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The items I ordered the last time and the time before last have not arrived yet.
Have the tracking numbers still not found out yet?
I would like to know the scheduled arrival date today.
Please confirm them promptly.

I provided the invoice for this package yesterday.
I provided the invoice for these 3 packages 4 days ago.
We will deliver the items by Special Handling Instructions.
Please remove the restriction immediately.

I love this Rug.
The design is magnificent.
The hue and texture are similar to the picture of the product.
The hue and texture are a little different from the picture of the product.

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The items I ordered the last time and the time before last have not arrived yet.
Have the tracking numbers still not been found out yet?
I would like to know the scheduled arrival date today.
Please confirm them promptly.

I submitted the invoice for this package yesterday.
I submitted the invoice for the 3 packages above 4 days ago.
We will deliver the items with Special Handling Instructions.
Please remove the restriction immediately.

I love this Rug.
The design is magnificent.
The hue and texture are similar to the picture of the product.
The hue and texture are a little different from the picture of the product.

元の翻訳
Nice to meet you. I'm xxx and engineering in Tokyo.
I think I can expect xxx is good in the future. I will try to start it from today.
Can you help me someone validate the account If you are inclined about it?
Thank you in advance.

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Nice to meet you. I'm xxx and an engineer in Tokyo.
I think xxx has a promising future, so I think I want to get started today.
Can you help me to have someone activate the account whenever it's convenient for you?
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
I'd like to return Chromebook due its pointer doesn't behave well.
It doens't move by touch pad operation at all. When I drag it with other finger while hardly insert it, the pointer moves - but it moves rondomely and cannot control at all.

The product has been arrived in Japan via land operater.
In this case, how do you deal with its shipping cost? Could it be fully covered or should I partially need to owe it?

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I'd like to return the Chromebook that I purchased recently because its pointer doesn't work well.
It doesn't respond to touchpad operation at all. When I drag it with another finger while pressing onto the touchpad, the pointer moves - but it just moves randomly all over the screen and cannot be controlled at all.

The product has arrived in Japan via a forwarding company.
In this case, how do you deal with the shipping cost for return? Will it be fully covered or will I partially need to pay for it?

元の翻訳
Hello.
2014, January 31st, my e-mail address was hacked and took over, when it's between 8:30 and 18:00.
Password is changed and I can control it now, but the account of my company was made on it's own and I can find the evidence that someone used in three emails.
Money is involved. So please give contact to following address.

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Hello.
On January 31, 2014 my e-mail address (@gmail) was hacked and taken over around 8:30 and 18:00 in Japan.
The password has been changed and I can control it now, but the account of my company was made without our knowledge during the time shown above and I can find some evidence of activities in three emails.
It appears that money is involved. So please contact the following address as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
Thank you for replying my e-mail.

I deeply apologise that one of our staffs send you an e-mail yesterday that was apparently inappropriate.

I have already registered on your store in the internet.
My e-mail address is ○○.

Now, the stock of ×× is nine in number.
Would you sell nine of the items at $ △△ each?

The name of the item × 9 = $ AA Added-value tax (7%) $ BB Total amount $ CC

If you don't have any complaint about the cited above, please change the charge on the cart.

Regards,
○○

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Thank you for replying to my e-mail.

I deeply apologise that one of our staff members sent you an e-mail yesterday that was apparently inappropriate.

I have already registered at your online store.
My e-mail address is ○○.

You now have 9 pieces of XX in stock.
Can I still buy them for $ △△ each even if I buy 9 pieces?

The name of the item × 9 = $ AA Added-value tax (7%) $ BB Total amount $ CC

If you don't have any problems about the above amount, please change the charge on the cart.

Regards,
○○

元の翻訳
I registered my AMEX card, but it seems like a 30%-discount has not been applied. Can you tell me why this is the case?
Please apply the discount.

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I registered my AMEX card as my payment method, but it seems like a 30%-discount has not been applied. Can you tell me why this is the case?
Please apply the discount.

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EX-ロケット、グルーポンの関係者たちが、マレーシアの金融比較サイト、コンペアヒーローを開始

貴社の財政計画策定に際して、ローン価格の比較は有用である。しかし、これは手動でプロバイダにアクセスして、詳細を確認する必要があるため、骨の折れるプロセスである。マレーシアでは、CompareHeroはユーザーが1つのウェブサイトにクレジットカード、ローン、保険、さらにはモバイルやインターネット・プランを比較することにより、情報に基づく選択を行なわせることで、この問題を解決したいと考えている。開始後最初の数ヶ月間に、サイトは1万人以上のユーザーを支援することができた。

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EX-ロケット、グルーポンの関係者たちが、マレーシアの金融比較サイト、コンペアヒーローを開始

貴社の財政計画策定に際して、ローン価格の比較は有用である。しかし、これは手動でプロバイダにアクセスして、詳細を確認する必要があるため、骨の折れるプロセスである。マレーシアでは、CompareHeroはユーザーが1つのウェブサイトでクレジットカード、ローン、保険、さらにはモバイルやインターネット・プランを比較することにより、情報に基づく選択を行なわせることで、この問題を解決したいと考えている。開始後最初の数ヶ月間に、サイトは1万人以上のユーザーを支援することができた。

元の翻訳
災害時、iCalamity利用することで家族や友人を見つけます。

この前、フィリピンに襲った超台風海燕は誰にとっても教訓であった。多くのスタートアップや企業は、役に立つオンライン危機対応プラットフォームを作製しました。

将来の災害に備えて、ダバオに基づく開発者のたちは、携帯電話を使用して現在の場所や状況を愛する人たちに通知するアプリを作成しました。

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災害時、iCalamityを利用することで家族や友人を見つけます。

この前、フィリピンを襲った巨大台風海燕は誰にとっても教訓であった。多くのスタートアップや企業は、役に立つオンライン危機対応プラットフォームを作製しました。

将来の災害に備えて、ダバオを拠点とする開発者たちは、携帯電話を使用して現在の場所や状況を愛する人たちに通知するアプリを作成しました。

元の翻訳
Thank for your reply.
Why did not you send this product to Japan this time?
Recently, I received the same quantity of the product dorm MyUS.
In the case you do not send me, what should i do?
Let me know?

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Thank for your reply.
Why can't you send this product to Japan this time?
Recently, I received similar product from MyUS.
In the case you can not send me the item, what should i do?
Please let me know?

元の翻訳
#biglemon
I have some questions
I heard that the exhibited PT9 and PT2 ball was bought from TourVan, so why you wrote the title and Description of item that they come from TourIssue?
Tour ID Band is not being put, isn't it?
There is a entry that STRAIGHT FROM CALLAWAY TOUR CENTER so is Tour Center is TourVan's thing?
I am very sorry but Did you mistake in checking the paid instruments to PGA tour pro?↵

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#biglemon
I have some questions
I heard that the exhibited PT9 and PT2 ball was bought from TourVan, so why you wrote the title and Description of item that they come from TourIssue?
Tour ID Band is not being put, isn't it?
There is a entry that STRAIGHT FROM CALLAWAY TOUR CENTER so is Tour Center is TourVan's thing?
I am very sorry but Did you mistake in checking the paid instruments to PGA tour pro?

元の翻訳
I apologize for made you anxiety. Did you see the chat conversation?
Once again, I think my explanation and something maybe bad for you.

And, I'm not able to proceed to the next step if you still do not understand about your listings to Ebay in Commerce.

I've been talking about a deal to pay $30 weekly to a Thailand woman by the contract with my friends. However, it will take about 2 to 3 months for her to get a reward $30 by that contract.

I also always thinking how it should be, just to ensure that you get a reward,

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I apologize for making you anxious. Did you see the chat conversation?
I probably didn't explain it to you very well but again:

And, I'm not able to proceed to the next step until you understand about listings to Ebay using Commerce.

My friend was talking about paying $30 a week to a Thai woman through a contract. However, it took about 2 to 3 months after signing the contract for her to receive $30.

I am also always thinking about how I can get you similar compensations.