迅速に返金してくれてありがとう。
しかし、私が当初支払った3658ドルには158ドル足りません。
わたしはあなたのオークション出品時の記述を信じてこのサックスを買いました。でも、あなたが書いて記述と違って実際のサックスは酷く壊れていました。
However, it was $158 short for $3658 what I paid originally.
I purchased this saxophone because I trusted the description you listed on the auction. However, the actual saxophone is heavily damaged. It was nothing like your listing description.
But it's short by $158 to $3658 which I paid at first.
I purchased this saxophone believing your description when it was listed on the auction. But in fact, the saxophone was terribly damaged not as your description.
However, the refund amt is short of 158 dollars from the 3,658 dollars that I paid at first.
I bought this saxophone believing to the description you wrote at your auction exhibition. But there was lot of difference in the actual and the one you wrote. The real saxophone was terribly broken.
わたしは返送時の送料と関税に支払った金額を損害被りました。
この損害は、あなたが偽らずにサックスの故障の状態を記述していれば発生しなかった損害です。
なぜなら、壊れていると分かっていたら私はあなたのサックスに入札はしていませんから。
返送分の送料は請求しませんが、私が当初支払った3658の返金を強く要求します。
この要求は通常のこの業界のスタンダードであると思います。
ので残りの158ドルを返金してください。よろしく。
This loss would not have been caused if you addressed the broken condition correctly without making false statement because I would have never bid for the broken saxophone.
I am not asking for the return shipping charge, however, I strongly demand to refund me the entire purchased amount of $3658.
This demand is normal standard in this industry.
Therefore, please refund me the rest of $158. Thank you for your understanding.
This loss wouldn't be caused by If you describe the damaged condition of the saxophone without disguise.
The reason is that i didn't bid your saxophone if had knew it was broken.
I think my request is as the standard of this market.
Therefore, I ask you to refund the remaining $158.
Thank you.
If you had first described to me first of the saxophone broken condition then this damage wont have been happened.
Was it because, then I wont had bid for the saxophone?
I will not demand the postage of refund, but will strongly demand repayment of the 3,658 dollars that I paid at first.
Such demand is a standard/normal in this business.
Please refund the remaining 158 dollars.
Thank you.
この文章は訂正したんです。。
If you had first described to me first of the saxophone broken condition then this damage wont have been happened.
訂正文章ーー>If you had first described to me the true condition of saxophone then this damage won't have been happened.
I strongly claim the refund of $3658 as I paid you at first, though I don't say that I demand the shipping cost. 訳抜けがありました。大変申し訳ございません。最後から2番目の文ですが、もし少し丁寧にされたい場合「would you refund the~」となります。
さらに丁寧にするには「I would appreciate if you refund me~」ですが、この場合のお取り引きで強気のニュアンスを出されるなら上のどちらかが適切かも知れません。