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1. Hello,
Thanks a lot. I know you are a great person.
This time, however, I cannot make the contract because of communication problems and my being busy so that I am not yet sure about what jobs I should ask you to do. Please contact me as soon as possible.

2. Thank you.
When would you like to make the refund for this time?

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1. Hello,
Thanks a lot. I know you are a great person.
This time, however, I cannot make the contract because of communication problems and me being busy so that I am not yet sure about what jobs I should ask you to do. Please contact me as soon as possible.

2. Thank you.
When would you be able to make the refund for this time?

元の翻訳
The customer would like to purchase the cheaper one, so please advice the price that we can offer.

If we cannot match other manufacturer's price, please let us know as soon as possible. The deadline of the manufacturers' order is coming up soon.

Is it ok to resell the products that we ordered for Osaka store to our Tokyo store? The products arrived earlier than expected and we cannot pay for it soon.

Since we are paying more, could you give some discount? We will make payment soon.

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The customer would like to purchase the cheaper one, so please advice the price that we can offer.

If we cannot match other manufacturers' price, please let us know as soon as possible. The deadline of the manufacturers' order is coming up soon.

Is it ok to resell the products that we ordered for our Osaka store to our Tokyo store? The products arrived earlier than expected and we cannot pay for it soon.

Since we are paying more, could you give some discounts? We will make a payment soon.

元の翻訳
Hello,
I understand what you have you said but have some questions in response.

We have not produced a new product page. The page displayed was that of a previous product. Are we still responsible for revising that product's page?

- If so, is there a deadline for the revision?

- Would it be possible to display it without any revisions?

- Are there any regulations for the written description of the product? For example, would just the size and the weight be acceptable?

We would like to act according to your advice where possible.

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Hello,
I understand what you have said but have some questions in response.

We have not produced a new product page. The page displayed was that of a previous product. Are we still responsible for revising that product's page?

- If so, is there a deadline for the revision?

- Would it be possible to display it without any revisions?

- Are there any regulations for the written description of the product? For example, would just the size and the weight be acceptable?

We would like to act according to your advice where possible.

元の翻訳
How to use free Wi-Fi
・Download will be requested when you start application first, install it as instructed.
(In case you cancel, you can do it again using menu on the application.)
・Switch on the connection set-up of the smart phone
・Select 'JSTO_WiFi' in the list of WiFi view
・Tap the button of Wifi shown on the right side, higher part on the top page of the application.
If you connect successfully, the button on the top page will turn red, then you can use free internet connection.

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How to use free Wi-Fi
・Download will be requested when you start application first, install it as instructed.
(In case you cancel, you can do it again using a menu on the application.)
・Switch on the connection set-up of the smart phone
・Select 'JSTO_WiFi' in the list of WiFi view
・Tap the button of Wifi shown on the right side, higher part on the top page of the application.
If you connect successfully, the button on the top page will turn red, then you can use the free internet connection.

元の翻訳
Coming late to work for Japanese business workers means death.
Coming to work without breakfast means the same.

There are good news and bad news for you.
The bad news is you came to work without breakfast and even worse, all your team members can't eat hot food.
The good news is that the train you have to take is leaving in 45 seconds after the limited express train past, which is just announced.

Here we go, our fight begins!

Take your my chopsticks from your chopsticks holder and run into the station soba noodle shop with your team mates. Get the table and shout "Kake Soba!"

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Coming late to work for Japanese business workers means death.
Coming to work without breakfast means the same.

There are good news and bad news for you.
The bad news is you came to work without breakfast and even worse, all your team members can't eat hot food.
The good news is that the train you have to take is leaving in 45 seconds after the limited express train past, which is just announced.

Here we go, our fight begins!

Take your own chopsticks from your chopsticks holder and run into the station soba noodle shop with your team mates. Get the table and shout "Kake Soba!"

元の翻訳
Swipe to the top of the screen and eat your Soba! Once you're full, you'll be ready to get in to the packed train. Riding the bus hungry? That means death.

But if you try to full yourself too fast, you'll take damage from the super-hot Soba. Losing your Life from burn injuries means death. Don't eat your Soba without thinking, try to manage your damage according to your Life as you eat and drink.

Your friends, afraid of being late, eat their Soba in a hurry, and fall at their feet. Losing your friend is the worst thing you can imagine for a leader, leading a crowd. But, this is what a battlefield is.

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Swipe to the top of the screen and eat your Soba! Once you're full, you'll be ready to get in to the packed train. Riding the train when hungry? That means death.

But if you try to full yourself too fast, you'll take damage from the super-hot Soba. Losing your Life from burn injuries means death. Don't eat your Soba without thinking, try to manage your damage according to your Life as you eat and drink.

Your friends, afraid of being late, eat their Soba in a hurry, and fall at their feet. Losing your friend is the worst thing you can imagine for a leader, leading a crowd. But, this is what a battlefield is.

元の翻訳
We understand.
We apologize that we were not of your help.

We will refund you as soon as possible.

We are checking the condition of the items that we had sent before by using EMS.
We found that the items are in your country now and they are going to be delivered again.
We heard that they were damaged or lost. We will refund you after we check them.

If they are delivered while we are checking , it causes a problem
So could you please wait until we receive the result?

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We understand.
We apologize that we were not of your help.

We will refund you as soon as possible.

We are checking the status of the items that we had sent before by using EMS.
We found that the items are in your country now and they are going to be delivered again.
We heard that they were damaged or lost though. We will refund you after we check them.

If they are delivered while we are checking , it causes a problem.
So could you please wait until we receive the result?

元の翻訳
We understand.
We are sorry that we could be no help.

We will return the money as soon as possible.

For now, we are checking the package status that was sent before sending by EMS.
And, at this moment, the package is in your country and is supposed to be delivered again.
We heard that the product is damaged or lost. We will return the money as soon as we confirm it.

There is a possibility that it could reach you soon, so would you please wait until we receive the further information?

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We understand.
We are sorry that we could be no help.

We will return the money as soon as possible.

For now, we are checking the package status that was sent before by EMS.
And, at this moment, the package is in your country and is supposed to be delivered again.
We heard that the product is damaged or lost. We will return the money as soon as we confirm it.

There is a possibility that it could reach you soon, so would you please wait until we receive the further information?

元の翻訳
I have just now received the merchandise actually,
and it seems I was mistaken. Thank you very much for your prompt action.

Also, I am sincerely sorry for the email earlier which might have offended you.
Since the merchandise was quite expensive, I was too nervous.

Here is my humble request.
There was no receipt attached for Mr. / Mrs. XX, which appeared on the picture.
I would like to keep it as a proof.
Would you please mail it to me, or scan the receipt and email it to me as PDF file?

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I have just received the merchandise actually,
and it seems I was mistaken. Thank you very much for your prompt action.

Also, I am sincerely sorry for the email earlier which might have offended you.
Since the merchandise was quite expensive, I was too nervous.

Here is my humble request.
There was no receipt attached for Mr. / Mrs. XX, which appeared on the picture.
I would like to keep it as a proof.
Would you please mail it to me, or scan the receipt and email it to me as a PDF file?

元の翻訳
I was mistaken and the product arrived safely a while ago.
Thank you very much for your quick support.

In addition, I am very sorry for sending you a very rude email a while ago.
It was a very expensive product so it just got on my nerves so I am extremely sorry.

I have one request.
The receipt for the purchased made by o in the photograph was not included.
I want to keep it as proof.
If possible, can you either send it through mail or scan it into a PDF file and email it to me?

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I was mistaken and the product arrived safely a while ago.
Thank you very much for your quick support.

In addition, I am very sorry for sending you a very rude email a while ago.
It is a very expensive product so it just got on my nerves so I am extremely sorry.

I have one request.
The receipt for the purchased made by o in the photograph was not included.
I want to keep it as a proof.
If possible, can you either send it through mail or scan it into a PDF file and email it to me?

元の翻訳
Thanks for your ask.
Cost free pattern can allow you to download if you push add to cart button, add it to cart, go from proceed to checkout button to forward.
We recommend you Paypal to settle the account.
That is ￥0, so the order is finished without bill to you.

Please refer the FAQ in below link about downloading the file.

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Thanks for your inquiry.
Free patterns can be downloaded if you push add to cart button, add it to cart, go from proceed to checkout button to forward.
We recommend you Paypal to settle the payment.
That is ￥0, so the order is finished without billing to you.

Please refer the FAQ in below link about downloading the file.

元の翻訳
Thank you for inquiring us.
For free pattern, you put it into the cart after pushing the button of Add to cart.
After the Proceed to Checkout button, you can download it after completing the order.
Could you select Paypal for the payment?
As it is 0 Yen, no money is charged and the order is completed.

As for downloading the file, please refer to FAQ in the following link.

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Thank you for inquiring us.
For free patterns, you put it into the cart after pushing the button of Add to cart.
After the Proceed to Checkout button, you can download it by completing the order.
Could you select Paypal for the payment?
As it is 0 Yen, no money is charged and the order is completed.

As for downloading the file, please refer to FAQ in the following link.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your response.
But a lot of our shops have not been ready for the price change yet.
I will make a list of the shops below, so please make sure to check it.
If there is anything we can do to support you, please let us know.

Gotoyan: http://goo.gl/mI3hDj
Store Operation Manager: Yoshimitsu Goto

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Thank you very much for your correspondence.
But a lot of our shops have not changed the price yet.
I will make a list of the shops below, so please make sure to check it.
If there is anything we can do to support you, please let us know.

Gotoyan: http://goo.gl/mI3hDj
Store Operation Manager: Yoshimitsu Goto

元の翻訳
HDMI Cable
USB Cable
are lacked.
Unknown for the box.

I heard that the condition was pretty good.
I am not aware about the details since the product is not in my hand yet.

I will give you some refund depending on the condition and the accessories.
However, the product is quite high-valued, so the good conditioned second handed one is not easily found.
The refund may be a little. Please understand that point first.

If it is acceptable, I will place the order for you.
Would you like to order it?

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HDMI Cable
USB Cable
are lacked.
Unknown for the box.

I heard that the condition was pretty good.
I am not aware about the details since the product is not in my hand yet.

I will give you some refund depending on the condition and the accessories.
However, the product is quite high-valued, so the second handed one in a good condition is not easily found.
The refund may be a little. Please understand that point first.

If it is acceptable, I will place the order for you.
Would you like to order it?

元の翻訳
I've understand the situation. The same kind of users might appear in the future, please be sure you are very careful about that.
If you deal this kind of situation with the same process that you do this time, it might cause the difficulty to reject, or even causes trobles.
In my opinion, it is very hard to change the way that how you deal with others to fit every individual ones.

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I've understand the situation. The same kind of users might appear in the future, please be sure you are very careful about that.
If you deal with this kind of situation in the same process that you do this time, it might cause the difficulty to reject, or even cause troubles.
In my opinion, it is very hard to change the way how you deal with others to fit every individual ones.

元の翻訳
I think that you should send email again via your profile page.

I'm sorry if you don't understand what I mean. I'm not a native English speaker, which might make a communication a little bit difficult.

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I think that you ask them to send you an email again via your profile page.

I'm sorry if you don't understand what I mean. I'm not a native English speaker, which might make a communication a little bit difficult.

元の翻訳
First of all, you should get them send you emails from your profile page.

I apologize if you don't understand what I'm talking about. I'm not a native English speaker so I might not be able to express well.

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First of all, you should ask them to send you an email from your profile page.

I apologize if you don't understand what I'm talking about. I'm not a native English speaker so I might not be able to express well.

元の翻訳
This is my advice for the following article listed below. I apologize if it is not helpful for you.

If you handle in this way, I am sure that someone will try to purchase the inexpensive items by using the same means on purpose.
It is not fair for those who purchased the expensive items. ABC might also give a warning to you.
In any event, it is better to communicate with the users by e-mail.

I do not need your reply.

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This is my advice for the following article listed below. I apologize if it is not helpful for you.

If you handle in this way, I am sure that someone will try to purchase the inexpensive items by using the same means on purpose.
It is not fair for those who purchased the expensive items. ABC might also give a warning to you.
In any event, it is better to communicate with the users by e-mail directly.

I do not need your reply.

元の翻訳
This is an advice for the post below. I apologize in advance if I bother you.

I think there are going to be someone who tries to purchase cheap products by using the same way if you deal with it in that way.
Also, it's not fair for people who purchased expensive products. On top of that, I think there's a possibility that you are going to be told off by ABC.
Either way, I as one of the users think you should email directly.

You don't need to respond to this.

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This is an advice for the post below. I apologize in advance if I bother you.

I think there are going to be someone who tries to purchase cheap products by using the same way if you deal with it in that way.
Also, it's not fair for people who purchased expensive products. On top of that, I think there's a possibility that you are going to be warned by ABC.
Either way, you should contact users by emails directly.

You don't need to respond to this.

元の翻訳
We brought it to a nearby repair shop and even had it confirmed by the manufacturer, but we were informed that it cannot be repaired. There are a number of troubles that has occurred so we will stop selling this guitar.
We are very sorry. We hope you understand.
We will definitely contact you if I find another one.

Thank you for your usual support.
Tanaka and Shimatsui are both on vacation so I (Sakamoto) will be supporting you.
Since the product is extremely popular, an exact same guitar as the one in the photograph was already sold. But, we have already purchased and restock a few quantities so I am attaching the photograph.
The price excluding the shipping charge is $A.

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We brought it to a nearby repair shop and even had it confirmed by the manufacturer, but we were informed that it cannot be repaired. There are a number of troubles that can occur, so we will stop selling this guitar.
We are very sorry. We hope you understand.
We will definitely contact you if I find another one.

Thank you for your usual support.
Tanaka and Shimatsui are both on vacation so I (Sakamoto) will be supporting you.
Since the product is extremely popular, an exact same guitar as the one in the photograph was already sold. But, we have already purchased and restock a few quantities so I am attaching the photograph.
The price excluding the shipping charge is $A.

元の翻訳
I would like you to confirm your payment it's because the preparation for shipping is ready. I have set the handling time for three days. Within 3 days from the payment, I must send it until tomorrow so, you cannot cancel your purchase. from ebay, I will now be subjected for bad evaluation as a seller.It is also possible to keep a reserve to cancel once. We look forward to your contact.

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I am ready to ship as I have already confirmed your payment.↵
I have set the handling time for three days. Within 3 days from the payment, I must send it tomorrow so or you confirm a cancellation of your purchase, I would receive a negative feedback from ebay as a seller. It is also possible to keep a reserve after a cancellation once. We look forward to your contact.

元の翻訳
gu
Spedizioni e Resi
国際注文:
私たちは他国出荷の際はインターナショナル・エクスプレス・サービス (International Express Service)を使用しています。
私たちは商品に対して、発送料を請け負っています。
通常商品は注文を受けてから2日から3日で出荷されます。
出荷より5日から10日の稼働期間を要することを、ご了承ください。
9月から3月の間は、郵便サービスと税関の需要が高く、負荷が上がる為、追加の遅延が発生する場合があります。
総合配送時間
処理時間に荷造り時間を加えたものが、配送時間と等しくなります。
処理時間 (6時間)
これは、私たちがあなたからの注文を受け付けてから、荷造りを始めるまでの時間です。

あなたからの注文を確認するのに、2日の稼働日がかかります。　これには2日間の週末休暇は含みません。

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gu
Spedizioni e Resi
国際注文:
私たちは他国出荷の際はインターナショナル・エクスプレス・サービス (International Express Service)を使用しています。
私たちは商品に対して、発送料を請け負っています。
通常商品は注文を受けてから2日から3日で出荷されます。
出荷より5日から10日の営業日を要することを、ご了承ください。
9月から3月の間は、郵便サービスと税関の需要が高く、負荷が上がる為、さらなる遅延が発生する場合があります。
総合配送時間
処理時間に荷造り時間を加えたものが、配送時間と等しくなります。
処理時間 (6時間)
これは、私たちがあなたからの注文を受け付けてから、荷造りを始めるまでの時間です。

あなたからの注文を確認するのに、2営業日がかかります。　これには2日間の週末休暇は含みません。

元の翻訳
１．返金を受けるための返送先は、カスタマーサービスからお求めください。パッケージの外側に注文番号を明記してください。本番号が明記されない場合、本商品は、紛失または貴方へ返送されます。

２．返送伝票に返品する商品に○をつけ、返品理由をご記入ください。

３．商品を厳密に梱包してください。元の梱包の伝票がない場合、商品と共に
以下の情報を同封してください。
請求書ー氏名、住所及び電話番号
発送ー氏名、住所、電話番号、注文番号及び返品の理由

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１．返金を受けるための返送先は、カスタマーサービスへお問い合わせください。パッケージの外側に注文番号を明記してください。本番号が明記されない場合、本商品は、紛失しつぃまうか、または貴方へ返送されます。

２．返送伝票に返品する商品に○をつけ、返品理由をご記入ください。

３．商品を厳密に梱包してください。元の梱包の伝票がない場合、商品と共に
以下の情報を同封してください。
請求書ー氏名、住所及び電話番号
発送ー氏名、住所、電話番号、注文番号及び返品の理由