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TV anime series, "Te-kyu", is determined to broadcast the season 5, whilst the season 4 has just started from April 2015. Additionally, "Qunka!" sung by Kana Hanazawa is the theme song for the season 5.
"Te-kyu" is originally a comic serialized in a magazin "ComicEarthStar" as "Super Exciting Gag and Comedy Comic".
Roots is charge of the draft an the original story, and Piyo is charge of drawing. It has started since February 2012, and released 9 volumes.
The season 1 of TV anime series was broadcasted from October 2012. Kana Hanazawa, the singer of the theme song for the season 5, is joining as a voice artist for Marimo Bando, one of the characters in the story.

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TV anime series, "Te-kyu", is determined to broadcast the season 5, whilst the season 4 has just started from April 2015. Additionally, "Qunka!" sung by Kana Hanazawa is the theme song for the season 5.
"Te-kyu" is originally a comic serialized in a magazine "ComicEarthStar" as "Super Exciting Gag and Comedy Comic".
Roots is charge of the draft an the original story, and Piyo is in charge of drawing. It has started since February 2012, and released 9 volumes.
The season 1 of TV anime series was broadcasted from October 2012. Kana Hanazawa, the singer of the theme song for the season 5, is joining as a voice artist for Marimo Bando, one of the characters in the story.

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What should I do so that I'm able to send the products to the Japan office?

Due to the fact I'm not that great at English, if your company doesn't make the shipping arrangements for us then we can't send it to Japan.


We made the order at the end of last year and the products STILL have not arrived.
This is an untenable situation.

Mr. King also won't assist me with the shipping arrangements.


Do you know why your company stopped shipping directly to Japan?

It takes quite a bit of time to make the necessary transportation arrangements, and if this happens every time we're will lose many, many potential business opportunities.


Isn't there some way you can make the arrangements to send the products to Japan?

I appreciate your assistance with this urgent matter.

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What should I do to send the products to the Japan office?

Due to the factthat I'm not that great at English, if your company doesn't make the shipping arrangements for us then, we can't send it to Japan.


We made the order at the end of the last year and the products STILL have not arrived.
This is an untenable situation.

Mr. King also won't assist me with the shipping arrangements.


Do you know why your company stopped shipping directly to Japan?

It takes quite a bit of time to make the necessary transportation arrangements, and if this happens every time, we will lose many, many potential business opportunities.


Isn't there some ways you can make the arrangements to send the products to Japan?

I appreciate your assistance with this urgent matter.

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You called because you want to do something, don't you?
What is the main product?
Where is these product mainly purchased?
How to ship?
How long does it take until shipping?
How much is the average price of the product?

I called becasue I want to sell a lot of Japan good prodcut.
The main product of my business are camera, home appliances.
These products are mainly purchased from home appliances stores in Japan.
About the shipment, because there is one employee so the emplyoee will ship via Japan post.
About the day until the shipping, I am planing around 3-5 days.
The average price of product is planned 20.000-30.000 JPY

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You called because you want to do something, don't you?
What is the main product?
Where is the product mainly purchased from?
How to ship?
How long does it take until dispatching?
How much is the average price of the product?

I called becasue I want to sell a lot of Japanese good prodcuts.
The main product of my business are cameras, and home appliances.
These products are mainly purchased from home appliances stores in Japan.
About the shipment, because there is one employee so the emplyoee will ship via the Japan post.
About the day until the dispatching, I am planing for around 3-5 days.
The average price of the product is planned at 20.000-30.000 JPY

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I am xxx.
Thank you for your service.
I bought this product, I'm wondering whether the cable is removable like other models.
URL
Please find the attached the photo I took. The product number is xxx. I think it is an old model.
The product specifications are following:
xxx
xxx

Would you mind checking the information and replying to me?
I am urgent a bit.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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I am xxx.
Thank you for your service.
I bought this product, I'm wondering whether the cable is removable like other models.
URL
Please find the attached photo I took. The product number is xxx. I think it is an old model.
The product specifications are following:
xxx
xxx

Would you mind checking the information and replying to me?
I am urgent a bit.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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Hello.
I hope this email find you well.
I would like to ask you something.
Is the wire of this item removable like the other one?
URL of the item.
I will attach the photo of it.
The model no. of the item is as follows. I think the model is a little bit old.
The item’s details are as below.
Could you verify it as soon as possible?
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Hello.
I hope this email finds you well.
I would like to ask you something.
Is the wire of this item removable like the other one?
URL of the item.
I will attach the photo of it.
The model no. of the item is as follows. I think the model is a little bit old.
The item’s details are as below.
Could you verify it as soon as possible?
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Hello.

I would like to inquire about this product, can the wire be detached in the same way?

Product URL:

I have attached a photo. The model number is the following and I think it's one of the bit older items.
The product details are as below.

Would you be kind enough to let me know right away?

Thanks and regards,

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Hello.

I would like to inquire about this product. Can the wire be detached in the same way?

Product URL:

I have attached a photo. The model number is the following and I think it's one of the bit older items.
The product details are as below.

Would you be kind enough to let me know right away?

Thanks and regards,

元の翻訳
Approximate time required to get here from Hodo-zan main shrine is less than 1 hour by walking along the trail path and about 5min. by ropeway. It is considered as good luck to visit Hodo-zan because when written in Chinese characters, Hodo-zan means "Go up a treasure mountain". It would be nice to climb up slowly on foot as it is just 497m above sea leverl.

There are tea shops and souvenir shops on top of the mountain where you can enjoy local foods or purchase sovenirs.
The view from the summit offers different aspects of the place in all four seasons; wintersweet (Japanese allspice) in winter, cherry blossoms in spring, azaleas in early summer and colored maple leaves in autumn. You can enjoy amazake (sweet mild sake) or baked potatoes while having this nice view.

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Approximate time required to get here from the Hodo-zan main shrine is less than 1 hour by walking along the trail path and about 5 min. by ropeway. It is considered as good luck to visit Hodo-zan because when written in Chinese characters, Hodo-zan means "Go up a treasure mountain". It would be nice to climb up slowly on foot as it is just 497m above sea leverl.

There are tea shops and souvenir shops on top of the mountain where you can enjoy local foods or purchase sovenirs.
The view from the summit offers different aspects of the place in all four seasons; wintersweet (Japanese allspice) in winter, cherry blossoms in spring, azaleas in early summer and colored maple leaves in autumn. You can enjoy amazake (sweet mild sake) or baked potatoes while having this nice view.

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Sorry, but it is difficult to list at a time because I'm gradually purchasing based on the sales, not selling items that I hold originally.
I'm going to exhibit a and b on 2 April. If those items will also be auctioned, the payment is OK after all auction has done.


Once I up the tracking number because we have to ship within 4 business days from your deposit. If you bided it successfully, I claim only the difference of shipping between paid and packed.

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Sorry, but it is difficult to list at a time because I'm gradually purchasing based on the sales, not selling items that I hold originally.
I'm going to list a and b on 2 April. If those items will also be auctioned, the payment is OK after all auction has done.


Once I upload the tracking number because we have to ship within 4 business days from your payment. If you bid it successfully, I charge only the difference of shipping between paid and packed.

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[Announcement about The First Part of the Artist Performance]

25th April (Saturday)
Prizmmy☆ x Anison DJ Group "Anirabo" Collaboration
Absolutely! LIVE Special Compliation ~ ultra-absolute!! LIVE ~ (VIMCLIP)

26th April (Sunday)
Tokyo Girl Style
Prizmmy☆ x Anison DJ Group "Anirabo" Collaboration
Ars-magna
Function 6ch
Absolutely!! LIVE Special Compilation ~ ultra-absolute!! LIVE~ (SOLIDEMO)

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[Announcement about The First Part of the Artists Performing]

25th April (Saturday)
Prizmmy☆ x Anison DJ Group "Anirabo" Collaboration
Absolutely! LIVE Special Compliation ~ ultra-absolute!! LIVE ~ (VIMCLIP)

26th April (Sunday)
Tokyo Girl Style
Prizmmy☆ x Anison DJ Group "Anirabo" Collaboration
Ars-magna
Function 6ch
Absolutely!! LIVE Special Compilation ~ ultra-absolute!! LIVE~ (SOLIDEMO)

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Cool sheet cushion: 1,300 Yen including tax
Cool pair of slippers: 1,000 Yen including tax
Cool poncho: 2,000 Yen including tax
Cool slow: 2,500 Yen including tax

Please check the website below.
http://www.itoyokado.co.jp/special/coolstyle_aaa/index.html?top4banner

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Cool sheet cushion: 1,300 Yen including tax
Pair of cool slippers: 1,000 Yen including tax
Cool poncho: 2,000 Yen including tax
Cool slow: 2,500 Yen including tax

Please check the website below.
http://www.itoyokado.co.jp/special/coolstyle_aaa/index.html?top4banner

元の翻訳
Ito-Yokado and AAA will launch their collaboration product "COOL STYLE" bedding on March 28th (Sat.) at all nationwide Ito-Yokado stores. Note; the launch day may vary depends on the shop.

Products:
Cool good sleep bath sheets: each \5,000 (tax included)
Cool good sleep pad: each \3,000 (tax included)
Cool good sleep coffle towel：　each \3,500 (tax included)
Cool body pillow: each \1,600 (tax included)

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Ito-Yokado and AAA will launch their collaboration products "COOL STYLE" on sale on March 28th (Sat.) at all nationwide Ito-Yokado stores. Note; the launch day may vary depending on the shop.

Products:
Cool good sleep bath sheet: each \5,000 (tax included)
Cool good sleep pad: each \3,000 (tax included)
Cool good sleep coffle towel：　each \3,500 (tax included)
Cool body pillow: each \1,600 (tax included)

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The items for sleeping called "COOL STYLE" produced by collaboration of Ito Yokado ｘ AAA are going to be sold.

The sleeping items SS called "COOL STYLE" that were produced by 7 AAA are
going to be sold at each store of the Ito Yokado across the nation from March 28th (Saturday).
*They are sold on the different day in each store.

(Item)
Cool blanket made of toweling for sleeping comfortably: 5,000 Yen including tax
Pad on which to sleep for cool and comfortable sleeping: 3,000 Yen including tax
Cool blanket for belly for comfortable sleeping: 3,500 Yen including tax
Cool cushion for holding: 1,600 Yen including tax

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The items for sleeping called "COOL STYLE" produced by collaboration of Ito Yokado ｘ AAA will be on sale!

The sleeping items SS called "COOL STYLE" that were produced by 7 AAA are
going to be on sale at each store of the Ito Yokado across the nation from March 28th (Saturday).
*They will be on sale on different days in each store.

(Item)
Cool blanket made of toweling for sleeping comfortably: 5,000 Yen including tax
Pad for cool and comfortable sleep: 3,000 Yen including tax
Cool blanket for belly for comfortable sleep: 3,500 Yen including tax
Cool cushion for holding: 1,600 Yen including tax

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Thank you very much for contacting us. At first we will send money by PayPal as the return postage.
Please let me know the cost of return postage.
I will refund you as soon as you inform me.
Please send the goods, and we will refund total cost that you had already paid us as soon as we receive the goods.
If you could reply it would be very appreciated.

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Thank you very much for contacting us. At first we will send money by PayPal for the return cost.
Please let me know the cost of return shipping.
I will refund you as soon as you inform me.
Please send the goods, and we will refund the total cost that you had already paid us as soon as we receive the goods.
If you could reply it would be very appreciated.

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I haven't receive any reply for which I send request the other day.
Is it difficult for you to do something for it?

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I haven't receive any replies for which I send a request the other day.
Is it difficult for you to do something for it?

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I haven't gotten the respond to the email yet. Could you deal with this please?

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I haven't got the responce to the email yet. Could you deal with this please?

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There is still no reply for the e-mail I sent few days ago.
Is it hard to get a response?

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There is still no reply to the e-mail I sent a few days ago.
Is it difficult to get a response?

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非常に有益な応答頂き、ありがとうございました。私たちは収まるレンズを見つけるために、このテレコンバーターと（時間的に）試みを維持することを決定しました。私は動作するよう同じシリーズの80〜200ミノルタレンズがあることを知っている。仕事のレンズの一つはあなたの手に入ってくる場合、あなたは私を知らせるために、リストに私を置くことができる？あなたが行っているすべての、あなたがに入れている時間のためにそんなに今までありがとうございました。私は、あなたが将来的に販売のために持っていることが他の項目に目を光らせて維持しようとします。再度、感謝します。

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非常に有益な応答頂き、ありがとうございました。私たちは収まるレンズを見つけるために、このテレコンバーターと（時間的に）試みを維持することを決定しました。私は動作するよう同じシリーズの80〜200ミノルタレンズがあることを知っている。仕事のレンズの一つはあなたの手に入ってくる場合、必ず教えていただけますでしょうか。あなたが行っているすべての、あなたがに入れている時間のためにそんなに今までありがとうございました。私は、あなたが将来的に販売のために持っていることが他の項目に目を光らせて維持しようとします。再度、感謝します。

元の翻訳
とても参考になるお返事をありがとうございます。

私たちはこのテレコンバーターを使用し続けることを決めました。そして、ゆくゆくは合ったレンズを見つけることにしようと思います。

同じシリーズの80-200のミノルタのレンズで、合うものがあることは知っています。

あなたが所有している中で合うものがあれば、一覧にしていただけませんでしょうか？

これまでしていただいたこと、お時間を費やしていただき、誠にありがとうございます。

これからも、引き続き、販売される商品を見させていただきますので、よろしくお願いします。

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とても参考になるお返事をありがとうございます。

私たちはこのテレコンバーターを使用し続けることを決めました。そして、ゆくゆくは合ったレンズを見つけることにしようと思います。

同じシリーズの80-200のミノルタのレンズで、合うものがあることは知っています。

あなたが所有している中で合うものがあれば、必ず教えていただけますでしょうか。

これまでしていただいたこと、お時間を費やしていただき、誠にありがとうございます。

これからも、引き続き、販売される商品を見させていただきますので、よろしくお願いします。

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Thank you very much for your order.
I do apologize for the delays of my response.
When we checked the bass (guitar) before shipment we found a flaw in the truss rod, and after we followed up with the serviceman we were told it take several months to fix. We are now confirming an exact due date.
Things being as they stand now, the situation is that we are unable to send it right away.
Dependent upon your request, we can do a refund or we can arrange for a replacement (we tried to find the same model, but we could not find it.).
Thank you once more, and please let us know how you would like to proceed.

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Thank you very much for your order.
I do apologize for the delay of my response.
When we checked the bass (guitar) before shipment we found a flaw in the truss rod, and after we followed up with the serviceman we were told it take several months to fix. We are now confirming an exact due date.
Things being as they stand now, the situation is that we are unable to send it right away.
Dependent upon your request, we can do a refund or we can arrange for a replacement (we tried to find the same model, but we could not find it.).
Thank you once more, and please let us know how you would like to proceed.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。早速レンズが届きました。今日から使おうと楽しみにしていました...が、18〜30mmではコーナー部があまり良くありませんでした。このカメラで撮影した写真を添付します。また標準の18mmレンズで撮影したものいっしょにお送りします。こういった状況は見たことがありません。なにが悪いのかつきとめようとしました。個人的には、内部のレンズの一枚の軸が少しずれているのではと考えています。過去の30mmのもの（でズームしたもの）ではコーナー部はきれいです。三枚目の写真をご覧ください。修理のために持ち込みましょうか？その場合費用は負担してもらえますか？あるいは返品しましょうか？

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こんにちは。早速レンズが届きました。今日から使おうと楽しみにしていました...が、18〜30mmではコーナー部があまり良くありませんでした。このカメラで撮影した写真を添付します。また標準の18mmレンズで撮影したものいっしょにお送りします。こういった状況は見たことがありません。なにが悪いのかつきとめようとしました。個人的には、内部のレンズの一枚の軸が少しずれているのではと考えています。過去の30mmのもの（でズームしたもの）ではコーナー部はきれいです。三枚目の写真をご覧ください。修理に出した方がいいでしょうか？その場合費用は負担してもらえますか？あるいは返品しましょうか？