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If I get the unordered item, I will send it back to you. This is our business between you and me. The person you mentioned of Southern California has nothing to do with me. If you sent my item to Southern California by mistake, please get it from the person and send it to me for sure.

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If I get the unordered item, I will send it back to you. This is our business between you and me. The person you mentioned of Southern California has nothing to do with me. If you sent my item to Southern California by mistake, please get it from the person and send it to me once again.

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I'm sorry for the late response.

It is possible to put letters onto the items but only alphabets.
I'm afraid we can not put your country's letters.

What wiuld you do?

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I'm sorry for the late response.

It is possible to put letters onto the items but only in alphabets.
I'm afraid we can not put your country's letters.

What would you like to do with it?

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The items arrived tomorrow after it was being trapped in Nagoya Port for some time.

We are still examining some of the items but have checked several of them.
There are some problems remaining with the items but I feel their quality has been quite improved.
Thanks for efforts of your team.
After finishing examination of all items, I will contact you again.

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The items arrived tomorrow（昨日） after it was being trapped in Nagoya Port for some time.

We are still inspecting some of the items but have checked several of them.
There are some problems remaining with the items but I feel their quality has been quite improved.
Thanks for your efforts.
まだすべての検品が終わっていないので、After finishing examination of all items, I will contact you again.

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As for the product, it took some time in Nagoya Port and finally arrived yesterday.

Although it's in the middle of the inspection, we have checked some of the products.
Even though there are still a little problems, we think the quality has quite a lot improvement.
We appreciate for your hard work.
As the inspection is not over, we will contact you after that.

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As for the product, it took some time in Nagoya Port but has finally arrived yesterday.

Although it's in the middle of inspection, we have checked some of the products.
Even though there are still a little problems, we think the quality has improved quite a lot.
We appreciate your hard work.
As the inspection is not over yet, we will contact you after that.

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Harajyuku has many unique fashion things and the symbol of that fashion is Carry pamyupamyu. The store she often go called 6%dokidoki that is unique and you can enjoy just watching around and you might get only what they have.

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Harajuku has many unique fashion things and the fashion icon is Carry pamyupamyu（ネットなどで英語表記確認してみてください）. The store she often goes is called 6%DOKIDOKI that is unique and you can enjoy just browsing around and the items that you see at the store cannot be found elsewhere.

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．make a Pay Pal payment
．nummber of lot - 50
．price - 72＄

Is the above condition OK?
Please let me know the delivery time.

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．Make a direct purchase through PayPal
．Lot quantity- 50 pieces
．Price - $72

Are the above conditions okay with you?
Please let me know how much time you need for the delivery time.

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- Purchase directly using payPal
- The lot has 50 pieces
- The price is USD 72.

Is the condition above fine with you?
Please let me know how much time is needed for the delivery.

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- Purchase directly via payPal
- The quantity of the lot is 50 pieces
- The price is USD 72.

Are the conditions above fine with you?
Please let me know how much time is needed for the delivery.

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・Purchase directly by PayPal
・Unit amount: 50
・Price: 72 dollars

Is the information enough as above?
Please let us know how long the payment period is.

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・Purchase directly via PayPal
・Lot amount: 50 pcs
・Price: 72 dollars

Do the above condictions suffice the requirement?
Please let us know how much time you need for the leadtime.

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I checked and found that it was able to play the Vevo video in my own website. (Even though I was using old version script.)
Will error occur causing by country? It will be better if the videos of Vevo can be played successfully.

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I checked and found that I was able to play the Vevo video on my own website (though I use an old version script).
Wouldn't an error occur depends on countries? It will be better if the videos of Vevo can be played successfully, right?

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I have confirmed that I could play the video of Vevo in my website, the script for it was old version though.
I wonder if it would not "an error has occurred" according to countries ? If you can play Vevo video , I imagine it would be better.

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I have confirmed that I could play the video of Vevo on my website (I use the older script version, though).
I wonder if an error does not occurr depending on countries ? If Vevo video can be played, it would be better, wouldn't it?

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I purchased S from you before.
i would like to purchase 10pcs this time.
Is it possible to discount for 10pcs order?

Look forward to hear from you soon.

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I am S purchased goods from you before.
I would like to purchase 10pcs of this product this time.
Is it possible to ask you for a bold discount for it, please?

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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Then, please tell me the wholesale pricing in case I purchase more than 50 pieces.

I understood.
Then, how many pieces do I need to buy if I want a 15% discount?
Also, as for the quantity terms on purchase, is it necessary to satisfy the condition by buying only one kind of items?
Or is it possible to buy more than two kinds of items and offer the discount?

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Then, please tell me the wholesale pricing in the case I purchase more than 50 pieces.

I understood.
Then, how many pieces do I need to buy if I want a 15% discount?
Also, as for the quantity terms on purchase, is it necessary to satisfy the condition by buying only one kind of items?
Or is it possible to buy more than two kinds to receive the discount?

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Thank you as always.
I appreciated your arrangement of changing the address.
I understand about the cost of CRC16-1.
If the cost is changed, shouldn't it be corrected on B2B shop as well ?

I have already paid just now, so please confirm and make an arrangement to ship.
Best regards.

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Thank you as always.
I appreciate your arrangement of changing the address.
I understand about the cost of CRC16-1.
If the cost is changed, shouldn't the one listed on B2B shop be revised as well ?

I have already paid just now, so please confirm and proceed with the shipping.
Best regards,

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Thanks for your help.

I thank you for helping me change my address.

I understand matters concering the rice of CRC16-1.
I believe that when prices have changed, the coresponding prices shown at B2B shop should be corrected accordingly.

I have just made my payment. Please confirm it and prepare for its shipment.

Best regards

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Thanks for your help.

I thank you for helping me change my address.

I understand matters concering the ｐrice of CRC16-1.
If the price is going to be modified, shouldn't the listed price at the B2B shop be revised accordingly?

I have just made my payment. Please confirm it and proceed with shipment.

Best regards,

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Thank you always.

Thanks for arranging the address change.

I understood about CRC16-1 price.
If the price changes, price indicated in B2B shop also should be corrected.

I just made payment so please kindly check and arrange shipment.

Thank you.

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Thank you as always.

Thanks for taking care of the address change request.

I understood about the price for CRC16-1.
If the price changes, shouldn't be the price indicated in B2B shop also be corrected?

I have made the payment just a while ago, so please kindly check and arrange the shipment.

Thank you.

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Thank you for the reply. Is it possible for me to have more than 5% discount? If the discount rate could be driven by the volume, would you please send me a table illustrating the volume and the appropriate discount rate as below?

Example:
5 units: 5%
10 units: 8%
20 units: 10%

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How many units do I have to purchase per order? Please advise the minimum order volume.

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Thank you for the reply. Is it possible for me to have more than 5% discount? If the discount rate could be driven by the volume, would you please let me know the quantity and the corresponding discount rate as below?

Example:
5 units: 5%
10 units: 8%
20 units: 10%

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How many units do I have to purchase per order? Please advise the minimum lot quantity.

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小包の表書きにどう書きますか？　輸送料込みで90以下でなければならないことを忘れずに、最低価格を書いてください。10, 20, 30, 40, または50ならば問題ないのですが、低価格のほうが税関検査のためには良いのです。

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小包の表書きにいくらと書いていただけますか？送料込みで90以下でなければならないことを忘れずに、最低価格を書いてください。10, 20, 30, 40, または50ならば税関上問題ないのですが、低価格のほうが税関検査のためには良いのです。

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あなたはその郵便小包をいくらと書くことができますか？あなたの最低料金を書いてください。しかしそれは送料を入れて90以下でなければいけません。 もしあなたが、10-20-30-40-50と書くことができるなら関税には問題ありません。関税検査には低料金のほうが良いです。

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あなたはその郵便小包をいくらと書くことができますか？最低料金を書いていただきたいのですが、それは送料を入れて90以下にすることをお忘れなく。 もし10-20-30-40-50と書いていただけるようなら税関上問題ありません。税関検査には申告金額が低いほうが良いのです。

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ポストパケットにどのぐらいの金額が書かれるでしょうか？↵
出荷のために記載される金額は90以下を忘れず、最低の金額を書いてください。↵
10、20、30、40、50での金額と問題がありませんが、価格は安いほどカスタムの検査に対するのがメリットがあります。

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郵便小包にどのぐらいの金額を記入して頂けるのでしょうか？出荷のために記載される金額は90以下未満にすることを忘れず、最低の金額を書いてください。10、20、30、40、50の金額を書いていただければ税関の問題はありませんが、価格は安ければ税関の検査がうまく行きます。

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郵便小包にいくらと書けますか?最低金額を書いてください。しかし、配送料込みで９０未満にすることを忘れないでください。10-20-30-40-50と書けるなら関税の問題はありませんが、低い金額の方が税関のチェックでは好都合です。

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郵便小包にはいくらと書いていただけますか?最低金額を書いていただきたいのですが、配送料込みで90未満にすることを忘れないでください。10-20-30-40-50と書けるなら税関の問題はありませんが、金額は低い方が税関のチェックでは好都合です。