Notice of Conyac Termination

[Translation from Japanese to English ] I am really sorry, but I would like to request some adjustment. I felt the co...

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Requested by [deleted user] at 24 Aug 2016 at 13:17 1131 views
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本当に申し訳ありません。いくつか修正があります。目の色が明るいように感じました。この写真のような、ダークブルーやネイビーでお願いします。目の入れ方は、黒目が中心に寄っている寄り目でお願いします。このお写真の目のように真ん中に寄っている目にしたいです。前髪や横髪をこのようにしてください。この写真のポーズと同じポーズを1枚撮影してください。鼻水をもう少し多くしてほしいです。お口の左と右からもたれるよだれが欲しいです。お手数をお掛け致しますが、よろしくお願い申し上げます。

ka28310
Rating 44
Translation / English
- Posted at 24 Aug 2016 at 13:25
I am really sorry, but I would like to request some adjustment. I felt the color of the eyes is a little too bright. Can you change the color to dark blue or navy shown in this picture attached? Regarding the layout of black eyes, please put black eyes in bozz-eyed way a little. As this picture shows, I like the black eyes in a little centralized and bozz-eyed layout. Please arrange front hair and side hair in this way. Please shoot a photo of the same pose of the doll as the one in this picture. I need more snivel. I also need drool coming out from the right and the left side of the mouth. I am sorry for bothering you, but I appreciate your support.
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transcontinents
Rating 52
Translation / English
- Posted at 24 Aug 2016 at 13:21
I'm really sorry. There are several things that need to be corrected. I thought color of eyes was bright. Please make them in dark blue or navy as in this photo. Please put pupils close to the center. I'd like it to have crossed eyes like the ones in this photo. Please arrange front and side hair like this. Please take a photo of same pose as this photo. Please increase running nose a little more. I want saliva dribbling from left and right sides of the mouth. I'm afraid to take your time, but I appreciate your kind arrangements.
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mayumits
Rating 48
Translation / English
- Posted at 24 Aug 2016 at 13:28
I am so sorry. I have to inform you about some correction. I think the color of eyes seems to be bright. I would like to have those with the dark blue or the navy like in the pictures. Regarding the position of the eyes, the black eyes are gathering to center, which is the cross-eyed style. Please make the from and side hair like this style. Please take a picture in the same posture of the picture. Please put the runny nose a little more. I want to put the dribble from both left and right side of the mouth. I am sorry for bothering you. Thank you for your cooperation.
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