yujiro (yujiro) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I am glad that it arrived safely.I also read your e-mail. I'm not sure if you'll like it or not, but please enjoy it.
I wish your good health and good life.Keep in touch!

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I am glad that it arrived safely.I have read your e-mail. I'm not sure if you like it or not. I hope you enjoy it.
Wishing you a happy healthy long life. Keep in touch!

元の翻訳
I am glad that it arrived safely.I also read your e-mail. I'm not sure if you'll like it or not, but please enjoy it.
I wish your good health and good life.Keep in touch!

修正後
I am glad that it arrived safely.I also read your e-mail. I'm not sure if you'll like it or not, but please enjoy it.
I wish you a good health and good life.Keep in touch!

元の翻訳
It's been a long time. I am considering doing business with you.
Could you tell me the price of some items you treat now and which is sold well for Japanese people. I am especially interested in A. Looking forward your reply.

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It's been a long time. I am considering doing business with you.
Could you tell me the price of some items you handle now which sell well with Japanese people. I am especially interested in A. Looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
It's been a long time. I am considering doing business with you.
Could you tell me the price of some items you treat now and which is sold well for Japanese people. I am especially interested in A. Looking forward your reply.

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It's been a long time. I am considering doing business with you.
Could you tell me the price of some items you are currently handling and are selling well with Japanese people? I am especially interested in A. Looking forward for your reply.

元の翻訳
It's been a long time. I am considering doing business with you.
Could you tell me the price of some items you treat now and which is sold well for Japanese people. I am especially interested in A. Looking forward your reply.

修正後
It's been a long time. I am considering doing business with you.
Could you tell me the name and the price of the items that you sell well among Japanese people. I am especially interested in A. Looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
It's been a long time. I am considering doing business with you.
Could you tell me the price of some items you treat now and which is sold well for Japanese people. I am especially interested in A. Looking forward your reply.

修正後
It's been a while. I'd like to consider having business with you.
Could you tell me which is the best sold items for Japanese,and the price of the items that you have now.↵
I am especially interested in A. Looking forward for your reply. Thank you.