Caleb Howe (mestre7) Written Reviews

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About 11 years ago Male
Australia
English (Native) Japanese
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mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English
04 Dec 2014 at 18:19
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
07 Oct 2013 at 09:53
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
07 Oct 2013 at 09:18
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
02 Oct 2013 at 14:31
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
02 Oct 2013 at 14:37
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My only comment is that お菓子 refers to sweets or confectionary, so just saying ‘food’ may be slightly too broad. But that’s nitpicking; th...
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
02 Oct 2013 at 14:53
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 12:13
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Smooth English, accurate text.
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 16:06
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The final paragraph is a little clumsy, and it could read a little more naturally all the way through, but on the whole it’s quite good.
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 08:16
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Dollers s/b dollars.
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 12:16
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「私はたくさんのお客を持っています。」is saying that the writer has many customers, rather than that the customers own guitars, I’m fairly sure. Otherwise, ...
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 08:15
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Both smooth and accurate.
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 13:19
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と言うか -> “Actually,” is a very useful phrasing I’m going to have to keep in mind myself.
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 12:31
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The first sentence fails to convey that the advertising methods were mainstream, nor that they were analog (アナログ), and also fails to conv...
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 12:42
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I’m not sure I see where you find the word “hidden” in the first sentence, but perhaps there is more subtext to キリシタン than I realise. “Be...
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 12:55
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It’s more natural to say “an obstacle to” than “an obstacle against”; similarly it would be more natural to say “lose our trust entirely....
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 13:03
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The plural in the first sentence is slightly off; you can say “every Japanese product” or “all Japanese products”, but not “every Japanes...
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 13:11
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I’m afraid this doesn’t read as good English, though it is quite accurate. I feel that the opening using 私 rather than 私たち would imply...
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 13:17
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Once again, both smooth and accurate.
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 13:54
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There’s a couple of points where the reading is a little unnatural, but it’s accurate and mostly very smooth.
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 14:01
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My only concern is with the phrase “Media like EC” from メディア化するEC, but I’m not sure I can think of a translation that would be better. On...
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 13:57
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This is very smooth; I like it.
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 14:07
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This looks accurate and smooth.
mestre7 rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
20 Mar 2013 at 14:04
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The tense for the first sentence implies that the writer is asking when the product will be sent (in the future).