[日本語から英語への翻訳依頼] コンセプトが非常に面白い作品だと思います。 コンセプトは「秘密組織のメンバーが大真面目にギャルゲーをやっていたら」です。なんかこう聞くとダメな大人な感じが...

この日本語から英語への翻訳依頼は ichi_style1 さん naokey1113 さん [削除済みユーザ] さん mydogkuro11 さん yoppo1026 さん davis_teruo911 さんの 6人の翻訳者によって翻訳され、合計 14件の翻訳が投稿されました。 依頼の原文の文字数は 1597文字 で、翻訳完了までにかかった時間は 13時間 52分 です。

singosingo18による依頼 2013/05/26 21:23:58 閲覧 4869回
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コンセプトが非常に面白い作品だと思います。
コンセプトは「秘密組織のメンバーが大真面目にギャルゲーをやっていたら」です。なんかこう聞くとダメな大人な感じがでてますけど、「大真面目にギャルゲーやってる人が実は秘密組織の一員だった」って聞くとすごくかわいくいとおしく聞こえてしまうのは気のせいでしょうか。
まあそんなことはおいといて、謎の生命体・精霊の出現によりおこる大災害「空間震」が発生するようになって約30年たった世界が舞台です。

ichi_style1
評価 52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/26 21:53:36に投稿されました
I think it's a work with an extremely interesting concept.
The concept is ''what would happen if members of a secret organization dead seriously played an adult video game''. Saying it like this probably makes it sound like I'm a no good adult, but when I heard that the person that was dead seriously playing the game was actually a member of a secret organization, I couldn't help but find it cute and adorable.
Besides that, the game plays in a world in which approximately 30 years earlier a big disaster happened that was caused by the appearance of mysterious life-forms and spirits of the death.
★★★☆☆ 3.5/2
naokey1113
評価 52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/26 21:32:28に投稿されました
I think concept of the work is very interesting.
The concept is "Because members of a secret organization was playing a girl's game seriously". It sounds like lazy adults. But if you hear "People playing a girl's game were indeed members of a secret organization.", it might sound lovely. Don't you think so?
By the way, it was about a world about 30 years after "Space Quake" started happening, a disaster caused by appearance of mysterious existence namely "spirit".
★★★☆☆ 3.0/1
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評価 52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/26 21:58:20に投稿されました
I think it has very attractive concept.
The concept is “if a member of a secret organization plays girl’s game very seriously”

It sounds like I am an incompetent adult but it is cute and lovingly to hear, I might just to be me, “a man playing girl’s game is actually a member of a secret organization.

Well, just leave it there; it is a story about the world 30 years after striking of the disaster “Great Atmospheric Oscillation” due to consequences of appearing unknown living system and spirits
★★★☆☆ 3.5/2

妹と二人暮らしの高校生Itsuka Shidouは人間に絶望する1人の精霊と出会います。それでShidouは世界と精霊両方を救う存在であることを知ります。その方法が、「精霊とデートして、デレさせる」というものだった、というわけです。精霊さんも好き好んで空間震をおこしているわけではなく、彼女たちもまた、苦しんでいるんです。そこから解放するには、武力を以て殲滅するか、さっきも言ったようにデートをしてデレさせるしかありません・・。




ichi_style1
評価 52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/26 22:13:57に投稿されました
A high school student called Itsuka Shidou who is living together with his little sister meets a Spirit that has no hope for humanity. Thereupon Shidou finds out that he is a being that is capable of saving both the world and the Spirits. The key is to date Spirits, and make them fall in love with him. It's not like the Spirits are causing the space quakes because they like it, so Shidou is very troubled as well. Rather than fighting and exterminating them, he will have to date them and make them fall in love with him.
★★★★☆ 4.0/1
naokey1113
評価 52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/26 21:41:40に投稿されました
Itsuka Shidou, a high school student who live with his sister, meets a spirit who despairs of human beings. Then, Shidou knows that he is an existence that will save both world and spirits. A way to achieve it is to have a date with the spirit and get her lovey. Spirits are not willing to generate the space quakes, but are having difficult time. To release them, the only way is to destroy them by force of arms or to go out and get them lovey.
★★★☆☆ 3.0/1
[削除済みユーザ]
評価 52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/26 22:17:21に投稿されました
Itsuka Shidou a senior high school student living with his sister meets a spirit who despair at human.

Therefore, Shidou realizes he is the one who can save both this world and the spirits. The way to save the world and the spirits is something like “just go for dating and let spirit flirtatious”

Spirits does not want to make Atmospheric Oscillation for fun but they are also agonized. To let them free, there is either wipe them out by a mailed fist or go for dating and let them flirtatious as I told.
★★★☆☆ 3.0/1


とうとう2次元で人間とデートするだけでは飽き足らず、精霊さんにまで手をかけてしまったのかと思うと複雑な気分であります。

個人的には精霊さんより人間の女の子がすきですけどね・・・。ことりちゃんとかね!ろりろりギャップ萌え妹最高!!!ただ僕がロリコンなだけなんですけどね・・・。他にも・・ね(^ω^)

Tobiichi Origamiは超天才の少女です。常に学年主席。体育もすばらしい成績です。『万人に一人の天才』と称されることもあります。もちろん校内1位の有名人ですよ。

mydogkuro11
評価 59
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/27 13:14:45に投稿されました
I get complicated when I find to have reached to even spirit from unsatisfactory with dating a human in two dimension finally.

In person, I prefer girls of human to sprit, though...., Kotori chan, for example!
"RoriRori Gap Moe" sister (a girly-girly very younger sister)!!! Which just means I am a lolita complex..., and also....huh(^ω^)

Tobiichi Origami is a super genius girl. She is at the top of her grade, and performs excellent score of physical education also. Some call her "a genius among ten thousands" She is the most famous person in her school, of course
mydogkuro11
mydogkuro11- 11年弱前
すいません、訂正させて下さい
個人的には精霊さんより人間の女の子がすきですけどね・・・。ことりちゃんとかね!ろりろりギャップ萌え妹最高!!!ただ僕がロリコンなだけなんですけどね・・・。他にも・・ね(^ω^)
In person, I prefer girls of human to sprit, though...., Kotori chan, for example!
"RoriRori Gap Moe" sister (a girly-girly very younger sister)is owesome !!! Which just means I am a lolita complex..., and also....huh(^ω^)

yoppo1026
評価 57
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/27 13:27:18に投稿されました
In stead of being limited to have a date with human being in a two-dimensional world, at last I made advances to a spirit. This has made me feel comprecated.

Personally speaking, I prefer a human girl to a spirit...like Kotori-chan! She is so sweet lolita who has gaps!!! But just I have lolita complex...in many ways..(^ω^)

Tobiichi Origami is a super genious girl. She always gets the highest mark in her grades, and she is good at sports too. Some students call her as "A genious in ten thousand people". So of course she is the most famous in her school.
★★☆☆☆ 2.0/1
davis_teruo911
評価 52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/27 07:41:16に投稿されました
To think that they are finally not satisfied just with dating humans in 2-D, but have extended their reach to spirits is a complicated feeling.

Personally, I prefer human girls to spirits... like Kotori, for instance! Little sisters with a cute gap are the best! Of course, it may just be that I have a Lotila complex. In addition to other things... (^ω^)

Tobiichi Origami is a super genius girl. She is always the top in her class, and she has fantastic grades in P.E. She is even called the "One in a Million Genius". Naturally, she is the number one celebrity in school.
★★★☆☆ 3.5/2

ちなみに、彼女にしたい女子ランキング3位から脱落したことがありません。さらに!!!ショートカットです!!大事なことなので、もう一度言います。ショートカットです!!!僕はショートカットの女の子が大好きです!!!!!!!!!!
この美少女、裏の顔があります。それが陸上自衛隊対精霊部隊・ASTの隊員であるということです。そして、両親が精霊に殺されたという経験から精霊すべてを憎んでいます・・。
そのため精霊に対しては周囲を顧みず強襲することもしばしば。

naokey1113
評価 52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/26 22:01:02に投稿されました
By the way, she has never dropped out from top 3 girls who I want to date as a girl friend. Moreover, she is with short hair!! Let me repeat it, because it's so important. She is with short hair!! I love a girl with short hair!!!!!
This beautiful girl has another face. She is a member of AST, a team for the spirits and a part of Ground Self-Defense Force. And, she hate all the spirits because her parents were killed by spirits.
Thus, she sometimes make an assault upon spirits blindly.
★★★☆☆ 3.0/1
davis_teruo911
評価 52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/27 07:52:40に投稿されました
By the way, she has never dropped below third on my ranking of girls to make my girlfriend. And also! She has a short cut! It's important, so I'll say it again. She has a short cut! I love girls with their hair cut short!
This beautiful girl has a hidden side. That is, she is a member of the ground self-defense forces known as the Anti-Spirit Team (AST). She hates all spirits because she experienced her parents being killed by them.
Because of this, she even frequently viciously attacks the spirits without any attention to her surroundings.

Shidouにはひじょーにわかりづらい好意を抱いているようで、彼のこととなると抜群な行動力を発揮します

はじめて彼が彼女の家に行った時もメイド服姿で迎えたり、精力剤を飲ませた後、シャワーを浴びに行き、彼の目の前にバスタオル一枚で現れたりしてます

電波系肉食系女子ですね。

僕、どストライクなんですよね・・・。わけわかんないけど

がつがつ積極的に来る感じ,そのうえショートカットとか

僕の嫁にはRankaちゃん、Erioといますが、嫁候補に追加かなあ。早めに一夫多妻制の国に引っ越さないとなぁ

naokey1113
評価 52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/26 22:08:09に投稿されました
It seems that she has an affinity with Shidou although it's very unclear. Thus, she is so active, when she has something to do for him.

when he visited her house for the first time, she welcomed him with a costume of a maid on, let him drink an energy drink and appear in front of him covering her body with just a towel.

She is an electric "carnivorous" girl.

She absolutely is my type, although it's so hard to understand her.

I love her proactive attitude and short hair...

Ranka-chan and Erio are already in my list of future wives, but I might need to add her. I have to move to a country which legalize polygamy.
★★★★☆ 4.0/1
davis_teruo911
評価 52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/27 08:13:10に投稿されました
It seems that she carries an extremely hard to understand sense of kindness toward Shidou, and when it comes to him she displays an exceptional energy.

When he first went to her house, she greeted him in a maid outfit, made him drink an aphrodisiac, and appeared in front of him in just a towel when he went to take a shower afterwards.

She's a nonsensical aggressive girl.

I'm a very stoic type, and I don't quite understand why; but the way she comes on so voraciously assertive and on top of that her short cut...

I already have Ranka and Erio as my wives, but I might add her on as a wife candidate. I should move to a country that allows polygamy as soon as possible.
★★★★★ 5.0/1



精霊ちゃんです。ツンデレですよぺろぺろ。名前は「世界の精鋭」という名のギャルゲプレイヤー達につけさせようとしましたが、結局主人公のShidouが4月10日にあったからという理由でTohkaになりました。初めて自分を否定しないでくれたShidouに好意を抱きデートします。デートの終盤にOrigamiからの射撃をかばったShidouが撃ち殺されて激怒します

しかし、蘇生されたShidouによって霊力を封印され<ラタトスク>に保護されました。そしてShidouのクラスに編入してきます

naokey1113
評価 52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/26 22:38:16に投稿されました
She is a spirit. She is Tsundere (is normally cold but at some prompt suddenly becomes lovestruck), pero pero. At first I tried to let girl's game players named "elites of the world". But finally, her name became Tohka, because Shido, a protagonist, met her on 10th of April. She goes out with Shidou feeling fondness for him, because he didn't reject her. In the end of the date, Shidou tries to save her from a shot by Origami and dies, resulting in her outrage.

However, Shidou gets restored to life, seals her spirit power and takes her into <Ratatosk> for protection. Then she comes into Shidou's class.
★★★★☆ 4.0/1
davis_teruo911
評価 52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/27 11:07:48に投稿されました
The spirit girl. She's tsundere (nom nom). She tries to make a group of adult game players known as "The World Elite" name her, but she ends up named "Tohka" because the protagonist Shidou first met her on April 10th (Shigatsu Tohka in Japanese). She carries a feeling of favor towards Shidou, who is the first person not to deny her, and goes on a date with him. At the end of their date, Shidou blocks a gunshot from Origami and is shot dead, enraging Tohka.

However, when Shidou is reborn, he seals her spiritual power and entrusts her to <Ratatosk>. She then enters Shidou's class.
★★★★★ 5.0/1

このように精霊をデートにより封印させるのが本作の目的ですよ。

ちなみに封印の方法はキスです・・・。くそおうらやましい・・・。しかもそのシチュエーションがまたいいんです!
この精霊たちは、知識があまりなく、キスのことも知らないのです。そこでShidouくんはキスのことを「唇と唇を合わせる」教えます。次の瞬間Tohkaがキスします。
個人的にこういうシチュエーションがすごく好きなんです。積極的な女の子好きです!!

・・・・だんだん僕の性癖が全世界中に知れ渡っていますね(‘A`)

naokey1113
評価 52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/26 22:21:06に投稿されました
As above-described, the purpose of this story is to seal spirits by dating.

Besides, the way to seal is a kiss. So jealous... And, the situation is so fascinating!
Those spirits lack of knowledge and don't know what is a kiss. Thus, Shidou tells them how to put lips together instead of using a word "kiss". Then, next moment, Tohka kisses him.
Personally I love such a situation. I like a proactive girl a lot!!

.... My idiosyncrasy is coming out to the world little by little(‘A`)
★★★★☆ 4.0/1
davis_teruo911
評価 52
翻訳 / 英語
- 2013/05/27 11:16:16に投稿されました
Just like this, the goal of this story is to seal the spirits by going on dates with them.

By the way, the sealing method is a kiss... It makes me so jealous. Not to mention that that situation is so good!
The spirits do not have much knowledge, and do not even know about kisses. Shidou teaches that a kiss is "one pair of lips and another pair of lips uniting". And in the next moment Tohka kisses him.
I personally really like this kind of situation. I love assertive girls!

...My own inclinations are being gradually known to the whole world, aren't they? (‘A`)

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