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Rating: 44 / Native Japanese / 1 Review / 06 Dec 2017 at 14:32
購入します。
先日もメールを送らせて頂きましたが、ブラックフライデーの時の価格、
もしくは少し安くで購入出来ませんか?
よろしくお願い致します。
I will buy it.
As I mentioned in the mail the other day, would it be possible for me to buy it in the same price as the one on Black Friday, or in a little cheaper price than the retail price?
I would be happy if you can consider above.
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I will buy it.
As I mentioned in the mail the other day, would it be possible for me to buy it in the same price as the one on Black Friday, or in a little cheaper price than the retail price?
I would be happy if you can consider above.
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I will buy it.
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As mentioned in a previous mail, can I buy it on a Black Friday price or on a discount?
I will be happy if you can consider the above.
The second sentence is a little too wordy; it can be shortened. The final sentence is missing a "the."