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rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 17 Oct 2014 at 15:35
original たまごを割らなきゃ、オムレツは作れない。 ↵ tamago (egg) wo waranakya (if you don't break a), omuretsu (omelet) ha tukurenai (can't make).	corrected たまごを割らなきゃ、オムレツは作れない。

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 17 Oct 2014 at 01:34
original As much as the sun shines, so also does (my) hope shine.	corrected As long as the sun shines, so does (my) hope.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 17 Oct 2014 at 01:33
original 1- As long as the sun shines, there will be hope.↵ ↵ ↵ 2- As long as the sun shines, hope will shine as well.	corrected As long as the sun shines, so does the hope.↵

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 17 Oct 2014 at 01:32
original As long as the sun shines, hope shines. ↵ これはそのまま直訳できると思います。	corrected As long as the sun shines, so does the hope.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 22 Oct 2014 at 13:23
original ルンバはiRobot社が製造・販売する自動掃除機です。ルンバは2002年に登場し [1]、以来、何回かのアップデートと新モデルが発表されています。2008年1月現在で、250万台以上が販売されています。	corrected ルンバはiRobot社が製造・販売する自動掃除機です。ルンバは2002年に発売され、以来、何回かのアップデートと新機種が発表されています。2008年1月現在で、250万台以上が販売されています。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 22 Oct 2014 at 13:22
Comment 適確な訳で良いと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 22 Oct 2014 at 13:21
original Roomba (ルーンバ[1]) は iRobot (社[2]) のロボット型掃除機です。 Roombaは2002年に発表され、それ以後何度かの改良[3]やモデルチェンジ[4]を経てきました。 2008年１月の時点では、250万台以上が売れています。 [1] "ルーンバ" is a Japanese Katakana form of the product name. You may use this, or you can simply stick with the English name.↵ [2] "社" simply means "company". Although it is not necessary, It is more formal in Japanese writing to put this character after the company name.↵ [3] "改良" simply means "improvement". If you wanna stick with the original English sentence and use "update" instead, you can replace this word with "アップデート". Although, "アップデート" may only be common over people who works in IT or Engineering fields.↵ [4] Rather than saying "new model", Japanese people oftern use "モデルチェンジ(model change)". It does not sound that good in English but it is a common 'Japanese English'.	corrected Roomba (ルンバ) は iRobotのロボット型掃除機です。 Roombaは2002年に発表され、それ以後何度か改良やモデルチェンジを経てきました。 2008年１月の時点で、250万台以上販売されています。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese

22 Oct 2014 at 13:21

original
Roomba (ルーンバ[1]) は iRobot (社[2]) のロボット型掃除機です。
Roombaは2002年に発表され、それ以後何度かの改良[3]やモデルチェンジ[4]を経てきました。
2008年１月の時点では、250万台以上が売れています。

[1] "ルーンバ" is a Japanese Katakana form of the product name. You may use this, or you can simply stick with the English name.↵
[2] "社" simply means "company". Although it is not necessary, It is more formal in Japanese writing to put this character after the company name.↵
[3] "改良" simply means "improvement". If you wanna stick with the original English sentence and use "update" instead, you can replace this word with "アップデート". Although, "アップデート" may only be common over people who works in IT or Engineering fields.↵
[4] Rather than saying "new model", Japanese people oftern use "モデルチェンジ(model change)". It does not sound that good in English but it is a common 'Japanese English'.

corrected
Roomba (ルンバ) は iRobotのロボット型掃除機です。
Roombaは2002年に発表され、それ以後何度か改良やモデルチェンジを経てきました。
2008年１月の時点で、250万台以上販売されています。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 17 Oct 2014 at 01:30
original When you give up the game, you will lose it.	corrected If you give up the game, you will lose it.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 17 Oct 2014 at 01:29
original If you give up，game is over	corrected If you give up，the game will be over there.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 17 Oct 2014 at 01:28
original It's the time the game were over when you give up.	corrected If you give in, the game will be over there.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 17 Oct 2014 at 01:28
original If you give up that's the end of the game !	corrected If you give up, that's the end of the game !

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 17 Oct 2014 at 01:27
original If you quit or gave up, then the game's over.	corrected If you give in, the game will be over.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 15 Oct 2014 at 12:43
Comment 良いと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 15 Oct 2014 at 12:43
original 手紙の返事を早くしなかった事、許してください。	corrected 手紙の返事を早くしなかった事、お許しください。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 15 Oct 2014 at 12:43
Comment 状況に応じて文の長さを調整する必要があると思いますが、良い文章だと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 15 Oct 2014 at 12:41
Comment 良いと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 27 Oct 2014 at 11:38
original You beat me, twice!! Even my father’s never beaten me!	corrected You beat me twice! Even my father’s never done that to me!

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 27 Oct 2014 at 11:38
original You hit me twice! Even my father has never hit me!	corrected You hit me twice! Even my father has never done that to me!

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 27 Oct 2014 at 11:38
original You hit me twice! Even my father never hit me before!	corrected You hit me twice! Even my father never did that to me before!

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 27 Oct 2014 at 11:37
original You slapped me twice! I've never even been slapped by my own dad!	corrected You hit me twice! I've never even been hit by my own dad!

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 27 Oct 2014 at 11:35
original [You/He/She] hit me twice! I hadn't even been hit by my father [before/in my life]!↵ ↵ 「I hadn't even been hit by my father」だけで「親父にもぶたれたことないのに」になりますが、↵ 「before」をつけると「今の今までは～」という強調がつくのでニュアンス的には近いかもしれません。↵ 「in my life」をつけると「人生で～」というニュアンスがつくので、かなり大げさな雰囲気が出ます。	corrected You hit me twice! Not even my father has done that to me ever!

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

27 Oct 2014 at 11:35

original
[You/He/She] hit me twice! I hadn't even been hit by my father [before/in my life]!↵
↵
「I hadn't even been hit by my father」だけで「親父にもぶたれたことないのに」になりますが、↵
「before」をつけると「今の今までは～」という強調がつくのでニュアンス的には近いかもしれません。↵
「in my life」をつけると「人生で～」というニュアンスがつくので、かなり大げさな雰囲気が出ます。

corrected
You hit me twice! Not even my father has done that to me ever!

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 27 Oct 2014 at 11:32
original He hit me twice! Even my Dad has never hit me.	corrected You hit me twice! Even my dad has never done that to me!

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 15 Oct 2014 at 03:32
Comment 良いと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 15 Oct 2014 at 03:32
original オバマは、北朝鮮の暴挙に対して「只事でない事態だ！」との声明を発してる。	corrected オバマは、北朝鮮に対して「重大な懸念である」との声明を発表している。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 15 Oct 2014 at 03:31
original オバマ大統領は、北朝鮮に関する"深刻な懸念"についての声明を発表した。	corrected オバマ大統領は北朝鮮に関する「深刻な懸念」についての声明を発表した。

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