劉　氷（Ryuu hyouu) (billwin1013) — Received Reviews

original
1.
推荐菜肴

2.
虽然可以再套餐菜单中点本菜肴
还可以单点哟。

3.
本材料虽然可以单点，
也可以通过这个套餐（套餐）菜单点哟。

corrected
1.
推荐菜品

2.
可通过点套餐来享用本菜品，
也可以单点。

3.
本菜品可单点，
也可通过点套餐享用。

original
開始在線學習
任何地方都可以快樂學習

corrected
开始在线学习
任何地方都可以快乐学习

original
I require the actula product.

If can't the actual product,i want to cancel the order.
Please refund whole amount.

If can't cancel the order, i will use protection program for buyer of Paypal to request the claim.

corrected
I require the actual product.

If I do not receive the item I request, I would like to cancel the order.
Please refund me the whole amount.

If I cannnot cancel it, I will use the protection program for buyers by Paypal to complain.

original
I was waiting for your reply.
I think you are busy after finishing exhibition in Japan.
I'm looking forward to working with together.
Let's have a talk about work in Japan.
You can't get in touch with me until Mondy.

corrected
I was waiting for your reply.
I think you have been busy since you finished the exhibition in Japan.
I am looking forward to working with you.
Let's have a talk about work in Japan.
I am afraid you fail to get in touch with me until next Monday.