[Translation from Japanese to English ] I rephrased our whole article by focusing on the sentence where extract from ...

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査読に対する返信です。目上に対する丁寧な翻訳を何卒よろしくお願い申し上げます。

Original text

other published articlesからの引用を記載していない文章を重点的に、私たちのarticle全体をrephraseしました。特に大きな修正をした文章については本文中に赤色で示しました。また、文章全体をXX会社にて英文校正を依頼しました。引用文献を記載した文章に関しては小さな修正にとどまっておりますことをご了承いただければ幸いです。修正されたarticleが貴誌に受け入れられる内容になっているものと強く信じております。どうかよろしくお願いいたします。

Translation / English

I rephrased our whole article by focusing on the sentence where extract from other published articles is not listed. I highlighted the sentence that was corrected heavily with red. I also asked XX to edit English. Would you understand that regarding the sentence where extracted document is listed small correction is made? I strongly believe that the corrected article must be written to be accepted in your journal. Thank you for your understanding.

Translation / English

From the other published articles that was not written the references , we rephrased entire of article and make emphasized on important point. Specially, with the article that made large revision, we marked it with the red color on the article. Besides, we have the xx publish company correct their English translation of entire article. We hope for your understanding about the fact that with the article with the references, our action was not larger than few of revision. We strongly believe that the revision we made was closed to the content received from the original publish company. Thank you and Best Regards.

Translation / English

I rephrased our article, especially the part that we did not quote from the other published articles. I highlighted the sentences where I changed a lot in red. I also asked XX company for English proofreading. Please note that we made a small modifications of the sentences quoted from the references. I strongly believe that our article can be accepted in your magazine. I am looking forwards to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Translation / English

We rephrased our whole article focusing on the writing which does not state quotations from other published articles. We show writing with major revisions particularly in red in context. Also, we requested XX Company for English proofreading of the whole writing. We ask for your kind understanding that only minor revisions were done for the writing stating citation. We firmly believe that the revised article is a content which is acceptable for your magazine. Thank you in advance.