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元の翻訳
Only one in the world,we make the iPhone case just for you.
It is the custom-made which daringly cutting the kanji whatever you like at the whole back panel.
It is acceptable to use as many as three kanji.
If you are not sure about which kanji to use,according to the image you want to express,we can also offer proposal.
Enjoying the beauty of Japan,the unique presence which kanji possess.
Please understand it will be made by Japanese craftsman one at a time,and it takes time before delivery.

Accessory: Hexagon Wrench x1,Fixing Screws x4,Protection Film x1,Cleaner x1.

修正後
Only one in the world; we make this iPhone case just for you.
It is custom-made with whatever kanji you like daringly cut on the whole back panel.
It is acceptable to use as many as three kanji.
If you are not sure about which kanji to use, we can also offer suggestions based on the image you want to express,
Enjoy the beauty of Japan; the unique presence which kanji possess.
Please understand it will be made by Japanese craftsman one at a time and it will take time before delivery.

Accessory: Hexagon Wrench x1, Fixing Screws x4, Protection Film x1, Cleaner x1.

元の翻訳
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It appeared that there were mistakes in the entered contents of previous returning address,and it took time for the confirmation.However,the receipt of returned good was able to be confirmed today.
Just now,47.50 dollars equivalent to 50% of goods payment were repaid.
As for remaining 50% payment,since the returned good was assembled and painted by customer,the condition is different from the condition when we shipped it.It is considered as the handling charges.
As for the goods of tracking number A and B,These are parts of receiving returned goods we sold,the charge is zero.
About sending procedure,please reply to us about the process,regarding whom to send would be better.

修正後
It appeared that there were mistakes in the details entered for your previous return address and it took time for it to be confirmed. However, we were able to confirm the receipt of the returned goods today.
Just now we repaid $47.50 dollars, equivalent to 50% of the payment for the order.
As for the remaining 50%, since the returned good were assembled and painted by the customer, the condition is different from the condition when we shipped it so we are considering it to be a restocking fee.
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As for the tracking numbers for orders A and B, these were accepted as returns for items we sold so the charge is zero.
Please reply with instructions on who it would be best to process the shipping for.