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Dien LIm (dienlim90) — Received Reviews

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About 9 years ago Male 30s
Indonesia
Indonesian (Native) Japanese English
Advertising Food/Recipe/Menu Culture Travel

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yyokoba rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English
22 Aug 2015 at 20:00
Comment
Grammatical errors: e.g. "it shown", "There are uneven coating", "outline does not noticeable", "how the progress" and many others. Typo...
yyokoba rated this translation result as ★ Japanese → English
19 Aug 2015 at 17:56
Comment
The quality of translation is very bad. No grammatical sense at all. At least some parts of the text seem like Google translation. Fo...
nearlynative rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
20 Aug 2015 at 21:30

original
盗難を避けるように、請求書にルイ·ヴィトンではなくて"ジムバッグ"を書いてください。
不要な注目を集めるしないように値段はは６０ドール書いたほうがいいと思います。

corrected
盗難を避けるために、請求書にルイ·ヴィトンは伏せて"ジムバッグ"を書いてください。
不要な注目を集めないように値段はは６０ドル書いていただければと思います。↵
ご協力ありがとうございます。

greene rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
19 Aug 2015 at 00:09

original
盗難を避けるように、請求書にルイ·ヴィトンではなくて"ジムバッグ"を書いてください。
不要な注目を集めるしないように値段はは６０ドール書いたほうがいいと思います。

corrected
盗難を避けるべく、請求書にはルイ·ヴィトンではなく"ジムバッグ"と書いてください。
不要な注目を集めぬよう、値段は６０ドルと書いてください。

mame6 rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
18 Aug 2015 at 18:14

original
盗難を避けるように、請求書にルイ·ヴィトンではなくて"ジムバッグ"を書いてください。
不要な注目を集めるしないように値段はは６０ドール書いたほうがいいと思います。

corrected
盗難を防ぐため、請求書にはルイ·ヴィトンではなく"ジムバッグ"と書いてください。
不要な注目を集めないように値段は６０ドルと書いたほうがいいと思います。

tourmaline rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
18 Aug 2015 at 14:50

original
盗難を避けるように、請求書にルイ·ヴィトンではなくて"ジムバッグ"を書いてください。
不要な注目を集めるしないように値段はは６０ドール書いたほうがいいと思います。

corrected
盗難を避けるために、請求書にルイ·ヴィトンではなくて"ジムバッグ"と書いてください。
不要な注目を集めないように値段は６０ドルと書いたほうがいいと思います。

yoppo1026 rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
18 Aug 2015 at 09:26

original
I heard sometimes that delivery trouble occurs in your country.
It takes a little time to purchase because of auction. Please wait.
We are stocking the genuine one.
Please wait because now we are checking.
Please let me know if there are any japanese goods you.
I'm sorry, I couldn't find the goods you are looking for.
i lost the goods during the delivery.
Please wait for the reply a little longer because i have to go now.
...day...hour i will contact you as soon as possible for the return

corrected
I heard that delivery trouble sometimes occurs in your country.
It takes a little time to purchase because of auction. Please wait.
We are stocking the genuine one.
Please wait because now we are checking.
Please let me know if there are any Japanese goods you.
I'm sorry, I couldn't find the goods you are looking for.
I lost the goods during the delivery.
Please wait for the reply a little longer because I have to go now.
...day...hour I will contact you as soon as possible for the return.