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元の翻訳
We would like to purchase your products being sold at Amazon,
Can we get those at wholesale price?
Since we would like to purchase in large quantities, we are looking for a partner to do business with continuously.

If we get it at wholesale price, our initial order would be 100 pieces.
If we can transact continuously, I think we can order more than 200 pieces next time.

We are also looking for the following products.
Can you get these for us?

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We would like to purchase your products being sold at Amazon,
Can we get those at wholesale price?
Since we would like to purchase in large quantities, we are looking for a partner to do business with continuously.

If we get it at wholesale price, our initial order would be 100 pieces.
If we can transact continuously, I think we can order more than 200 pieces from the next time.

We are also looking for the following products.
Can you get these for us?

元の翻訳
Excuse me,I 'd like to buy this item.could you send it to Japan? If it's possible,please tell me the transportation expenses.Waiting for your reply.Thank you.

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Excuse me,I 'd like to buy this item with buy it now.could you send it to Japan? If it's possible,please tell me the transportation expenses.Waiting for your reply.Thank you.

元の翻訳
This is a small house called "Hokora" whose height is about 50cm and it imitates a building gods live.
It is mostly in shrines, at street corner, or in fields and gods of Shinto or Fox gods(Oinarisama) are worshiped in "Hokora".
And also it has been an Japanese worship object of many kinds of belief.
why don't you display it in your yard or room with an idol of fox(Oinarisama) or something else?
It represents peaceful belief so that you can ease your mind.
And "Hokora" from kyoto or kagoshima is very expensive which I was surprised after I have researched about "Hokora" and it costs about $900.
So it hardly be on the market and very difficult to obtain.

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This is a small house called "Hokora" whose height is about 50cm and it imitates a building gods live.
It is mostly in shrines, at street corner, or in fields and gods of Shinto or Fox gods(Oinarisama) are worshiped in "Hokora".
And also it has been an Japanese worship object of many kinds of belief.
Why don't you display it in your yard or room with an idol of fox(Oinarisama) or something else?
It represents peaceful belief so that you can ease your mind.
And "Hokora" from Kyoto or Kagoshima is very expensive which I was surprised after I have researched about "Hokora" and it costs about $900.
So it hardly be on the market and very difficult to obtain.

元の翻訳
From October,9th(Monday),2015 to March,28th (Monday),2016,we will organize a campaign.Anyone who purchases the object items during this period can get one programming guide (without tax 1000yen or less) free.if you are considering shipping,please take this opportunity.

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From October,9th(Monday),2015 to March,28th (Monday),2016,we will organize a campaign.Anyone who purchases the object items during this period can get one programming guide (without tax 1000yen or less) free.if you are considering purchasing ,please take this opportunity.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.
As the item we sent to you is the one imported from Japan, day of the watch is listed in Japanese.
We hate to say, but it does not have a function to switch it to English.
If you do not like it, you can return it to us.
If you request so, would you request returning from your history of purchasing?
As for shipping charge of returning the item, you pay for it first, and we will send Amazon gift certificate
for the shipping charge by PDF afterwards. We hope that you understand us.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
As the item we sent to you is the one imported from Japan, day of the watch is displayed in Japanese.
We hate to say, but it does not have a function to switch it to English.
If you do not like it, you can return it to us.
If you request so, would you request returning from your history of purchasing?
As for shipping charge of returning the item, you pay for it first, and we will send Amazon gift certificate
for the shipping charge by PDF afterwards. We hope that you understand us.