龘ノ宮煕道 (cheekytwat96) — Received Reviews

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These days I haven't been practicing any musical instruments as much.

During rush hours, Japanese trains are more than packed.

We'll have to walk quite a distance to transfer at this station.

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These days, I haven't been practicing any musical instruments that much.

The trains in Japan are really packed with people.

The distance that we have to travel to transfer to this station is quite long.

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Makoto is quite a natural worrier but also happens to be a kind person.
He is a good friend of Haruka, who is able to feel thoughts and emotions of his without the use of words.
However, she must admit that she is constantly under stress as he never stops himself from diving in to any pool of water he sees.
But what I like about him is how he is always able to "understand and watch over" Haruka.
Not only is he concerned about Haruka and Nagisa, but also Rin, who goes to a different school.
Albeit he sometimes is a little cowardly, he is also quite matured and so the others do feel rather happy to trust and rely on him.

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Makoto is a worrier, but he’s a kind person.
He is a good friend of Haruka. He understands Haruka even though Haruka doesn’t express his thoughts or emotions.
Makoto gets worried a lot because Haruka tries to jump in any pool of water that he sees.
What I like about him is how can always understand and keep a close eye on Haruka.
He’s not only concerned about Haruka and Nagisa, who are always with him, but he’s also concerned about Rin who attends a different school.
Albeit he is sometimes a little cowardly, he is quite mature compared to the others. He is a good mediator, so others rely on him.

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Haruka and Nagisa is currently in the swimming club, but Rei, who will be coming in soon, is also quite a character; Seems like Makoto will have a lot more to worry about...

He managed to be the manager of the club (somehow with the flow), I am expecting him to be relied more and more from a lot of people!

Keep it up Makoto! Don't cry even if Haruka's in fer swimsuit!!

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Haruka and Nagisa are currently in the swimming club, but Rei, who will be coming in soon, is also quite a character. It seems like Makoto will have a lot more to worry about.

He managed to (by some chance) become the manager of the club. I am expecting that more and more people will be relying on him.

Good luck Makoto! Don't cry even if Haruka's in a swimsuit!

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Considering his mastery in both knowledge and skill in programming, I think it is best to let him to spend some time to teach others and make it useful.

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Considering his mastery in both knowledge and skill in programming, I think it is best to let him spend some time teaching others and make it useful.

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ですが、もし宜しければ英語の取扱説明書をお送りしますので日本語に翻訳して頂き、こちらに送り返して頂ければPDF形式にフォーマット致します。
作成の費用に関してですが、日本語に翻訳されたものを印刷して製品に同梱する事は致しません。我々は印刷を専門としている別の会社に印刷を担当させており、契約上、説明書などは2000部以上発注しない限り受け付けて頂けませんので、当然そちらに2000部もの説明書など必要ないでしょうし、そもそも現実的ではないとお見受けします。
上記の事を踏まえた上での私の提案は、デジタル形式で説明書を作成し、そちらのウェブサイト上にアップロードしてユーザーがダウンロードできるにしてはいかがでしょうか、というものです。

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ですが、もし宜しければ英語の取扱説明書をお送りしますので日本語に翻訳して頂き、こちらに送り返して頂ければPDF形式にフォーマット致します。
作成の費用に関してですが、日本語に翻訳されたものを印刷して製品に同梱する事は致しません。印刷は別の会社に委託しており、説明書は2000部未満では引き受けてもらえないのです。しかし2000部以上も発注するというのは、御社にとって現実的でないかと存じます。
上記の事を踏まえた上での私の提案は、デジタル形式で説明書を作成し、そちらのウェブサイト上にアップロードしてユーザーがダウンロードできるようにしてはいかがでしょうか、というものです。

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ooは米国に登記され、現在商品の製造及び流通を行っている支社は香港に登記されています。

製造は中国で行われ、製造所も中国に配置されているので製品は全て中国から出荷及び輸送されています。
製品は中国から全世界を対象に直接配送され、日本にはDHLエキスプレスかUPSエキスプレスを使ってお届けしています。

ooの製品取扱説明書は全て英語で表記され、そのうち簡単な説明書は商品と同梱され、我々のウェブサイトにはより詳細な情報を記載した説明書が二種類掲載されています。そのうちの一つはハードウェア用、もう片方はソフトウェア用の取扱説明書で双方共英語で表記されています。
残念ながらそれらを日本語に翻訳できる者が居ないので、現在日本語の説明書を持ちあわせておりません。

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ooは米国に登記され、現在商品の製造及び流通を行っている支社は香港に登記されています。

その会社の製造は中国で行われ、当社の製造所も中国に配置されているので製品は全て中国から出荷及び輸送されています。
製品は中国から全世界を対象に直接配送され、日本にはDHLエキスプレスかUPSエキスプレスを使ってお届けしています。

ooの製品取扱説明書は全て英語で表記され、そのうち簡単な説明書は商品と同梱され、我々のウェブサイトにはより詳細な情報を記載した説明書が二種類掲載されています。そのうちの一つはハードウェア用、もう片方はソフトウェア用の取扱説明書で双方共英語で表記されています。
残念ながらそれらを日本語に翻訳できる者が居ないので、現在日本語の説明書を持ちあわせておりません。

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Hi there! It's been a while since I've messaged you before.
I was actually hospitalized to get an operation done but no worries, I'm slowly getting my health back and got myself out a few days ago.
Now I'm really looking forward to get back to work! :)
Having said that, I think your work is a tough one so please do keep your health in mind!

As for the Raptor Body, I'm planning to start working on it again at some point this month.
My wife showed me the pictures of your race on facebook while I was in the hospital, and it really helped me keep up!
Wish you the best of luck in your race!

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Hi there! It's been a while since my last email.
I was actually hospitalized to get an operation done, but no worries, I'm slowly getting my health back and got myself out a few days ago.
Now I'm really looking forward to getting back to work! :)
Having said that, I think your work is a tough one, so please do keep your health in mind!

As for the Raptor Body, I'm planning to start working on it again at some point this month.
My wife showed me your photos on Facebook while I was in the hospital, and they really cheered me up!
I wish you the best of luck in your race!