[Translation from Japanese to English ] I got a good score on the test so teacher gave me a treat. It was so deliciou...

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上の文章はthat’s whyを使った文章にしてもらいたいです。

Original text

私がテストでいい点数を取ったので、先生がお菓子をくれました。美味しすぎてはまりそう！！

誕生日おめでとう！
今日はきっとステキな1日になるはずだよ。
来年からはお互い社会人で忙しくなるけど、頑張ろうね！amaizingな一年になりますように。

Translation / English

I got a good score on the test so teacher gave me a treat. It was so delicious. It looks like I'm going to be hooked.

Happy birthday!
I expect today will be a wonderful day.
From next year we will both be busy as members of society so let's do our best! Hoping it will be an amazing year.

[deleted user]- almost 7 years ago
最初の文章にthat’s why は入れれないですか？？

kamitoki- almost 7 years ago
この場合はthat's whyは不自然.

kamitoki- almost 7 years ago
That's whyは理由を求められる時使用.

Translation / English

I got a good score on exam, the teacher gave me a snack. It was so delicious and I was hooked to the teast.
Happy birthday, I wish you will make your day, We will start working from next year, and We should work hard to make our first working year amazing, hang in there.

eikimabuchi- almost 7 years ago
teast --->tasteです　すいません。

Translation / English

The teacher gave me sweets because I got a good score on the test.It's so yummy!

Happy birthday!
It must be a lovely day today.
We'll be busy with each other next year, but let's try hard!I hope it's a year old.

[deleted user]- almost 7 years ago
hope it's gonna be an amazing year.