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[Translation from Japanese to English ] Have you seen the nail clippers Kai is selling? I think Kai probably added...

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Requested by doughboy at 24 Sep 2013 at 01:08 1214 views
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貴方はKaiが販売している爪切りをご覧になったことがありますか?

恐らく、Kaiは沢山販売している製品の1つとしてあなたの大切な
爪切りを彼らのウェブサイトに加えるだけです。

Kaiは優れた企業ですが、それ程高級な爪切りは販売してません。
彼らが販売する爪切りの殆どは$4~10で、最も高額なものでも$17です。

私達日本人は、Kaiが比較的安い製品を売る企業であるというイメージを持ってます。

ここに貴方の爪切りを並べたら、ブランドイメージを大きく下げてしまうと私達は考えます。

newbie_translator
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- Posted at 24 Sep 2013 at 01:25
Have you seen the nail clippers Kai is selling?

I think Kai probably added your important nail clippers as one of their most selling products in their website.

Kai is a good company, but they do not sell sophisticated type of nail clippers.
The nail clippers they sell are mostly $4-10. And even the most expensive once cost only $17.

Kai has this image of being a company that sells relatively cheap products for us Japanese.

We think that by putting your nail clippers in their website would greatly reduced your brand image.
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[deleted user]
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- Posted at 24 Sep 2013 at 01:35
Have you ever seen nail clippers that Kai sells?
Perhaps, Kai will put your precious nail clipper on their website as one of many products that Kai is selling.
Kai is the excellent company; however, they do not sell very expensive nail clippers.Nail clippers they sell are around $4~10 and the most expensive one is at most $17.。
We as Japanese have an impression of the company which sells relatively cheap products.
Therefore, we think that it will decrease the brand image of your company if your company have your nail clipper put there.

私達は、この爪切り専用の素晴らしいウェブサイトを製作することをお約束します。

貴方の開発した爪切りは*特別*です。
製品のブランドイメージを壊さないよう、プロモーションには細心の注意を払い、
小売店も選ぶべきです。

私達のビジネス規模はKaiのように巨大ではありませんが、ビジネスの規模で製品が売れるとは限りません。
この製品を日本へ普及させる情熱なら私達は彼らには絶対に負けません。

もし、Kaiを選ぶことが必須ではないのなら、是非私達に日本総代理を任せて頂けませんか?

宜しくご検討ください

newbie_translator
Rating 52
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- Posted at 24 Sep 2013 at 01:39
We promise to create an awesome website specifically for this nail clippers.

The Nail clippers you've developed is *special*.
We are paying close attention with regards to the promotion of the product and even selected a retail store to prevent damaging the brand image of the product.

Although our business is not as big as Kai, it does not necessarily mean that we cannot sell the product.
If we are speaking of the passion to spread this product across Japan, then we absolutely won't lose to them.

In the event that you are not required to choose Kai, then could you entrust us to be the sole agent for the product in Japan?

We appreciate your kind consideration.
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[deleted user]
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- Posted at 24 Sep 2013 at 02:06
We promise you to make a great website exclusively for this nail clipper.
The nail clipper your company invented is the “special”.
We kindly suggest that you can pay fine attention to a market and choose retail stores.
Although our business size is not huge like Kai; however, it does not mean that how products can be sold according to business sizes.
We will never lose to them in being passionate to prevail this product in Japan.
If it is not required for you to choose Kai, could you kindly trust us with it as a Japanese general agent?
We appreciate if you can consider us.
Sincerely,

Client

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