chidokoko (naoko_horigome330) — Written Reviews

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rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 06 Aug 2013 at 23:31
Comment とても参考になります。I have learned a lot from this translation. Thank you!

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 18 Jun 2013 at 23:53
original Thank you for your immediate response. Is it correct that you couldn't understand? A real loft is one of the most important information for customers in purchasing. I'm afraid that you didn't write the loft down before shipping. Please be careful not to do the same thing again after this. Is it you who wrote the number of the specification sheet? If you don't mind, I'll happy that you would write more politely. I hope to continue to do business with you.	corrected Thank you for your immediate response. Is it correct that you couldn't understand? A real loft is one of the most important information for customers in purchasing. I'm afraid that you didn't write the loft down before shipping. Please be careful not to do the same thing again after this. Is it you who wrote the number of the specification sheet? If you don't mind, I'll be happy that you would write more politely. I hope to continue to do business with you.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

18 Jun 2013 at 23:53

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 13 Jun 2013 at 23:44
Comment 依頼者提供のリンクで原文ページをご覧になりましたか？原文の執筆者は男性のようです。訳文は少し女性っぽい感じがしますが・・・。いずれにせよ、商品(システム)に関するレビュー記事のようなので、全体的な表現が少しくだけすぎかもしれませんね。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 19 Jun 2013 at 00:24
original 私は90よりも遥かに上手く行うことはできません。16個の注文でシャフト1個無料、または、20個の注文でシャフト2個ではいかがでしょうか。	corrected 私はなかなか90を切ることができません。16個の注文でシャフト1個無料、または、20個の注文でシャフト2個ではいかがでしょうか。

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 01 Jun 2013 at 08:15
Comment 訳しにくい文章に良く取り組まれたと思います。できあがった日本文の意味が分かりにくいので、もう少し推敲された方がよろしいかと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 01 Jun 2013 at 07:47
Comment 原文に誤りがあっても、うまく訳されていると思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 07 Jun 2013 at 11:17
original Thank you very much for your attentive reply. I heartily appreciate your kindness. Could you make a smiling baby doll like a baby shown in the picture and send it to Japan at $ 300 including the shipping charge (as a result of $ 100 discount as you proposed)? The details are as follows; the color of the hair is black or dark brown, a magnetic teething ring is attached, and the dress is pink. I want to have the picture of it after it is made. If my proposal is OK, please send me an invoice. I will pay all the money by June 2. I am looking forward to having your favorite reply.↵	corrected Thank you very much for your attentive reply. I heartily appreciate your kindness. Could you make a smiling baby doll like a baby shown in the picture and send it to Japan at $ 300 including the shipping charge (as a result of $ 100 discount as you proposed)? The details are as follows; the color of the hair is black or dark brown, a magnetic teething ring is attached, and the dress is pink. I want to have the picture of it after it is made. If my proposal is OK, please send me an invoice. I will pay up by June 2. I am looking forward to having your favorable reply.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

07 Jun 2013 at 11:17