翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / 2 Reviews / 2014/01/18 00:17:44

doctoryusuke
doctoryusuke 50 日本の医師です.医療関係の翻訳が特に得意です.USMLE(アメリカ医師国家...
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今現在、XXの在庫数は9個ありますが、9個の購入でも1つ△△ドルで購入させてもらえますか?

商品名X9=$AA  付加価値税(7%)$BB  合計金額$CC

上記の金額で宜しければカート価格の変更をお願い致します。

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英語

Thank you for replying my e-mail.

I deeply apologise that one of our staffs send you an e-mail yesterday that was apparently inappropriate.

I have already registered on your store in the internet.
My e-mail address is ○○.

Now, the stock of ×× is nine in number.
Would you sell nine of the items at $ △△ each?

The name of the item × 9 = $ AA Added-value tax (7%) $ BB Total amount $ CC

If you don't have any complaint about the cited above, please change the charge on the cart.

Regards,
○○

レビュー ( 2 )

yyokoba 63 日本語<>英語
yyokobaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/01/18 07:20:44

元の翻訳
Thank you for replying my e-mail.

I deeply apologise that one of our staffs send you an e-mail yesterday that was apparently inappropriate.

I have already registered on your store in the internet.
My e-mail address is ○○.

Now, the stock of ×× is nine in number.
Would you sell nine of the items at $ △△ each?

The name of the item × 9 = $ AA Added-value tax (7%) $ BB Total amount $ CC

If you don't have any complaint about the cited above, please change the charge on the cart.

Regards,
○○

修正後
Thank you for replying to my e-mail.

I deeply apologise that one of our staff members sent you an e-mail yesterday that was apparently inappropriate.

I have already registered at your online store.
My e-mail address is ○○.

You now have 9 pieces of XX in stock.
Can I still buy them for $ △△ each even if I buy 9 pieces?

The name of the item × 9 = $ AA Added-value tax (7%) $ BB Total amount $ CC

If you don't have any problems about the above amount, please change the charge on the cart.

Regards,
○○

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/01/18 11:22:48

元の翻訳
Thank you for replying my e-mail.

I deeply apologise that one of our staffs send you an e-mail yesterday that was apparently inappropriate.

I have already registered on your store in the internet.
My e-mail address is ○○.

Now, the stock of ×× is nine in number.
Would you sell nine of the items at $ △△ each?

The name of the item × 9 = $ AA Added-value tax (7%) $ BB Total amount $ CC

If you don't have any complaint about the cited above, please change the charge on the cart.

Regards,
○○

修正後
Thank you for your reply.

I deeply apologise that one of our staff members sent you an inappropriate e-mail yesterday.

I have already registered on your online store.
My e-mail address is ○○.

Now, the stock of ×× is nine in number [?].
Would you sell nine of the items at $ △△ each?

The name of the item × 9 = $ AA Added-value tax (7%) $ BB Total amount $ CC

If you don't have any complaint [word choice] about the amount above, please change the charge on the cart.

Regards,
○○

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