Tearz (tearz) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for visiting our store.

We have just started up and are happy to serve you.
We purchased most of our products in Japan. We pack our goods thoroughly and ship them quickly. If you are looking for anything, please feel free to ask us.

修正後
Thank you for visiting our store.

We have just started up and are happy to serve you.
We purchased most of our products in Japan. ↵
We pack our goods thoroughly and ship them quickly. ↵
If you are looking for anything, please feel free to contact us.

元の翻訳
Re-enter the same password.
When you check this you'll receive new project information on Kickstarter.
Move on to the next window after typing 'Sign me UP!'
--Click 'Me' on the upper right corner.
--Click 'Edit Settings' in the menu.
--Select either Osaka, Sapporo, or Tokyo in 'Time zone' and click 'Save settings.'
When you choose your location, the deadline for projects will be shown in the Japanese Standard Time. It's easier to recognise.

修正後
Re-enter the same password.
When you enter a tick, you'll receive new project information on Kickstarter.
Move on to the next window after clicking 'Sign me UP!'
--Click 'Me' on the upper right corner.
--Click 'Edit Settings' from menu.
--Select either Osaka, Sapporo, or Tokyo from 'Time zone' and click 'Save settings.'
When you choose your location, the deadline for projects will be shown in the Japanese Standard Time. It's easier to recognise.

元の翻訳
My apologies.
The keyword ''Gibson'' which confused you accidentally got into the title of the product.
This guitar is made by the Japanese manufacturer CMS.
It is not a Gibson, so if you made the bid thinking it was a Gibson Les Paul I will cancel the bid for you.

It however goes without saying that the guitar is of very good quality and the sound is wonderful. It's a Japanese high quality guitar. Even when compared to Gibson guitars of the same price it doesn't lose.

My apologies for the inconvenience, but please let me know what you think.

修正後
My apologies.
The keyword ''Gibson'' which confused you accidentally got into the title of the product.
This guitar is made by the Japanese manufacturer called CMS.
It is not a Gibson, so if you made the bid thinking it was a Gibson Les Paul we will cancel the bid for you.

It however goes without saying that the guitar is of very good quality and the sound is wonderful. It's a Japanese high quality guitar. Even when compared to Gibson guitars of the same price it doesn't lose.

My apologies for the inconvenience, but please let me know what you think.

元の翻訳
I would like to purchase 50 pieces.
Please send it to the following address.

I would like to use Pay Pal for this payment.
PayPal address:
Please send me the invoice.

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I would like to purchase 50 pieces.
Please send it to the following address.

I would like to use Pay Pal for this payment.
My PayPal address:
Please send me the invoice.

元の翻訳
I'll buy 50.
I'd like you to send to the following address:

I use PayPal.
PayPal address :
Please send an invoice.

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I'll buy 50 pieces.
Please ship to the following address:

I use PayPal for my payment.
My PayPal address :
Please send an invoice to me.

元の翻訳
I'd like to have 50.
Please send them following address.

I'll pay for you by Paypal.↵
Address of PayPal:
Please send me invoice.

修正後
I'd like to purchase 50 pieces.
Please send them to the following address.

I'd like to use PayPal for my payment.↵
My PayPal address:
Please send me an invoice.

元の翻訳
I will purchase 50.
Please send it to the following address.

I will pay through Paypal.
My Paypal address:
Please send me an invoice.

修正後
I will purchase 50 pieces.
Please send it to the following address.

I will pay through Paypal.
My Paypal address:
Please send me an invoice.