[Translation from Japanese to English ] The Request for Price Discount To: Whom it may concern, I would like to p...

Original text

商品価格のご相談。

To:ご担当者様

貴社がCCC.netで販売しておられます〇〇という商品を〇〇個買いたいと思っております。

フロリダまでの送料を含んだうえで、今CCC.netで設定されてる〇〇ドルから〇〇％値引きしてXXドルで販売してもらう事はできますか？
もしくは、どの程度の値引きをしてもらえますか？

私は他にもたくさんの商品を購入したいと思っています。
私はあなた達と良い関係を築きたいと思っています。

ぜひ私に商品を販売してください。

お返事お待ちしております。

Translation / English

The Request for Price Discount

To: Whom it may concern,
I would like to purcase 〇〇 units of the item 〇〇 which is on sale at the CCC.net.
Is it possible to get a 〇〇% discount from the price set int the CCC.net currently, and purchase it at $XX, including the shipping fee to Florida?
Or, how much discount would you give me?

I'm planning to purchase many other items from you.
I'm glad if I can construct a good business relationship with you.

I will be trully happy if you will sell the item to me.

I'm looking forward to your response.
Thank you.

Translation / English

Request for item price discount

To: Staff in charge

I would like to purchase ○○ pieces of the item ○○ which you are selling on CCC.net.

With including the shipping charge to Florida, would you be able to give me ○○% discount at US$xx from the price at US$〇〇 listed on CCC.net now?
Otherwise, would you be able to give me how many present of discount?

I am thinking of purchasing many other items.
I am looking forward to having good business relations with you from now on.

I would appreciate if you could offer us your items with best price.

I am waiting for you positive reply.

Translation / English

Consultation of the Item Price

To Whom It May Concern:

I would like to buy 〇〇 （個数）of 〇〇（商品）that you sell on CCC.net.

Is it possible to sell it with 〇〇％ discount of $〇〇 that you sell on CCC.net?
How much could you discount?

I would like to buy many of your items.
I would likr to build a good relationship with you.

Please sell me the items.

Looking forward for your reply.