Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )
Rating: 50 / 1 Review / 06 Dec 2017 at 14:36
購入します。
先日もメールを送らせて頂きましたが、ブラックフライデーの時の価格、
もしくは少し安くで購入出来ませんか?
よろしくお願い致します。
I will purchase it.
Although I emailed the other day, would you mind making discount for me like the same price on Black Friday , or cheaper than usual?
Thank you for your consideration.
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I will purchase it.
Although I emailed the other day, would you mind making discount for me like the same price on Black Friday , or cheaper than usual?
Thank you for your consideration.
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I will buy it.
As mentioned in a previous mail, can I buy it on a Black Friday price or on a discount?
Thank you for your consideration.
In the first sentence, "buy" sounds more natural. The second sentence can be shortened.