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We have placed your ordered item to EPSON, however we were informed that the item is currently out of stock and its next shippment schedule will not be any time after September. We have also tried to allocate the available inventory from the partner shops, however we could not find one for you. Please accept our apologies for the inconvenience caused.

You could either await till the next shipment or cancel the order. Which would be good for you?

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We have placed your ordered item to EPSON, however we were informed that the item is currently out of stock and its next shipment schedule will not be any time before September. We have also tried to allocate the available inventory from the partner shops, however we could not find one for you. Please accept our apologies for the inconvenience caused.

You could either await till the next shipment or cancel the order. Which would be good for you?

元の翻訳
We have placed your ordered item to EPSON, however we were informed that the item is currently out of stock and its next shippment schedule will not be any time after September. We have also tried to allocate the available inventory from the partner shops, however we could not find one for you. Please accept our apologies for the inconvenience caused.

You could either await till the next shipment or cancel the order. Which would be good for you?

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We have placed the order of the item you've purchased to EPSON which is a maker of it, however, we've got informed that it's out of stock and its shipment will not be before September. ↵
We have asked our partner shops to ship one in stock forward to us for help, too, but we've been told that it's out of stock at every one of them. ↵
We apologize from the bottom of our hearts.

You could either wait until we ship it after receiving it or cancel the order. Which would be good for you?

元の翻訳
The best thing for me would be to see you enjoying the event.
As a sign of my gratitude, I would like to give you one of ◯'s book with his autograph... do you know him?

My eczema hasn't been much better, but I try to make improvements by switching my diet and clothings to those of natural materials. In order to mitigate the work stress, I have decided to quit one of my jobs I juggle. It would hurt me financially, but I cannot trade my health for it.

I have managed to reserve for 3 DVDs at ◇. No worries, I will get them for sure. I just can't wait to have you watch the movie!

◯ is very popular in Japan, too.
Would there be an independent volume of the movie introduced at the Japan EXPO in France?

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The best thing for me would be to see you enjoying the event.
As a sign of my gratitude, I would like to give you an autographed copy of ◯'s book. Do you know him?

My skin rash is not getting much better (?), but I try to make improvements by switching my diet and clothes to those of natural materials. In order to mitigate the work stress, I have decided to quit one of my jobs I juggle. It would hurt me financially, but I cannot trade my health for it.

I have managed to pre-ordered 3 DVDs at ◇. No worries, I will get them for sure. I just can't wait to have you watch the movie!

◯ is very popular in Japan, too.
Would there be an independent volume of the movie introduced at Japan Expo in France?

元の翻訳
sp1511

このアイテムは既に完了ですか？部品やアクセサリに欠品はありませんね？ご連絡よろしくお願いします。

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sp1511

このアイテムは完全な商品ですか？部品やアクセサリに欠品はありませんね？ご連絡よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
弊社は米国企業で、御社の製品に大変興味を持っております。御社との末永いお付き合いをさせて頂けたらと存じます。弊社はあわせて購買とサプライチェーン企業でもあり、多くのチェーン店や小売アウトレットなどにも取引がございます。品質は弊社にとって大変重要な要素であることは言うまでもありません。下記は御社専用に作成させて頂いた共有ファイルへのリンクで、必要な数量とサンプル写真などを含めた弊社の注文内容の詳細が入っております。

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弊社は米国企業で、御社の製品に大変興味を持っております。御社との末永いお付き合いをさせて頂けたらと存じます。弊社はあわせて購買とサプライチェーン企業でもあり、多くのチェーン店や小売店などとも取引がございます。品質は弊社にとって大変重要な要素であることは言うまでもありません。下記は御社専用に作成させて頂いた共有ファイルへのリンクで、必要な数量とサンプル写真などを含めた弊社の注文内容の詳細が入っております。

元の翻訳
1.　全ての部品を床に置く
2.　ベースにクロスバーをつなげる
3.　ボルトをしっかりと固定する
4.　ハンモックの枠の棒をベースにつなげる
5.　ボルトをしっかりと固定する
6.　フックとワッシャーをハンモックのサイズに合わせて適切な穴に挿入する
7.　ウィングナットを固定してフックを固定する
8.　写真のようにハンモックをつるして最初に荷重したときに少したわむように設定する。ハンモックの伸び幅を調整する
9.　注意：　大人がそばにいないときは子供たちだけでブランコとして遊ばせないこと。2本のベースレッグの間に必ずハンモックを入れておくこと。ベースレッグを超えたあたりには座らないこと。定期的にフックとねじがきちんと固定されているか確認すること。

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1.　全ての部品を床に置く
2.　土台にクロスバーをつなげる
3.　ボルトをしっかりと固定する
4.　ハンモックの枠の棒を土台につなげる
5.　ボルトをしっかりと固定する
6.　フックとワッシャーをハンモックのサイズに合わせて適切な穴に挿入する
7.　ウィングナットを固定してフックを固定する
8.　写真のようにハンモックをつるして最初に荷重したときに少したわむように設定する。ハンモックの伸び幅を調整する
9.　注意：　大人がそばにいないときは子供たちだけでブランコとして遊ばせないこと。2本のベースレッグの間に必ずハンモックを入れておくこと。土台の足を超えたあたりには座らないこと。定期的にフックとねじがきちんと固定されているか確認すること。

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As per described in my previous mail to you, the very part I am pointing out cannot be changed with the file. I know better than that. Does my explanation about the contents make any sense to you? If you still believe you could change it, please prove it to me.

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As I described in my previous mail, the very part I am pointing out cannot be changed with the file. I know that. Does my explanation about the contents not make sense to you? If you still believe you could change it, please prove it to me.

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I am sorry for the duplicated emails.
I would like to change the value of :attribute in abc.php from English to Japanese. Kindly let me know which file I should modify with the change.
*Kindly find the attached images for your information.
Best regards,

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I am sorry for the frequent emails.
I would like to change the value of :attribute in abc.php from English to Japanese. Kindly let me know which file I should modify.
*Kindly find the attached images for your information.
Best regards,

元の翻訳
Total 133 pages (including 108 illustration in total)
"Yukiguni", the immortal work of Hiroshi Hamaya has received internationally high reputations for his documentary work that was painstakingly recorded over many years in the climate, manners, and customs of the snowy district. Let alone its scarcity value for its first edition, his autograph adds priceless value to it.

The book has total of 5 library stamps since it has been long kept as an university reference. The condition is not so good with overall spots, stains, and burnts. A pastic cover is attached to the book (it does not come off). Its overall exterior is not in good condition, however the drawing is fine for appreciation.

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Total 133 pages (including 108 illustrations in total)
"Yukiguni," the immortal work of Hiroshi Hamaya, has received internationally high reputations for his documentary work that was painstakingly recorded over many years in the climate, manners, and customs of the snowy district. Besides its scarcity value for its first edition, his autograph adds a priceless value to it.

The book has total of 5 library stamps since it has been long kept as a university reference. The condition is not so good with overall spots, stains, and burnts [spelling]. A pastic [spelling] cover is attached to the book (it does not come off). Its overall exterior is not in good condition, [comma splice] however the drawing is fine for appreciation.

元の翻訳
Dear LA SIESTA,

Thank you for your continued service.

This is to notify the completion of my payment for those invoices dated on 12th and 16th.
Kindly proceed with the shipment.

Yours sincerely,

Saori Hasegawa

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Dear LA SIESTA,

Thank you for your continued service.

This is to notify the completion of my payment for those invoices I received on 12th and 16th.
Kindly proceed with the shipment.

Yours sincerely,

Saori Hasegawa

元の翻訳
We have received the item you have shipped for me the other day.

Please allow me to confirm one thing about the product.
Is it correct to understand that the ink cartridge that you sent me is not a recycled item of the manufacturer's reproduction, but an interchangeable item copied from the manufacturer's?

As I confirmed, it seems that the interchangeable items are not allowed to be sold in Japan.
How is the patent related paperworks are taken care of with regard to the subject product?

Do you also deal with the recycled items?

Thank you for your reply in advance.

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We have received the item you shipped for me the other day.

Please allow me to confirm one thing about the product.
Is it correct to understand that the ink cartridge you sent me is not a recycled item of the manufacturer's reproduction, but an interchangeable item copied from the manufacturer's?

As I confirmed, it seems that interchangeable items are not allowed to be sold in Japan.
How is the patent related paperwork are taken care of with regard to the subject product [ungrammatical]?

Do you also deal with recycled items?

Thank you for your reply in advance.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
This item will be shipped from Japan.

We will arrange the item so that no tarrif will occur on the way.
Upon your purchase, the shipment will be processed immediately.
Thank you and best regards.

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Thank you for your message.
We will ship this item from Japan.

We will arrange the item so that no tarrif [spelling] will occur on the way.
Upon your purchase, the shipment will be processed immediately.
Thank you and best regards.