々の著作権はヴェルヴェに属する。この版は1977年ドイツ発行で状態も良く、無地の背景のマット紙に鮮やかな色彩で描かれ、19x11インチの大きさにわたる。	corrected エドヴァルド・ムンク / MOURLOT: 1 エドヴァルド・ムンクのリトグラフ。赤、青インクによる色鮮やかな色彩。1969年フランス・パリのムルロー工房にて印刷、ロサンゼルス郡立美術館にて発刊。縦横 8x6 インチの上質紙に大量に片面印刷された。ムルロー工房は20世紀を代表するリトグラフ印刷業者で、ピカソ、シャガール、ミロ、ブラック、レジェ、マティスなどといった芸術家のポスターやリトグラフ印刷で有名である。シャガール: 1 シャガール 35年物の両面印刷によるカラーリトグラフ（発刊時はセンター綴じ）元々の著作権はヴェルヴェに属する。この版は1977年ドイツ発行で状態も良く、無地の背景のマット紙に鮮やかな色彩で描かれ、19x11インチの大きさにわたる。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese

09 Jun 2014 at 13:23

original
エドヴァルド・ムンク / MOURLOT:
1 エドヴァルド・ムンクのリトグラフ。赤、青インクによる色鮮やかな色彩。1969年フランス・パリのムルロー工房にて印刷、ロサンゼルス郡立美術館にて発刊。縦横 8x6 インチの大きさを誇る上質紙に片面印刷された。ムルロー工房は20世紀を代表するリトグラフ印刷業者で、ピカソ、シャガール、ミロ、ブラック、レジェ、マティスなどといった芸術家のポスターやリトグラフ印刷で有名である。

シャガール:
1 シャガール 35年物の両面印刷によるカラーリトグラフ（発刊時はセンター綴じ）元々の著作権はヴェルヴェに属する。この版は1977年ドイツ発行で状態も良く、無地の背景のマット紙に鮮やかな色彩で描かれ、19x11インチの大きさにわたる。

corrected
エドヴァルド・ムンク / MOURLOT:
1 エドヴァルド・ムンクのリトグラフ。赤、青インクによる色鮮やかな色彩。1969年フランス・パリのムルロー工房にて印刷、ロサンゼルス郡立美術館にて発刊。縦横 8x6 インチの上質紙に大量に片面印刷された。ムルロー工房は20世紀を代表するリトグラフ印刷業者で、ピカソ、シャガール、ミロ、ブラック、レジェ、マティスなどといった芸術家のポスターやリトグラフ印刷で有名である。

シャガール:
1 シャガール 35年物の両面印刷によるカラーリトグラフ（発刊時はセンター綴じ）元々の著作権はヴェルヴェに属する。この版は1977年ドイツ発行で状態も良く、無地の背景のマット紙に鮮やかな色彩で描かれ、19x11インチの大きさにわたる。

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