anydoor — Written Reviews
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Over 12 years ago
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rated this translation result as ★★
Japanese → English
19 Dec 2012 at 19:05
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Comment Mr.は不要なのでとる。全体を直しました。 「Really popular, you see it all the time in Japan. I should make an exclusive Mike Suzuki Samurai TSCO and send i... |
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rated this translation result as ★★
Japanese → English
19 Dec 2012 at 18:59
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Comment 「The Suzuki Samurai TSCO version exclusive to Mike is also made and sent .(lol) Please show me to take a picture side by side with a real... |
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rated this translation result as ★★
Japanese → English
19 Dec 2012 at 18:49
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Comment 全体的に直しました。 Thank you in so many ways for your kindness!! When I told my friends about Mike, they were so excited!! The fact that we wi... |
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rated this translation result as ★★★★★
Japanese → English
19 Dec 2012 at 18:30
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Comment まず、（笑はlolですね。なので(laughs)の部分を(lol)に変える。 「Otaka thought that we made it ourselves (laughs).」の部分を「They thought that I made it myself (lol).... |
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rated this translation result as ★★★★
Japanese → English
17 Dec 2012 at 15:10
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Comment 「This is kohinokuma2012 that purchased the item in eBay the other day.」ではなく、「This is kohinokuma2012 who purchased the item on eBay the o... |
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rated this translation result as ★★★
English → Japanese
10 Dec 2012 at 11:00
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Comment 2行目「私たちの商品ラインアップで一番低品質の～」の部分は、在庫切れについて言っているので、「qty」をquantityと理解し、「最も在庫数が少ない」ということだと思います。 その他の部分は大変良い翻訳ですね。 |
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rated this translation result as ★★★★
Japanese → English
10 Dec 2012 at 11:12
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Comment make sure the parcel wrapped >> make sure the parcel is wrapped (isが抜けていました) 他の部分は良い翻訳だと思います。 |
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rated this translation result as ★★★★
Japanese → English
10 Dec 2012 at 11:10
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Comment 梱包する：do the packing>>pack/package it 他の部分は良い翻訳ですね。 |
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rated this translation result as ★★★
Japanese → English
10 Dec 2012 at 11:20
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Comment "When I tracked it by USPS, it shows that it has been delivered." The tense must match, so it should be "When I tracked it on USPS, it s... |
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rated this translation result as ★★★★★
Japanese → English
10 Dec 2012 at 11:37
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Comment 4行目、「When you come, be sure to look for Maru!」>>「まるを誘って」なので、「When you come, be sure to invite Maru!」だと思います。 他の部分は大変良い翻訳ですね。 |
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rated this translation result as ★★★★
Japanese → English
10 Dec 2012 at 12:23
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Comment いくつか指摘しておきます。 ・1行目"When we hear the siren of an ambulance or the announcement" (theをaにする) --> "When we hear a siren of an ambulance or a... |
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rated this translation result as ★★★
Japanese → English
10 Dec 2012 at 12:11
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Comment いくつか下記に指摘しました。 "it is what is called as a conditioned response." asは不要ですので、--> "it is what is called a conditioned response." "Once it... |
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rated this translation result as ★★★★
English → Japanese
09 Dec 2012 at 20:11
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Comment 原文からはこのように訳すのが精一杯ですよね。 |
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rated this translation result as ★★★
English → Japanese
09 Dec 2012 at 20:26
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Comment 2行目の「もっと安く売られているお店はありますでしょうか」→「値下げをお願いできますでしょうか」だと思います。 その他の部分は概ね良いですね。 |
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rated this translation result as ★★★★★
English → Japanese
09 Dec 2012 at 20:31
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Comment 細かいところですが、商品名「～in Black」のところは「黒」とした方が良いのではと思いました。 他は大変素晴らしい訳だと思います。 |
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rated this translation result as ★★★
English → Japanese
30 Nov 2012 at 12:48
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Comment 「返金金額のタイプとして」→「返金金額を入力し、」 その他の翻訳はとても良いと思います。 |
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rated this translation result as ★★★
Japanese → English
17 Dec 2012 at 14:49
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Comment 「また、商品を購入することになったら、是非連絡させてください。」の部分は主語が語り手なので、 "Also, if you're going to purchase anything, please contact me." ではなく、"I'll let you know ... |
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rated this translation result as ★★★
Japanese → English
17 Dec 2012 at 14:58
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Comment まず、グリコはGurikoではなく、Glicoですね。 5行目の「創造性をくすぐる～」の部分は、The toy tickles the children their creativity and has endless possibilities! ではなく、>> A v... |
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rated this translation result as ★★★★
English → Japanese
27 Nov 2012 at 15:07
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Comment とても自然な訳で良いです。 |
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rated this translation result as ★★
English → Japanese
27 Nov 2012 at 15:13
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Comment 残念ながら良い翻訳とは言えないと思います。 ですます調が統一されていませんし、「持つ」の使い方も不自然です。 |